Name: Len reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jan 05, 2011 07:37 am
Poor Draco, it was so obvious that he wasn't talking about Luna back there....
Name: DaisiesButterMellow reviewed *** fourth wish *** on May 05, 2010 01:45 pm
"Sorry to disappoint you – and I never thought I’d ever be forced to say this – but I’m not a god.”

*gasps at horror. Malfoy is not a got blessed with the good looks of a million sacrificed virgins?*

These chapters are quite cute, and have great one liners. They are entertaining me and leaving a smile on my face.

I love, how apart from the first wishes she never asks anything for herself. Very noble and Gryffindor'ish.

I am also enjoying the way you 'paint' and develop her character, her excited innocence and at times naiveness contrasts with Draco's sarcastic retorts and subtle tones of madness.

& this is even better because you put LunaxBlaise on the sidelines. ;)
Name: Boogum reviewed *** fourth wish *** on May 03, 2010 07:45 pm
Brilliant. ^_^
Name: sweetpop reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Oct 20, 2008 11:02 pm
I'm really liking this story so far :) Ginny's wishes would be absolutely impossible if she were living in the Muggle world, but since shes not, well, lucky her!
Name: Alluring_Twilight reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Oct 18, 2008 01:40 pm
Horoscopes are brilliant sometimes.
The one on is bril too, because it comes up with the funniest things.

Anywho, I love the story so far. You have D/G, of course AS well as Blaise and Luna! Yay!
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Oct 13, 2008 07:56 pm
What an excellent fortune cookie! (Especially with the traditional addition at the end. :oD)

One comment: I think you mean "She owns the paper" as opposed to "owes". So many cute scenes!!! hahaha And it's especially whimsical to imagine Blaise collecting butterbeer corks. Great idea! :)
Name: enoimreh reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jul 09, 2008 03:58 pm
Haha. I absolutely adore Luna. She's great. And that horoscope line is phenomenal! Hahaha. And have I mentioned how much I love Draco? I haven't? Well, I love him.
Name: Embellished reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 30, 2008 04:49 am
I've been out of town, so I have just had the opportunity to read what you've posted of this story so far. It is a lot of fun! I really like the way you are giving us new glimpses of Draco's personality with every wish, while still keeping him from being too soft. I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the story!
Name: Maelyn reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 29, 2008 07:58 am
I really like this. DYING for an update! ;)
Name: doc_3 reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:46 pm
I fell in love with this story immediately. Your Malfoy is perfect and so are all your other characters. I can't wait to read more!

Name: dristi reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 09:39 am
hi, i absolutely love your story!!! amazing plot, funny and witty banter! pls update soon
Name: ExquisiteBeauty reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 08:35 am
Yay! That was wonderful!
Name: Kizei reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 07:32 am
Aww, Luna and Blaise is my favorite alongside Ginny and Draco!

Speaking of Ginny and Draco, yay! They're finally having dinner! I love that Draco made her stay, hehehe he likes her!

Good chapter!
Name: Truthiness reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 06:39 am
Enjoying the story thus far. Dialogue is fun as are the characterizations.

One slight thing in this chapter...a red in the fridge? Maybe Draco was referring to one of those wine cabinetsyou keep in your kitchen. Because reds aren't chilled, unless it's some Wizard wine maybe?

I think that Draco might have a slight issue with Ginny's virginity being needed for his ambitions and his desire for her. Which sounds like it will be an interesting scenario to read about as the story progresses.

Thanks again for another great chapter.

Author's Response: All right, you're the second person to mention wine and now I just feel bad about it. *goes to edit*
Name: Mistress of Potions reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 06:24 am
I realize this is a bit picky, but red wine in the refrigerator? Eew.

Author's Response: My Uncle is a wine freak and he always drinks his wine cold. I wouldn't know since I prefer other alcohol, but I always assumed everyone drink it cold. I should've researched, I guess =\
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:36 am
great chapter! i love this story. i can't believe its only been four chapters, i thought it had been forever, and i was excited cuz i love it. great job! brilliance!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed *** fourth wish *** on Jun 27, 2008 04:21 am
LUNA AND BLAISE!!! *coughs* I loved this one a lot. :D
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