Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 16, 2010 01:42 am
Good for Ginny.
Name: elsbeth22 reviewed Chapter 1 on May 23, 2008 06:24 pm
I know this will sound sick, but that was marvelous. Especially your last line. It captures Draco so well...and I must say that from a linguistic (and slightly sadistic) standpoint I trully enjoyed that.
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 25, 2008 10:20 am
man that was cruel..but gud work..
Name: nyc23 reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 09, 2008 01:00 pm
oh this absolutely brilliant. well written, well thought out, and the marration at the last paragraph, was very clever. i think there should be a prologue of chapters as to how ginny ended up as draco's slave. anyways, great job. :)
Name: samantha reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 13, 2007 12:48 pm
Normally, I don't go for this type of fic. I much prefer the fluff, the all-kinds-of-happy fic. :]

And originally I stumbled over here because of a podcast I'd hurd part of; I was curious as to how the story would end even though I'd shut it off (because abusive!Draco generally sends me running in the other direction). I was just curious. I didn't really expect to like it, honestly.

But, dude, I was wrong. Your writing style is too lovely to ignore, and it's very disturbing in an impressive way that most folks can't pull off. Draco seemed truly threatening & perfectly insane. The way you wove his character was a lovely creation of your own.

Along with your way of words and creepy imagery that can draw a shudder from even the least easily scared, most unaffected of people, the ending truly made me fall in love with this.

And even though reading this again is probably going to give me nightmares, I can tell already that it is going to become one of those fics that I can't forget about. Lovely and disturbing.
Name: arabella reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 04, 2007 05:48 pm
As noted before, definitely dark, but also a good portrayal of Draco. His character is dark, and I love when authors actually write him that way. He does not come across as a nice person.
His spoiled nature also comes in here, which I love. I really admire the way you threw so many elements of him in such a brief story. Keep it up!
Name: KatherineGrace reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 07, 2007 01:22 pm
very nice.

Author's Response: I'm not sure "nice" really describes my Draco, but I appreciate the sentiment. Thanks!
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 06, 2007 01:52 pm
Wow. Have I ever said before how sick, twisted, disgusting, and oddly intruiging your Draco is? This was wonderfully dark. I love how you made Draco so sophisticated through the whole thing. And the last line just made me shiver. Infact this whole story gave me goose bumps. Absolutely amazing dear! Please write more soon!

Author's Response: Anything for a fellow angst fangirl, especially one who understands and appreciates the dark side of Draco's soul.rnI made you shiver? Awesome! I'll do my best to write more shiver-inducing stuff when inspiration strikes.
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 10:46 pm

I loved it!

Author's Response: Cheers, EB. Nice to know it works for other people, and not just in my head. :D
Name: darkloveangel reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 09:48 pm
very sad tho...i read it then i suddenly got it and i felt really sad!
but a great story never the less!
Love Theresa

Author's Response: Sick as it may sound, if the fic made you sad, it did what it was meant to do. Thanks for your review and lovely compliments :D
Name: Scarlett Rayne reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 04:04 pm
Wow, Miran. It's dark but that was to be expected. It was also very well written as are all of your fics. Normally fluff is my fic of choice but this was a great fic. The last line was truly depressing and that'd eb the point, right?

Author's Response: If it left your heart bleeding and blackened on the floor, then I achieved my objective. Nice to see you come over to the dark side, even if it's just for a visit. Thanks for your review, sweety!
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 03:56 pm
So dark. So lovely.

You did it again, Miran. Not many people can write dark fics like you can. Some people say morbid, I say beautiful. Gods, I am starting to sound dark myself...

Anyways, I am glad you finally posted this here. Another dark fic to add to my collection!

Author's Response: Yes, Tasha, come to the dark side! There's chocolate and vodka and deliciously twisted boys! Maybe it's a good thing that most people don't write fics like me; the world would be a scary place, no? So glad you liked it. Now I just have to work on more dark stuff to convert you fully to our evil, twisty ways.
Name: Ananyamous reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 12:30 pm
As magnificently creepy as Slave, this fic has a wonderful, haunting feeling.

Author's Response: I can't tell you how flattered I am that you feel this is comparable with Slave! Glad you enjoyed it.
Name: lovecatherine reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 10:30 am
I usually enjoy reading the fluffiest of fluff, but I feel like this brought out the darker side of Draco and I liked it. Well, the sick side of my mind did. It was very well written. =)

Author's Response: Thankyou!rnI write some fluff too, but the sick side of me enjoys pulling everyone down into the angsty dark with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that you were willing to read something outside your usual preference! Cheers :D
Name: felicitas reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 10:19 am
If my frien doesn't see all the D/G potential here, I don't know what would. This story has a  Clockwork Orange feeling that keeps punching my guts long after reading it. The part that I love the best is the final sentence. You've said it, this Draco is unredeemable, but brilliant. 

Author's Response: *hugs feli*rnWell, I hope I help convinced your friend! I've not seen A Clockwork Orange, but if it's anything like my fics, I'll have to check it out. I'm glad you appreciate him, twisted and all...
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 10:10 am
Truly evil look of how Ginny is a toy for Draco. HHmmmm, all evil boys love to obsess over things they love so very much. Reminds me of the Bugs Bunny episode with the big oaf hugging to death Bugs and saying "I am going to hug him, love him and name him George"
AKA, I loved it!

Author's Response: "Truly evil"? You do flatter me!rnLike you said, she's a toy to him. He objectifies her so that he may possess her all the more.rnGlad you enjoyed it!
Name: spider reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 05, 2007 09:43 am
Wow, that was dark; but very well written. The thing that creeped me out more than anything was that he just left her body there; I suppose he'll "dispose" of it later.

Nice one (if this sort of story can be considered "nice").

Author's Response: Oh no, he's walked away and left the mess. That's what he's got house elves for, after all.rnrnNice to see you over here on the dark side. :D
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