Name: eli reviewed Chapter 13: I'm Down on Feb 01, 2010 11:40 pm
Hermione raised an eyebrow. "I will have you know that I am as pure as the day I was born!" she insisted, hands on her hips.

"Really?" Ginny said as she emerged from her dressing room in a royal blue gown that unfortunately clung in all the wrong places. "I'm not."

*squeals* *loves* dies*


Parvati giggled. "All of Gryffindor House knows, I imagine. You know those open showers."

"It's our bloody sixth roommate," Seamus confirmed.

*dies another long, laughing, hysterical death*

you know, clothing descriptions are usually hideously boring, but you somehow managed to bring me into the dressing room with those girls, in a non-obnoxious way. major kudos for that :)

Author's Response: I like describing clothes when they're important, or when it's at the center of the scene, so I'm glad you didn't find it boring! And I'm pleased you think the story is funny! Thanks!
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