Name: ameva reviewed Chapter 1: Warmth on Apr 06, 2011 07:50 pm
I really enjoy your writing style. It's original and you make it sound so un-cliche. I'm interested to find out what 'other' things Draco will do to keep himself entertained/relieve stress during his 6th year.

One other thing I like is how you don't go into their love/attraction for each other immediately. That kind of turns me off for some reason. I can see you slowly building up their romance until it is believable and natural.

Please update soon!
Name: lilactree reviewed Chapter 1: Warmth on Feb 28, 2011 01:21 pm
Draco's nuts. That's very like him in his sixth year. Excellent character portrayal. But I feel bad for Ginny. Her and Dean are dating and she's too young to even go that far.
Though it would be interesting to see if you change JK's ending of the books or not. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Name: darinmeg reviewed Chapter 1: Warmth on Feb 20, 2011 11:16 am
Great chapter! More would. Be great! A confussed Draco who falls in love with someone who is under the imperious.
Name: Vixenfairy27 reviewed Chapter 1: Warmth on Feb 20, 2011 06:07 am
It's very rare that people writing stories do not take advantage of the fact that these characters can do magic. So seeing it on your story was a welcomed surprise. I always wondered how the characters used the Imperious curse, you did an awesome job at describing how they did it. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't take too long for you to post. Thank you for the story.
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