Name: erinem reviewed Chapter 5: I Wanna Be Your Man on Jan 26, 2010 08:14 pm
I love this! I think this was last chapter, but I loved Draco's sarcastic metaphor about the "CEO", etc. I think I laughed out loud.

The first chapter was great; I usually don't like things from Hermione's point of view, but I really enjoyed that...

And last of all (although I realize all of this reponse is not even about this chapter; sorry!), I sort of wish Ginny hadn't cried so much when she overheard Draco. I would rather her have been angry and pissed off, but stronger. But I didn't have that big of a problem with it.

Can't wait for more! Thanks for the read.

Author's Response: I see the crying as more of a shock reaction, you know, that she wasn't expecting it. She definitely toughens up as the story goes along. Yeah, Draco's voice was pretty much dripping with sarcasm in that sequence! There will be 15 chapters in all and I'm posting them a few a day, so it'll probably be complete by the end of the weekend. Thank you so much for this comment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Name: lily_malfoy reviewed Chapter 5: I Wanna Be Your Man on Jan 26, 2010 04:53 pm
This is great. The characters are a little OCC but that's waht makes it fun. It's also hilarious that so many characters are gay lol
p.s. I love the sirius and remus couple but I really can't imagine Percy with Oliver Wood lol
p.p.s. I just did I big term paper on The philadelphia story (1940) so I think it's quite funny that it's in your fic.
Keep writting please :)

Author's Response: The Philadelphia Story is one of my favorite movies; I saw it for the first time as a little girl and it really influenced how I think about romances. So you'll see a lot of references and parallels! And as for Percy and Oliver, come on, they're the geek and the jock—classic! Thank you so much for the comment. I'm pleased you like the story!
Name: Shyla reviewed Chapter 5: I Wanna Be Your Man on Jan 26, 2010 10:08 am
Great story! I like how you have more than one couple-romance going on, instead of just Draco and Ginny. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I love ensemble stories and keep writing them even when I think starting out that I'm only going to be talking about one couple, so I've stopped fighting it and I'm just glad that other people feel the same! Thanks so much!
Name: Lyskaelyn reviewed Chapter 5: I Wanna Be Your Man on Jan 26, 2010 09:23 am
i love this! it's absolutely wonderful. i'd like to see ginny a little stronger, a little more independent - but as far as everything goes thus far, i'm adoring it. keep up the fantastic work -

Author's Response: Ginny definitely grows up during the course of the story—I hope by the end you will see her as having become stronger and more independent! Thank you so much for the comment. I'm so pleased you're enjoying the story!
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