on Jul 30, 2011 03:08 pm
i loved it
on Jul 07, 2010 07:00 pm
Ah, stupid Draco! I was kind of hoping Lavender was saying all those things because she was secretly trying to set them up. Guess not...
on Apr 17, 2009 10:36 am
I really love how she turned her back on her relationship with them. I don't care how much I like D/G, I love that Ginny had the spine to do the right thing and get out.
on Mar 14, 2009 11:46 am
Wow. This is a very well-written story. The ending was much more different than I had expected it to be. I wonder that Ginny is able to suddenly break off what she has with Draco, especially since she now has a greater 'claim' on him due to being pregnant with his child. She's been feeling guilt for months, how come it is now that she breaks things off?
Other than that, I really liked the style of the story. Ginny's point of view was just the right combination of narrative and dialogue. Kudos for making me like Lavender (someone who I didn't really hold high esteem for in the books) so much so that I disliked Ginny's cheating with Lavender's boyfriend, even if it is our beloved D/G ship.
All in all, a great fic!
on Jan 24, 2008 06:26 pm
Yikes. You know how o make someoe want a happy ending, but not know what that happy ending would be. Very nicely written.
on Aug 01, 2007 10:39 am
loved it! it was amazing! also, love the line about being a magnet for unavailable men. is it from the wedding planner? anyways, i will just add onto what other people are saying.... SEQUEL PLEASE! :)
on Jun 10, 2007 10:17 pm
Wow.. this story was intense. I really liked it even though the ending was kind of.. well I wanted to see Draco's thoughts on the situation. These kinds of things are always tricky. Anyway, I hope you do a sequel to this, because there's so many things left hanging! :)
Rae Rihanna reviewed Guilt
on Jun 10, 2007 01:13 pm
WHAT?! Oh come now, you've got to give me more than that! Great chapter, but please tell me they end up together! UPDATE!
Name: hawaiian techno
on Jun 09, 2007 05:58 am
Yay! I wish it wasn't completed though! maybe you could make a sequel?
on Jun 07, 2007 09:08 am
this is upstting and sad.
but obviously i like it ALOT otherwise i wouldn't comment.
i just wanted to say not only was it well written but i think its really good plot tooo :D
different for once XD
Ananyamous reviewed Guilt
on Jun 06, 2007 02:09 pm
I love the foreshadowing----they way she tells it as a regret. It's a good fic and the ending was so great. I was almost crying. Thanks!
on Jun 06, 2007 09:00 am
aw.. i hope you do a follow up or something.. the pink-haired baby plug was cute too by the way. I loved it.. Very realistic.
on Jun 06, 2007 06:50 am
Wow...What a shocker for when this child will be born...I mean it will be obvious to who the father is. Then what... Jerry Springer drama is what will happen. Great one-shot. Post something else soon...
on Jun 06, 2007 03:08 am
BLOODY. BRILLIANT. Throughout the whole thing, I was constantly shaking my head like "No no no no no no NO! You can't DO THIS to YOUR FRIEND! It likes, breaks the rules of girl world!" ARGH MEN! I place the blame on men! Purposely flirtting with your girlfriend's bestfriend!
I have just encountered a situation just like this fic and really, men are scum of the earth! Even if they look like a Greek God!!!
on Jun 06, 2007 03:04 am
wow, that was one of the best one-shots i've read in a long time! is there any chance of a sequel??
on Jun 06, 2007 02:27 am
I would love to see an epilouge to this story. I want to know what happens with Ginny and the baby, Draco and Lavender and Ginny and Lavender...
on Jun 06, 2007 12:11 am
But what about the baby? Legally, she can't stop him from seeing and claiming the baby. And what will she do when Lavender starts asking questions about who the father is or when it looks like Draco or anything like that. Either way, she is still hurting Lavender. She should have given him the chance to dump Lavender because whether he does or doesn't, she has hurt a friend in an unspeakable way and that won't change. Lavender will probably never talk to her again and will probably break up with Draco, so what is Ginny really gaining? Nothing. Well, I liked your story up until the end, although morally I can't agree with any of it and I should hope beyond all hope that I would never betray a friend like that. In either case, it was extremely well written, as your work always is.
Author's Response: Well, I tried to leave those questions up to the readers' pondering imaginations. ;) But I am considering a sequel, depending on the amount of time I have.rnrnIn any case, I'm glad you liked it! :)
on Jun 05, 2007 06:56 pm
on Jun 05, 2007 06:24 pm
amazing. even though it was a short read, it was really good. keep it up!
dgloves70 reviewed Guilt
on Jun 05, 2007 06:22 pm
I am sad and feel like she knew all along that this was going to happen to them at the end.
Well written and yes a great one piece on my favorite couple - Draco and Ginny!
ContessaNatasha reviewed Guilt
on Jun 05, 2007 06:13 pm
I loved it. It was real, painful, yet somehow angst free.
Things don't always work out, and this really showed that. It is not happily ever after, but it is not depressing, either. It is just... real.
Anonymous reviewed Guilt
on Jun 05, 2007 05:48 pm
OMG! Draco! Get up and RUN after he. OMGOMG GET UP YOU STUPID FERRET. UPUPUP!
oh damn, I thought this was gonna be like a happy ending, oh well, nice twist ;)
Name: Rosy Denz
on Jun 05, 2007 04:37 pm
That was amazing! It was bloody brilliant (excuse my language). It was well written and realistic, as I could totally see that happening. I was laughing out loud in the beginning.
This might sound dumb, but I didn't get the joke about the five and seven when Ginny was doing push ups. Could you perhaps spell it out for me? I'm uber embarrased about asking that.
Anyways, a wonderful chapter, although a bit sad that the ending wasn't DG fluffiness. Thanks so much for writing this!
Author's Response: Haha, the joke was about...um...size. I'll leave you to figure it out from there. ;)