Name: Anise reviewed A Rainy Day on Apr 04, 2015 04:57 pm
So many things to like here! There are just so many details that you nail.
“Ginny thought the idea of Lucius not being terrible contradicted the fact that he was willing to blacklist her. She inhaled a deep breath and tried to banish memories of her first year from her mind. Ginny knew it had been years ago, thirteen to be exact, but she could still feel that weightless, cloudy feeling that had overcome her as Tom possessed her. She could still feel the ghost of his touch on her fragile mind, and the guilt that had overcome her after the terrifying events. Lucius Malfoy had done that to her. He had sacrificed her to a madman, who had wanted nothing more than to completely take over her soul. Ginny clenched her hands, the terrifying thought that her soul wasn't completely intact overcoming her.”
Ginny had to have thoughts like this in her mind after her first year-- ABSOLUTELY had to, even though they were never spelled out. But she’s brave enough to go for the interview anyway. I LOVE the way that she’s finally goaded into confronting Lucius.

I love the idea of the Trio going off together without Harry really seeming to give much thought to Ginny one way or the other. It’s so typical of his obliviousness.

And such an cliffhanger! On to the next chapter...

Author's Response: I 100% agree - Ginny definitely had to have been scarred from that experience. I would have been completely messed up, and whether or not JK meant it that way, it showed Ginny’s strength that it never really prevented her from doing anything she wanted to in canon. I’m sure it was just unexplored, but in my delusions, I think it makes sense. Thanks so much for the review!! - Ann
Name: b1elliot reviewed An Offer She Can’t Refuse on Mar 30, 2015 04:17 am
Loved this chapter. Thanks!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! - Ann
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed Lucius Malfoy’s Intentions on Mar 14, 2015 08:07 pm
love lucius and narcissa's characterization! Onward to see what next..

Author's Response: I hope you’re enjoying it! - Ann
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed First Day Jitters on Mar 10, 2015 11:20 pm
Yep still here! :)

I wonder what's causing her to slip up so much. She mustn't have in her other position to be spoken of so highly. I can't imagine her being fired so quickly however, as that wouldn't move your plot forward. Very curious to see where this goes.


Author's Response: Well, you never know - the story may just end in another chapter and this could have been some elaborate - belated April Fool’s joke. :-O - Just kidding. Or am I?
Name: Marinka reviewed First Day Jitters on Mar 10, 2015 07:46 pm
Poor, poor Ginny. Somebody needs to take her under the wing, so she can learn about clothing and other high society things. She will have to attend the balls and such and it will be even harder to fit in. I also wonder if Ms vs Miss was Lucius‘s way to separate them in the sense one is a virgin and the other isn’t?
But Abraxan’s bit was hilarious, well done:)

Author's Response: Lucius is mysterious - but mostly I think he just enjoys making Ginny upset. And much later, it will become clear exactly how much Lucius knows about Ginny’s personal life. ;) Thanks so much for your continued reviews! - Ann
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed An Offer She Can’t Refuse on Mar 02, 2015 11:40 am
Every time I read something of yours I find myself instantly captured by your characterizations. Very interested to see where you go with this one. Favorited for emails! ~STT

Author's Response: Ah, you didn’t disappear after all! Happy to have you reading (and reviewing). I hope you enjoy this one too. ~ Ann
Name: Marinka reviewed An Offer She Can’t Refuse on Feb 26, 2015 12:18 am
And she is in! Nice of Lucius to make a first step, but i suspect there is an ulterior motive..

Author's Response: .. Just because it’s Lucius doesn’t mean there’s an ulterior motive ... hmm, something about that sentence seemed wrong - maybe cross out the doesn’t. :)
Name: Anise reviewed An Offer She Can’t Refuse on Feb 24, 2015 06:56 pm
A new chapter!!!!! Unfortunately, my net access time is almost up... I haven't had regular access for 2 weeks, and it's been, well, difficult. :( But I will read and review soon, soon, SOON!

Author's Response: :) Thanks!! Not having regular internet access sounds like my idea of a nightmare - the really bad ones where you die by the hand of blood thirsty clowns. - Ann
Name: b1elliot reviewed A Rainy Day on Feb 21, 2015 08:13 am
We'll I didn't expect that! Great chapter! Thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review(s)! Happy you enjoyed it!! ~ Ann
Name: b1elliot reviewed Lucius Malfoy’s Intentions on Feb 21, 2015 07:55 am
Wonderful beginning! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I realized I answered these out of order ... :) Happy you enjoyed the beginning! ~ Ann
Name: Marinka reviewed A Rainy Day on Feb 13, 2015 02:23 am
I find it amusing that she is used to Ron , they have been friends for years now, so of course she would be too familiar with him. But I was under impression that they have been dating before they went to travel.
I am curious to find out how you will get them together, will she have to go back to Lucius?

Author's Response: In my head (and not really explored in this story) Ron and Hermione tried and it just didn’t work while they were away, so it wasn’t going to work when they came home. I guess only time will tell what happens with Ginny! Thanks for the review!
Name: moliosi reviewed A Rainy Day on Feb 12, 2015 03:12 pm
I've really enjoyed this so far and I have absolutely no qualms over you bringing back Fred and Snape! I think you've done a lovely job of painting the world and characters so far. Lucius always seems to be a difficult character to make likable, but you have kept him in character and made him sympathetic. I look forward to reading more in the future.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you’re enjoying the characters thus far. I do adore Lucius as well, and I prefer to make him not so much the demon that he tends to be in a lot of FF (I’ve done that trope as well). Thanks again for your review!
Name: Kalira reviewed Lucius Malfoy’s Intentions on Feb 07, 2015 07:44 am
Interesting start so far! Can't wait to see where it goes from here.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope you keep reading and keep enjoying!
Name: Marinka reviewed Lucius Malfoy’s Intentions on Feb 01, 2015 01:09 am
I love how you sketched the characters so precisely I can almost see them. Lucius was just spot on and I am looking forward to see how he gets Ginny to transfer. I suspect somehow she will be picked to replace Astoria, perhaps something to do with " innocence"?

Author's Response: Lucius can be awfully persuasive when he puts his mind to it - so Ginny should probably watch out. And only time will tell with what happens with Astoria ;) . Thanks for the review!!
Name: Anise reviewed Lucius Malfoy’s Intentions on Jan 31, 2015 09:00 pm
I LOVE the start to this fic!
Draco and Ginny haven't even made their appearance yet, and it's already compelling and memorable. Poor Romilda. I've kind of always had a soft spot for her character, but I don't think she's going to win out here. Lucius and Narcissa's relationship is really well sketched out; the one detail about her hair sums up so much... and Ginny! THAT should be good. I think that Lucius is going to run into more trouble than he anticipated. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks Anise! I love a good Lucius in a DG fic, so I figured, why not make him one of the more major characters. But he can be so difficult sometimes. And I absolutely LOVE writing him and Ginny interacting. I hope you continue to enjoy this!
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