Name: raistlin89 reviewed Chapter 3 on Aug 19, 2008 12:56 pm
love the story so far, its so different from everything else ive read but i thought id just point this out

'Theo turned to Pansy with a glare. “Thank you so much for royally pissing off my girlfriend. I truly appreciate it,” he stated before running after said girlfriend, pulling her outside of the dining hall in an effort to calm her.

“Well, then,” I began, rather surprised at the influx of tension amongst these supposed best friends. “Would anyone else like to continue?”

Daphne shifted uncomfortably in her seat. It was clear that she wanted to leave and go see if Tracey was okay. And probably whinge and complain about myself and Pansy while they were at it; with Theo sitting there, staying perfectly silent, just looking moody and pensive and serious, like he always does.'

the last sentence shows him still at the table, yet in the begining it says he runs off. just thought id point it out
cant wait to read the rest!! good job

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh, for that part I was saying that Theo would be sitting with Tracey and Daphne as they complained about Ginny and friends. Sorry about the confusion! And thanks again!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 13, 2008 10:31 pm
Very sweet scene there at the end.

As for that wedding dress, it is clearly fashioned after a piece of origami, which is not supposed to be worn. I honestly think that Ginny would look stupid in it.

Author's Response: Thanks! And in regards to the dress, a lot of times what may look good on the rack, or on a mannequin, may not look good when tried on. Ginny doesn't know how she would look in it because she never tried it on. But, I do agree; I don't think it would suit her.
Name: Katmillia reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 13, 2008 12:03 pm
I totally, totally love this story, and I was wary at first because of the extreme AU nature of it, but I think you're doing a brilliant job of it, and this last chapter just really proved that. :) Excellent work, I am definitely excited for the next update!

Author's Response: tehe. Thank you! I'll try to update ASAP.
Name: yomoedmb reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 13, 2008 10:19 am
Aw *cuddles* they're getting closer literally and figuratively. I love that they're sort of forcing her to be like them, it's adorable!

Author's Response: haha. Thanks!!
Name: ryonaidane reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 12, 2008 05:27 pm
awww... please update soon! i love this story... such a sweet Draco! hahaha

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update ASAP.
Name: Len reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 12, 2008 11:47 am
I love these Slytherins! make me laugh out loud.

Draco and Ginny are getting close, and I must agree with Pansy: they falling asleep like that was really cute

update as soon as you can, please

Author's Response: haha. Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible.
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 6 on Aug 12, 2008 10:18 am
AHH that's so cute :D

oh thank god there's no gareth in her future love life.....he seems a bit fishy to me....hmm....

update soon please!!:D


PS--- WOW that dress!!!:O

Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I need to get all the fluff in now, before the actual danger happens. No; no Gareth in Ginny's love life, at least. Yeah, that dress is, like, mind-bogglingly gorgeous. If I could, I'd *so* wear it at my own wedding.
Name: indigoeeyes reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 04, 2008 06:48 am
loved the was dead hilarious :D

Author's Response: Thanks! =D
Name: AnyaApollonia reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 02, 2008 09:49 am

Blaise is amazing. NO question. Loving this story so much :) Exactly how I always imagined the Slytherins to be when they were with each other. And Ginny fits in much better with them than I think she realizes . . . can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: haha. So many people are loving my portrayal of Blaise. He's so much fun to write since we weren't given a whole lot to work with in canon. Yeah, Ginny doesn't want to admit yet that she works really well with the Slytherins. She will, though, eventually. Thanks for your review!
Name: mahek210 reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 02, 2008 09:21 am
ohh it sure was a very interesting lunch!!!ur draco is very differnt frm d ones which i have read!! he is like d cute nd chilled out one!!love blaise!!can really imagine d picture which ginny crafted abt d one wid miniature draco blaise nd pansy!!lolzz..awesum chap!!gud work:)

Author's Response: haha. Thanks! Yeah, my Draco is more mature since he went through a lot when he went to Hogwarts, so he grew up rather quickly.
Name: blissfulxsin reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 01, 2008 07:07 pm
Awww that was a very cute chapter. I loved it and I can't wait until you update again I hope it comes up soon. this is extremely well written.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update as quickly as possible.
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 01, 2008 05:56 am
ahahahahaha this is a great story!!

it is, and i say this at the risk of sounding like a fakely charming old lady, delightful ;)

really i was laughing the whole way through it :D

please update soon!!:D


Author's Response: haha. Thanks! No, you didn't end up sounding like an old lady. =D I haven't even started chapter 6 yet, but I'll try writing some of it tonight. Thanks again!
Name: Len reviewed Chapter 5 on Aug 01, 2008 03:27 am
LOL!! i love how the friendship between Ginny and the Slytherins is developing (specially between she and Draco, of course *winks*)
you have a very refreshing style, i love it. and your literature quotes are awesome (Gabriel García Márquez?? i find it amazing that you like him. he's one of my favourite authors)
congrats on your amazing work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Marquez is one of my all-time favorite authors. =D One Hundred Years of Solitude is one of the best novels I've read in a long time. And lit. quotes were just something fun that I thought people would like. I have a bunch picked out from various novels and whatnot, so it's just a matter of incorporating them. Thanks again for your review!
Name: dristi reviewed Chapter 5 on Jul 31, 2008 11:53 pm
hi, the story is getting very intriguing now, with gareth in the picture. pls update soon...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update soon.
Name: fairydust123 reviewed Chapter 5 on Jul 31, 2008 10:49 pm
I'm enjoying this a lot :) You had me laughing when Blaise got in touch with his femenine side, haha :)

Author's Response: haha. Thanks!
Name: ryonaidane reviewed Chapter 4 on Jul 31, 2008 12:27 am
please update soon
really like it
thanks thanks

Author's Response: I just uploaded chapter 5 to the site, so, hopefully, it'll be up soon.
Name: indigoeeyes reviewed Chapter 4 on Jul 25, 2008 10:20 am
WOW. what an interesting waiting for the next chapter xD

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on chapter 5 right now!
Name: Julia Evans reviewed Chapter 4 on Jul 13, 2008 01:17 pm
This is amazing. Probably the most satisfying story I've ever read. I love the sarcastic comments- keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely review!!
Name: deadsnowwhite reviewed Chapter 4 on Jul 11, 2008 06:30 am
well that was a bit drama queenish but it got me luaghing at her crazyness

Author's Response: Yes, Ginny was over-reacting, but she realized it, which is what counts. Thanks for your review!
Name: fairydust123 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 11, 2008 04:06 am
I'm not one to usually enjoy stories written in Ginny or Draco's POV, but yours has just seemed to pull me in! While some authors do a horrible job of writing in first person, I think you've done it amazingly! The story is very entertaining, the plot is of popular interest, and I really like the way you've portrayed Pansy! It's refreshing to read she's not a complete bitch, and is friendly towards Ginny :)
I'm really enjoying it, hope you updtae soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review! =D Pansy holds a special place in my heart, so she'll never be portrayed in a bad light in my fics. I'll try to get chapter 5 up ASAP. Thanks again for your review!!
Name: sweetpop reviewed Chapter 4 on Jul 11, 2008 12:22 am
ahh I'm excited about the next chapter =) Thankyou for posting!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: sweetpop reviewed Chapter 2 on Jul 04, 2008 06:24 pm
Hey, this is great! A differemt kind of story from what I've read before and I think it's going to be really interesting =) THankyou for posting it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! =D
Name: ZSF reviewed Chapter 3 on Jul 03, 2008 10:54 am
Great chapter!!!

It was extremely funny, although it's "Birkin", and not "Berkin".

Author's Response: Thanks! And I thought that's how you spell it, but I was just too lazy to double check. haha. I'll fix it right now.
Name: moerae reviewed Chapter 3 on Jul 02, 2008 07:39 am
I'm really enjoying this; Ginny's witty, sarcastic voice is really brilliant! It'll be interesting to see where it goes...

Just wanted to point out though, that it should be "Blaise and I" in the end, rather than "me and Blaise." I feel like poor Draco would rather commit suicide than speak improper English!

Author's Response: Thanks! And thank you for mentioning the correction. I just fixed it. =D I would never want my Draco to speak improper English!
Name: D_Rad_88 reviewed Chapter 3 on Jul 01, 2008 08:05 pm
LOL. Those last five sentences totally made the chapter. Ginny in class with THOSE two Slytherins is just gonna be fuckin' entertaining as all hell. I can't wait for the last chapter.

Author's Response: haha. I'm so excited to write their first class experience. It's not going to be in chapter four, but definitely chapter five.
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