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Feast of Fools by Mynuet    (Reviews - 103)

Five Death Eaters in training meet utter defeat at the hands of a Weasley girl who knows the way to a man's heart is through his stomach.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 13551 | Read count: 28450 | Published: Jan 30, 2005 | Updated: Feb 07, 2007
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Date: Aug 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: or, How Ginny Got Her Minions

"But, on the whole, since it's you, well done. That was almost a good idea."

I nearly peed myself from laughing! You write humor so well - I always love coming back to your stories, and this on is truly exceptional. I love Theo and his coffee fetish! "Ignoring the noise from outside the door that was probably Theo bursting into tears of joy" HAHAH. xx

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Date: Aug 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Reckoning

"and Ron looked to see that Theo had turned pale and was swaying as if about to faint."

I love that you managed to get in one more theo/coffee joke! Also – this was a fantastic addition to the story!!

Crossing into Chaos by Emeral_eyes    (Reviews - 512)

*Completely AU* In a world where Voldemort was never defeated, only a few things matter: pureblood, money and power. All that Ginny Weasley wanted was to survive her 7 years at Hogwarts, a school where the children of the richest and most powerful wizards dominate over others. Denying her natural instincts, she managed to make it into her 6th year without offending any of the cruel and powerful Slytherins - especially that horrible Draco Malfoy. Until one day, she crosses a line, and her peaceful existence is shattered forever. A story filled with adolescent drama, clash of the classes, angst, jealousy, ridiculous pride and love triangles (and squares).
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 208337 | Read count: 316029 | Published: Apr 28, 2006 | Updated: Nov 18, 2012
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Date: Feb 07, 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Jumpers and dragons

As a fan of HYD, I am a huge fan of this story — especially since when I was watching it (the LA. I love Matsumoto Jun) I, too, was picturing D/G — and I love the way you've twisted the HYD story and your own together to make sense. (tbh, I feel like your story makes more sense than HYD; that show required an intense suspension of disbelief regarding the character of that high school)

Anyway, I just wanted to drop in and say that I really have enjoyed this. I've read it once before — but that was when it only had 11 chapters or so — and i love it even more now.

I know that it's been a long while since you've updated (which is something that I am personally acquainted with) and I was just wondering if this was abandoned. Either way. I'll be following it. Excellent, excellent work. Your writing is lovely, the story is an incredibly original take, and you've breathed new depths into the characters: both the HP and HYD characters. I find myself enjoying both stories in new and awesome ways.

Thank you for exploring this AU. I adore it. You are wonderful. xx

A Tale of Two Matchmakers by Kerichi    (Reviews - 524)

Romance for three couples when Blaise and Luna use Shakespearean styled matchmaking to hook up Ginny and Draco. There's Much Ado about...something!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award for Best Romance- Non Canon on Mugglenet

* Written before the HBP, this tale presents an alternate sixth year in which Dumbledore lives, Draco is more than a foil to Harry, and Blaise Zabini is a girl. I hope readers who ship Draco/Ginny will enjoy the story which includes dancing with faeries, Celtic and Norse mythology, school holidays in London and Spain, and loads of fantasy and romance. "Is this a kissing book?" (to quote the Princess Bride) Yes, it is.*



Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (girl), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Tales of Two Matchmakers
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Chapters: 50 | Word count: 316158 | Read count: 130324 | Published: Oct 12, 2006 | Updated: Mar 29, 2007
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Date: Oct 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

I adore this story!!

This is the second time I've read it, and this time this reference caught my eye: 'the 'abominable snowman' in the old Bugs Bunny cartoons who wanted a bunny rabbit, saying, "I'll hug him, and squeeze him, and call him George."' Bugs Bunny is actually referencing John Steinbeck's "Of Mice and Men" here, and I think it's great that authors //can// appropriate outside of fanfiction!

Please don't stop with the Princess Bride references!!

Hearts and Soul Parts by Sunfire    (Reviews - 44)

In the wake of war, one young witch and wizard are made into thieves for the cause, but they end up stealing more than they'd planned to.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 27 | Word count: 67844 | Read count: 91499 | Published: Jul 18, 2007 | Updated: Jun 28, 2018
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Date: Oct 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I just found this story a few hours ago, and I read it all at once. I love stories like this that turn Ginny into a heroine rather than a side-note.

This is such a cleverly contrived AU and I am enjoying immensely. I am so excited to find out what happens next! xxx Jen

A Conversation After the War by livvyharris    (Reviews - 80)

Draco snorted. “You haven’t won. The Boy Wonder’s won. Don’t fool yourself Ginny, you’re nothing but a groupie.”
She looked at him with solemn eyes. “You’re wrong.”

Draco and Ginny have one last conversation.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1195 | Read count: 6169 | Published: Jul 25, 2008 | Updated: Jul 25, 2008
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Date: Jul 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One Last Conversation

Gah. This is awesome! Loved this especially:

'"I do,” he agreed with rage. “Ginny is a star struck little girl who wants Harry Potter because he’s Harry Potter and she doesn’t know a thing about him. Ginny is Potter’s dream girl because she’ll marry him and have his children and never complain that she wanted more in life than to be Harry Potter’s wife or the person who made all of his dreams come true.'

Super fitting to the epilogue.

Also- Albus Severus Potter is a stupid name.

xx Jen

The Middle by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 13)

Beware the Ides of March. Ginny doesn't know what that means, Draco is convinced it's nothing. That fortune doesn't help their already rocky relationship.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 5151 | Read count: 2110 | Published: Sep 06, 2008 | Updated: Sep 06, 2008
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Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Sep 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Middle

So I read this in 2008 for the exchange. And I stand by exactly what I said then, and the fact that i nominated this for best overall and best Draco. This is still such a great story to read — a fantastic portrayal of how a realationship between Draco and Ginny would actually work. so many of the stories we see in this ship are all about them getting together or falling apart. but this... this is just about them. Like Draco said, “Fuck everyone else,” he answered, as if she had spoken aloud. “It’s just you and me.”

this is one of my favorite portrayals of Draco. ever. he defends her and supports her and just accepts her. this is the Draco that she could actually fall in love with. that's a real person. "Under the cover of darkness, one dreary night, Draco had whispered in her ear that she terrified him. His sleepy voice seduced her mind, telling her that she lucky to be so carefree and serene. How could she not worry about the next day and what people would think and what disasters awaited?" he's such a hard character to really pin down, there are so many parts to him, so many defenses, in fanfic he almost becomes his flaws. but not here, here he's still Draco, but he's more than i expected. so much more. he loves muggle cars and voluntarily goes to street fairs. He's not just a snarky narcissistic prat, but rather he takes responsibility for his and Ginny's actions (and not even in a violent way — he defends her to her family. Priceless).

and Ginny... She relies on him. Has faith in him. It's brilliant. (and her fashion sense!)

This was just gorgeous. this is what I aim for when I write d/g now. I want the two of them in a relationship, and I think that you achieved this beautifully.

“Fuck everyone else,” he answered, as if she had spoken aloud. “It’s just you and me.” xxx Jen

The World Inverted by rowan_greenleaf    (Reviews - 228)

Draco doesn't remember their past together, and now she's just a Weasley to him. Ginny will do anything -jump through all the hoops, pose as an interior decorator, tap dance -ANYTHING- to break the spell that erased his memory and make him love her again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 43535 | Read count: 18596 | Published: Oct 14, 2008 | Updated: Feb 12, 2009
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Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Boy Who Fainted

Oh my god! Precious! I love this conclusion. I love this whole story, actually. It's well measured bits of fun and sadness, and Draco and Ginny just click together. Fantastic work! xx

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: D Is For DRAGON

Hahaha... The two of them in the quidditch box had me giggling like a loon. They are so perfectly stubborn. The moment when Draco figured it out, though, that they weren't just friends, was lovely.

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Starry Eyed Surprise

Dude. Mohawk. Again, I totally adore your Draco.

And the kiss! Epic. That song and the dance. I was just carried away!

I do almost wish we could have more about the Draco/Ron dynamic, especially more from Ron about how he feels about the relationship.

So, yeah, I do t have much to say, because I'm so filled with sunshine and joy and happiness because I adored this chapter. Ugh. When Draco showed up at her flat. L'sigh. Perfect. xx

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Russian Period

"He was wearing that slightly mussed hair style that suited him so well, and was dressed in a very well fitting pair of jeans. Over this he wore a black blazer with a white t-shirt underneath. A pair of classic high top Converse sneakers covered his feet." My MOUTH WATERED. APPARENTLY, I HAVE A THING FOR DRACO MALFOY IN CHUCKS. SO. FREAKING. RIDICULOUS. and hot. Very hot.

Anyway. Great update. I think your Ginny is really awesome. The way she handles both jobs without it being a big deal, the way she just takes on interior design like it's the easiest thing ever. I especially like the way she deals with her memories and conversations with Draco. They're not overly weepy, or deliberately heart wrenching, which is what actually makes them so powerful.

Anyway, this is a great chapter. Have I mentioned yet how much I like your chapter titles? Because I really, really do. xx

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Sex Doll

Oh god. This felt like the first chapter that they actually talk a lot, and I swear... Their dynamic. It's so perfect. And Jesus, the whole "Ginny's lake" thing totally had me gasping. This is so fantastic!

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Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The-Girl-Who-Lived...To-Love-Harry-Potter

Oh, another wonderful chapter! I love the Narcissa/Ginny dynamic. Their conversation was too perfect, and I totally laughed for like five minutes at: "It really seemed like he was going out of his way to insult you, dear!" As if Ginny should be pleased. Its been a long while since I've read any Draco/Ginny fic, and Draco's attitude -- playfully condescending, as if baiting for either an argument or banter -- really strikes me as both unique and fitting. I am just loving to this so far!

"Perhaps insulting their love interest was some ancient form of Malfoy courting…" LOFFS. xx

Author's Response: "Unique and fitting" is truly a great compliment when talking about Draco's characterization. It feels like everything's been done in D/G, and Draco is so distinctly Draco-ish that if you don't get him down just so your fic won't work. I guess what I'm saying is this compliment means a lot to me. ^^

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: What Was Written

Oh my god! Such an epic beginning! I love double agent fics, and the scene with Lucius! That was just so ... Right. Of course he would spite his son from beyond the grave. Aaanyway... Onwards!

Author's Response: Hello there! Thanks so much for taking the time to review every single chapter in this fic. I'm sorry for the delay in replying, but know that you made my day the morning I woke up to find all of these.

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: The Girl Who Fainted

Awesome chapter! I already adore Narcissa. I'm glad you've included her. She's perfect so far. Also -- I like Ginny's "I'm going to get him back" determination and I thought the bits about them being kept apart and her believing him to be dead were understandable. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: I was terrified of writing Narcissa as out of character, not sure if I was doing her justice because I took a bunch of liberties when writing the plot, as you saw. I'm glad that you liked her here!

Promises by recension    (Reviews - 58)

In the back of her mind, Ginny had always sensed there would be wild adventures with her and Harry. The early days of their time together–fighting evil and playing sport–felt like lifetimes ago. The most adventuresome thing they had done together in recent memory was a spontaneous shagging in the garden. It was so domestic that it pained her how common they were. The greatest wizard of his generation, and his wife, getting their thrills from a shag in the garden. She had never thought this future would be hers.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 31429 | Read count: 12837 | Published: Jul 25, 2011 | Updated: Mar 18, 2012
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Date: Oct 23, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Part VIII

I will read this again. And when I do, I will leave you a long flowing review about this and how wonderful and lovely and perfect it is. But, on the off chance that I find myself just as speechless upon a reread, I had to stop in quickly and say that I was overwhelmed by this story and that I adore it. Excellent work. Thank you for once agin proving to me how amazing this ship is. xx

The One You Never Knew by SunnyStorms    (Reviews - 60)

Who you are, whom you love, and where your loyalties lie - Ginny Weasley had never thought all of that could change as a result of a single night. Her postponed wedding to Harry Potter in the aftermath of a mysterious Death Eater prison break was supposed to be a mere set back to the life she'd always dreamed of. But driven by anger and pride, she makes a fateful decision that will upend her entire life.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 45511 | Read count: 6840 | Published: Feb 28, 2012 | Updated: Jun 28, 2013
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Date: Jul 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Breaking Point

Enter Harry: The Twat.

I know in you A/N's you say that you want to write D/G without vilifying Harry, but I just wanted to let you know – i hate him already.

But, either way, very nicely done. I can actually imagine Harry 'ending' things just like this.

Author's Response: Oh you're welcome to hate him ;). I should clarify, by not vilifying Harry, I don't mean I'm going to make him into an entirely sympathetic character, but that I don't want to turn him completely OOC (i.e. turn him into a complete douchebag) in order to get Ginny to leave him. I think canon!Harry already has plenty going for him that makes him an unfitting match for Ginny. I do think Harry remains a good character at heart, but maybe this isn't a 'good' that Ginny wants... ;P So here in this first chapter, I have him doing exactly what he's done before in canon-leaving Ginny for her own good-except she might not be so patient this time around. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

When Worlds Collide by SunnyStorms    (Reviews - 27)

"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference." ~Elie Wiesel

And in all of their incarnations, the one thing Draco and Ginny can never be is indifferent.

(A compilation of one-shots.)

Story #6:

"She's fallen under the strongest magic there is; she's fallen in love."

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 10069 | Read count: 5464 | Published: Jul 17, 2012 | Updated: Jul 07, 2013
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Date: Jul 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Breaking Shadows

Oh joy! I love this little gem. You don't even need more – it's a perfect stand alone (although that being said, companion pieces would surely be adored).

The notion of "their place" is fantastic, from the very first line, I was hooked. That entire first paragraph, actually, is a perfect summation of why we all love D/G. "If what was between them was exposed to the light of day and the scrutiny of others, they knew it wouldn't hold up. It would simply buckle under the pressure and disintegrate into nothing more than slivers of memories."

And the D/G fanatic in me was going 'NOOO', but then you tied it all together wonderfully at the end: "He knew with certainty then. There was no place for them in this world, but they would make their own. All they needed was for each other to believe in what they had, believe that it could last beyond a shadowed existence, and any place could become theirs."

GLORIOUS ending. I smiled ear to ear.

I hope in the future to see a lot more interaction between them – especially about how they are together. So many great D/G stories are about how they get together, but I really love the ones about the two of them staying together and how that would actually work.

Fantastic. Thanks so much for posting this!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I do love stories about them trying to work things out after they get together as well. You'll most likely see me tackle that aspect in my longer works in the future.

Red Herring by haniqua    (Reviews - 12)

Ginny Potter could become Ginny Weasley for one evening, just like how she would become another woman on any other night. Draco Malfoy wanted Ginny Weasley, and by Merlin he had her. Oneshot for Rowan Greenleaf's Polyjuice Brothel challenge at the DG Forum - rated M for smut.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3711 | Read count: 1788 | Published: Apr 22, 2013 | Updated: Apr 23, 2013
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Date: May 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Red Herring

This story needs a sequel so badly. Not that it's incomplete, or that I really even want to see Draco figure out the truth (I do), but because I want to see Ginny snap out of her gritty depression.

Either way, excellent job here, love the concept and the execution. xx

The Anatomy of a Suffragette by haniqua    (Reviews - 100)

Ginny Weasley wants nothing more than to focus on her Quidditch career and have a fun time doing it - but between the Ministry of Magic's plans to implement new marriage regulations, slanderous news articles by Rita Skeeter and a pair of irritating Slytherins, she just can't catch a break.
A feminist take on the Marriage Law trope, with DG for good measure.


**Previously titled Of Marriage Laws and Liberal Feminism**



This AMAZING banner was created by my friend idreamofdraco. :)
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 45866 | Read count: 11615 | Published: Aug 22, 2013 | Updated: Mar 01, 2017
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Date: May 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Resolute

Wow. I really love this beginning. It's a fresh take on a commonly seen trope in this ship (forced/arranged marriage) and it's look into the perils of feminism is shaping up to be quite fascinating. Looking forward to more! xx

Author's Response: I'm so excited you think so! I have a bit of a feminist agenda with this fic, so hopefully everything comes through by the end. ;)

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: May 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Courageous

WHOA. I loved this. I especially liked the scene with Nott and Ginny in the bar and their discussions of political machinations, I wonder if any of the slithering females out there will have anything to say to ginny and how she can contribute to the cause. x

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed that scene; I had quite a bit of fun writing it (though not as much fun as I did writing one of the scenes in the third chapter, coming soon... ;)). As for Ginny's plans, you'll see more of what's to come in the next chapter.

Thank you again for your reviews!

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Courageous

This is amazing. I am so excited to delve into the characters and learn more! Going to go do that now, in fact. xx

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Date: Oct 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Decisive

Another fantastic chapter! I love how Ginny's small moments of internalised misogyny keep coming out — like her interaction with Draco's boss and her initial assumption that she was his secretary. I'm dying to read some from Draco's perspective, because I imagine it would be quite humorous. And I can't wait to find out more about Nott! Off to do just that now. This is excellent, btw xx

Reviewer: pardonthelitany Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Valiant

“Nonsense, Ginny. Draco has no idea what he’s doing.” ngl, I actually snorted out loud at that. But I really do love this so much! I like your writing style, revealing little by little what each of the characters is thinking. Nott is especially interesting to me, and I am looking forward to more of him in the future.

Then... the sex. OHMG. AMAZING. Plus — "I'm stuck in your orbit" — i stg, HEART PALPITATIONS.

The one night stand nature of it makes me sad, but i recognise that there was no other way for it, with the two of them. The world and the characters you've constructed make much more than that impossible at the moment.

I've really enjoyed this so far, though! And I am totally looking forward to more. Thanks so much! xx

The Dating Charade by idreamofdraco    (Reviews - 217)

When a case of workplace sexual harassment leaves Ginny in a truly desperate state, the natural thing to do is to convince Draco Malfoy to pretend to be her boyfriend. Naturally.

Written for SunnyStorms in The DG Forum's 2015 Winter Fic Exchange.

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Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 115229 | Read count: 29379 | Published: May 13, 2015 | Updated: Oct 15, 2021
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Date: Oct 09, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: One: A Tiny Problem

oh my gosh! i love this so much already! I find it both hilarious and infuriating! I really like the way you've made Gin's actions and intentions so clear and relatable with regards to Junker. I like that you captured how upset she is at not being able to take care of such a "small" problem. Can't wait to read more! xx

Author's Response: Thank you so so so much!! I think hilarious and infuriating was exactly the tone I was going for in this chapter, haha.