Reviews For Harder to Breathe
Name: Frust-sheep reviewed Part 4 on Apr 11, 2010 08:50 am
Aww so cute and it was a good mix of romance, drama, humour etc. + awesome written. Anyway wonderful work!
Name: DracoMalfoyzLover reviewed Part 4 on Sep 20, 2008 08:38 am
Ginny was so insecure! If I had been in her position I would have accepted in a heartbeat. Too bad i'm just his lover ; ).
Name: shaded reviewed Part 4 on Dec 26, 2007 10:27 am
Aw, what a cute fluffy ending. Heh, what a time for Ginny to change her mind about getting married; though it wasn't totally unexpected. 'Tis fun to see a Draco who's wrapped around Ginny's little finger. :)
Name: shaded reviewed Part 3 on Dec 26, 2007 10:16 am
Hehe, seeing Draco get riled up is hilarious.
"Ginny, will you marry me?"

She shook her head no.

LOL! Couldn't stop laughing for a while after that.

The ending of this chapter was sweet. :)
Name: shaded reviewed Part 2 on Dec 26, 2007 10:05 am
Aw, some much-needed advice from their mums. I hope Draco can clear up the misunderstandings.
By the way, there's a typo about half-way through, with "Author" instead of "Arthur".
Name: shaded reviewed Part 1 on Dec 26, 2007 09:53 am
Interesting dynamic between Draco and Ginny. Should be interesting to see how this develops.

Just one point: the "your" in the "Your what?" that Draco says should be a "you're".
Name: camblagokhawaja reviewed Part 4 on Oct 11, 2007 05:43 pm
AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so cute!!!!!!!!!! You should defiently make a sequel, like what happens with the baby, and how Draco reacts to being a father and stuff like that!!!!!
Once again, WONDERFUL JOB!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: andi822 reviewed Part 1 on Jun 17, 2007 03:36 am
What gut wrenching emotion! Simply awesome.
Name: ronlover reviewed Part 4 on Mar 15, 2007 02:15 pm
Cute story.
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed Part 4 on Jan 28, 2007 03:24 pm
Can you say shot gun wedding?
That was an amazing story!
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed Part 4 on Jan 21, 2007 05:04 pm
Wonderful job! This was really well written. I think you did a splendid job with the emotions exhibited by the characters in this story- they felt real and genuine! Nice work!
Name: Blueeyedbrunette reviewed Part 4 on Dec 30, 2006 05:05 pm
Name: MyEscape reviewed Part 4 on Oct 25, 2006 07:33 pm
Another wonderful tale!
Name: redhead_brunette06 reviewed Part 4 on Sep 15, 2006 03:36 pm
thats sweet!!!!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Part 4 on Aug 15, 2006 03:59 pm
~So perfect. I just love this whole idea.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Part 3 on Aug 15, 2006 03:48 pm
~Wonderfully Written.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Part 2 on Aug 15, 2006 03:39 pm
~A perfect chapter. I just love this story.~
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Part 1 on Aug 15, 2006 03:28 pm
~WOW. I love storys with Draco/Ginny and a baby.~
Name: erin reviewed Part 4 on Dec 07, 2005 03:21 pm
bout the cutest thing iVE ever reaad. hmm yes indeed.
Name: reviewed Part 4 on Oct 08, 2005 02:35 am
kool story really enjoyed gin being real stubborn it was alot of fun to read totally gonna check out more of ur stuff
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Part 4 on May 23, 2005 03:36 am
That was sweet. I liked it. It's made me
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Part 3 on May 23, 2005 03:23 am
That was really good!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Part 2 on May 23, 2005 03:15 am
Just a couple of little edits... "Author Weasley looked up" --You call Arthur "Author" a couple of different times. "And I know she loves me." --You have Narcissa talking in two paragraphs that could be joined together, the quotes are incorrect, and you have Narcissa saying that Draco loves Ginny and Ginny loves Narcissa...not Draco as I'm sure it was meant to read. Otherwise it's brilliant and very well written!
Name: raven reviewed Part 4 on Apr 23, 2005 05:56 am
wow! if i had 2 rate thid story out of 10 i'd rate it 11
Name: kbauman24601 reviewed Part 4 on Jan 20, 2005 06:58 pm
I liked the beginning of the story, but by the middle, i was mildly turned off by it. It was Ginny's character and attitude. Her being that fickle and cold regarding marrying somebody that she loved was a turn off. Having been pregnant and w/ many pregnant friends and co-workers, i find it very hard to believe that it can be blamed on her pregnant hormones. however, as i stated earlier, i did like the start of the story.
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