Name: Boogum reviewed *** third wish *** on May 03, 2010 07:32 pm
I loved the muffin scene!
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 25, 2008 05:47 pm

I love this story! Ginny and Draco are so much in character, and its amazinggggggggggg.

I love you. Please keep writing.
Name: soundspretty reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 24, 2008 03:58 am
The last bit about the muffin made me smile :) Can't wait for more!
Name: chiara13 reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 05:32 pm
Awesome story and I'm getting really into it. Liking the easy camaradery they seem to be starting to enjoy, the way that they both seem to be helping the other to change, to grow, to become more open and I'm especially loving the humorous tidbits that being said as nice as all of that sounds I'm totally freaked out and sooo sooo afraid of all these joyous little moments because even though it's nothing too obvious or overwhelming the undertones and the plot of the fic itself just keep me on my toes waiting for the other shoe to drop!! Please update soon
Name: Kizei reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 10:33 am
This is so cute! Draco, actually caring enough to help Hermione get pregnant. Awesome story!

Even better, Ginny deciding to get Draco a blueberry muffin :D so cute!
Name: Katmillia reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 23, 2008 08:53 am
I LOVE this fic, and loved this installment of it. It was just perfect, what Ginny is wishing for, and oh you've captured everything perfectly here. I can't wait for you to continue with this. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 22, 2008 05:45 pm
aw cute! i absolutely love this story!!!!! like lovelovelovelove!!!!!
Name: thenilaughed reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 22, 2008 04:58 pm
Interesting take on artificial insemination, although I don't agree with Ginny's viewpoint. It seemed a bit irrational of her to me to be so upset at a doctor who advised adoption.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 09:41 pm
Wow, good for Draco.
Name: Cheezie_Biscuit reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 09:02 pm
His story was so sweet until he ruined it with the end...
Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 05:03 pm
lol the buleberry muffun thing is a bit ...well just there in the story but i liked the ending line which sorta tied it in a bit and the conversation between draco and ginny about her wish was funny but really "how many accidental Malfoy bastards are there?” lol
Name: TwilightsDawn reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 06:55 am
I LOVE the variation on JKR's world that you've created here. Though I can't quite figure out why Draco offered seven wishes in exchange for Ginny's soul, I'm sure the reasoning will come clear in future chapters. Draco's desire to have Ginny wish things for herself fits perfectly with his 'me first' world view, and Ginny's stalling with wishes for other people makes a lot of sense because she doesn't seem like she knows what she wants!

I love how you're building up a relationship and attraction between the two of them so slowly and subtly, especially in the flashback. This is one of my favourite lines:

"She looked good, more refined and delicate, yet somehow she appeared stronger than before. It was a paradox, but then, so was she, and he assumed it was all right. The auburn however looked better than the singed orange she carried back in school, but, oh, it all didn’t seem to matter in the least because she was stealing his muffin!"

The last bit where Draco gets distracted from his contemplations by his original goal (the muffin!) is just perfect.

Another thing I love: your portrayal of Ron and Hermione. Their relationship was my path into the HP fandom and way too many D/G stories either have H/H and/or make Ron into an evil, incompetent oaf. I hope to see more of your lovable Ron in future chapters! Hermione's characterization in this chapter is wonderful. I like how yelling is her response to someone else figuring out an answer, and how she is 'prissy' in describing what happened after the unicorn milk, and her tragic yearning for a child, though I don't understand what she has against adoption.

I can't wait to see how you build D/G's relationship in future chapters, and I hope to see more R/H too! :)
Name: cocacolanicky reviewed *** third wish *** on Jun 21, 2008 06:22 am
I love this story =) Each new chapter makes me smile to myself. I loved the little flashback scene in the middle, it was so Draco to play on her Gryffindor tendencies, lol. Wonderful chapter, as per usual with you =)
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