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Acting on a Moment by Boogum    (Reviews - 111)

Ginny Weasley was on a mission: get Draco Malfoy's attention or die trying. She would prefer to skip the dying part, though…

Acting on a Moment
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Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 12740 | Read count: 25043 | Published: Oct 30, 2009 | Updated: Nov 09, 2009
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Date: Nov 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Day That Ginny Weasley Caught The Wrong Fish

“Perhaps I’m being too subtle?” mused Ginny.

HAHA! One of the best lines of this chapter (and there are so many).

I adore all of you stories as you are a wonderfully talented writer; however, this short story holds a special place in my heart -- merely because of its simple elegance and humour.

You really did an amazing job with Ginny here.

Author's Response: Thank you, Lia! I'm really glad you liked this one. It's definitely not the kind of thing I usually write, at least not as a chaptered fic, which is really why I decided to take on the prompt. Writing this was like a breath of fresh air after all the dark, angsty chapters of Grey, and I think that's why I did make it crazier than usual. I just wanted to have fun with it, and I think that came through in the writing.

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Date: Nov 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Day That Ginny Weasley Got Her Wish

Love it! You know I love this story: I have reviewed each chapter three separate times! Hehe. So you know you have a fan in me!

All I can say (yell) now is BRING ON THE COMPANION FIC!

Seriously, Kim. I am bored being sick and with the week off, nonetheless! Give me something to read. Oh, wait. You gave me AMoC ... still, I already read that! ^_~

Kudos and Cheers! ~Lia

Author's Response: I'm quite impressed you read and reviewed this three times. And very flattered, of course. ^_^

I really want to work on the companion fic, but I think I'd like to get at least one chapter written for Grey, as well as WLAE finished. I'm trying to write that right now. It's a slow process. I'm afraid I've lost my touch. *sigh*

Look At Me by DeLaLune    (Reviews - 336)

Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 35569 | Read count: 19426 | Published: Nov 11, 2009 | Updated: Mar 18, 2010
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Date: Nov 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - No Use Crying Over Spilled Ink

HAHA! Oh, I love the dialogue!

So you prefer the high maintenance type?

No. The high maintenance type prefers me.


Of course, there were much funnier lines than that -- I just found that response to be the most Draco. It makes me want to give him a great big hug and kiss, just to make him feel awkward.

I cannot wait to see where this leads!

Author's Response:

I think I've got the Weasley red down. Thanks for making me blush! Thank you for singing Draco's praises! It made his head bigger, but that's what we love, right?

 

Next chapter will be up soon, I hope you'll stick around! :)

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blind Eyes Never See

Grr! Harry is so insensitive. I know he's a teenage boy and has the best of intentions, but still!

I love that Ginny gets mad and tells him off, but she keeps taking him back. While I may not like it, it is what makes the characters more real and believable so I will have to begrudgingly thank you for that! ^_~

Your Draco is awesome! I am in absolute love. He's snarky, funny, and anonymously sweet. *smiles dreamily*

Oh, their first interaction! Get ready for it … SQUEE! Hehe. Feel honoured. I have only ever squeed twice. *nods* Awww, Draco likes Diary!Ginny. I have a funny feeling he knows it is Ginny writing and the girl he secretly likes /is/ Ginny. Okay, I may be no Sherlock Holmes, but I am allowed to indulge in such fantasies.

This is fantastic! Keep it up. I cannot wait to see these two in detention with one another. Heheh!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very honored! I enjoy a squee just as much, if not more, than your next author! Next chapter will be up soon :)

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Truth Hurts

Okay, when Draco wrote "I want to see you", my heart actually fluttered. Damn you, woman! Oh my stars how I am caught up in this story.

I love how you had Draco drop his books when he discovered that Ginny was the one writing in the book. I thought he knew. Well, I guess he can't know everything, can he. I'm still convinced she's the girl he was talking about before, the one he said never noticed him.

One side note (only because I have read this religiously): Draco already admitted that he was in seventh year.

Other than that this is going fabulous! I am really excited to find out how she reacts to seeing him. I also want to know how they met when she was six and he seven.

Terribly excited, you know. Do hurry and update. ^_^

~Lia

Author's Response: I know he already admitted it, I was just clarifying for emphasis. I did try to change that...but I'm terrible with rewrites, my muses only let me write something once :P But thank you so much for your sparkling reviews :) Of course she was the girl he was talking about :D Who else? Thank you thank you thank you for reading and reviewing :) You make MY heart flutter :P

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Midnight Rendezvous

I saw the update when I got to work and so I quickly finished a write-up for my boss so that he wouldn't interrupt me when I read. I took my laptop to the café and am now having a mocha latte and reading your story. It feels like I am doing something very naughty, but it is delicious, like chocolate truffles. *waves hand in front of face and bows head to read* Now, let me read!

Oooh, my heart is a flutter. This is so suspenseful.

Instinct told her to call him a smarmy prat and rush away, but her mind reminded her that this was the boy she had been exposing her soul to for five months; she didn’t even want to think about what her heart was telling her. -- loved this line!

He was upset, but he allowed her to catch up with him. Aww, *swallows hard* what a sweetie.

As his eyes caught hers she smiled, then, as her luck would have it, she slipped on the next step and slid the rest of the way down the stairs on her bottom. -- Okay, I laughed out loud in the café at that, and I think people now believe me to be completely bonkers. Ginny, is turning out to be quite the klutz!

“Are you disappointed it was me?” She focused on looking everywhere but at him.

“No.”

She felt the familiar fluttering. “But you’ve hated me all your life…”

“Things change,” he stated with conviction before walking forward again.


-- These are swooning, lines, my dear. They induce swooning in a woman. *grins*

“When I got her knickers off it looked like her bits had caught on fire…then someone put that fire out with a screw driver.” -- Ha ha! I snorted aloud at this (although I‘m not sure how you could snort internally), and I was also drinking. Luckily, the hot beverage did not spew out my nose. That would have been painful as it would have been unattractive.

Oh, my dear. I loved this. The only problem was that it ended! *folds arms across chest* I mean, really! How dare you?

As for the beta position, *raises hand higher than everyone else and starts shoving girls out of the way* Me! Me! Me! Pick me! I want to be the first! Just send me a message via FIA, and I will email you back. ^_~

Author's Response:

Oh my, between you, EclecticJello, and choravenclaw I'm afraid I'll disappoint someone by choosing. What is a girl to do?

 

You picked all of my favorite lines from this chapter :) You are a fantastic reviewer. I always look forward to your reviews :) I think the best way to read fanfiction is with a mocha latte in a place where every one can look at you like you're a maniac when you laugh, or sigh, or squee :D 

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Finding Your Feet

Wow, this got accepted fast!

*squirms with glee*

I was going to go to bed, but then I saw that this was updated, and I had to review. I really like this chapter and not because I beta-ed it. *smirks* Draco's voice is so strong. You can really see that it's him when he speaks. He's also a sarcastic little bugger, and I love seeing that side of him. I also adore his casual compliments. I mean, some will write Draco unnaturally sappy; you do not. He is only ever nice around Ginny, which you can see by how he interacts with Daphne. And that is the way it should be! Draco can be sweet, but he must only reserve this for Ginny. And when he does it, he must be somewhat of an arse about it as he is here.

He's so subtle and absent with his compliments to Ginny that it really makes your heart flutter, and that is what this fic does to me: makes my heart skip a beat. It's just the right amount of sweet.

As for Ginny, she is perfect here. She is jealous (as she should be), but she is still Ginny. She is still confident but not overtly so. She can joke and insult with the best of them (the best being Draco, of course), and she can hold her own. No wonder Draco likes her.

Megan, you are doing a wonderful job, and this is the exact kind of DG fiction we need to read: Draco and Ginny as teens, being shy, being snarky, having fun, getting hearts crushed. Yes, indeed. This is what we all need to read: life.

Author's Response: I have the biggest goofy grin on my face right now. I'm not sure it will go away for some time. You are just the bestest person in the whole entire universe, Lia. You always get exactly what I was going for and it makes me a happy happy fangirl :) I just can't wait until you get to the ending. I really really can't. hehe

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Green Eyed Monster

This was a chapter chalked full of suspense and romance. I, obviously, loved it! While I know that you wanted to save the 'Ace' explanation for later, I think a little tease here is good, as you can see you have piqued Kim's curiosity. ^_~

Draco is sweet, but not uncharacteristically so. He is sarcastic and funny, and yet the boy can pull off a puppy-dog expression. I love how he is so blasé about Daphne breaking up with him. lol. Only Draco would shrug his shoulders and act/be unaffected.

I must confess that you do not have me hating Harry. Perhaps I am meant to, but ... let's just say, I think he's being an obnoxious teenage boy. You have done a really good job of making each an every character act like an actual teen. They are not all Dawson Creek-like (each with a vocabulary that surpasses my own), nor are they Clueless or 90210. They're real.

And the kissing scene? Perfect. It is exactly what I expected to see. I was very satisfied to watch it play out like that. It wasn't too drawn out or too quick. It was just right. I am also very pleased with Ginny's response: she was hesitant and felt guilty (like she should), but she gave in to her desires (like she should).

Great chapter, Meg.

~Lia

Author's Response: Eeee! Your reviews ALWAYS make me squeal in delight! You always always always get exactly what I was going for and I think that is just amazing!!! jfkdsa You are just so fantastic words can't describe :D I have to admit that this kiss scene was my favorite to write out of the whole entire story, though the epilogue did come close :)

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Level the Playing Field

When you look at it on here, it is a short chapter, but reading it you know that it is the right length for its intended purpose. Ginny needed to have a moment when she could stop and think about what she's doing and what she should do.

I like that she took the time to do this. So many fics will have her instantly choose Draco and not think about the consequences of cheating on Harry (I am guilty of this, by the way. lol).

And she better choose Draco, or I'm going to change your storyline! Hehe

Good chapter. It builds the suspense for the next chapter, which I will get around to beta-ing, after work. Just know that Kim's in line before you. ^_~

Sorry my review was less than stellar. My weekend has drained me. I'm drooling on my desk right now. I shall make up for this with a lovely owl and a better review next time. ^_~

Author's Response: Oh darling, you could never possibly be anything less than stellar <3 Take your time, I'm in no rush, as I've told you before. And Kim totally should go before me :P it gives me something to read. Hehe.

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Drastic Times

I apologise in advance for this review being rubbish. I am completely knackered and trying to write fifty pages in three days (yay). So I will make up for this in my next review. Promise. ^^ (I also sent you an owl on this chapter anyway).

To begin, I really liked this break-up. It was awkward and sad but ended up becoming mutual. To summarise: it was believable. I hate fics where Ginny crushes Harry or Harry is a whinging git. This was the right way to break up. Me likes, Meg. *nods*

I am also happy that you didn't have Draco and Ginny immediately get together -- you had to make Draco jealous first! Lol, nice. And the fact that you brought the journal back made me squirm in my seat and giggle. *nods emphatically*

The arguing leading up to the kissing scene was perfect, and the last line: “I’ve decided against being a self-respecting Slytherin.” -- Hehe, perfect!

Excellent job as usual, Meg.

Author's Response:

Your reviews are never rubbish! I so hope you manage to finish, but it will be entirely understandable if you can't!

 I love that you liked the break up :) I really am trying to keep them as true to real teenagers as possible, which is surprisingly hard considering I'm still one! :P 

Mmph, I love your reviews, they're always spot on to what I want to hear! In short thank you so much for being a great reviewer and an even better beta <3<3<3

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Cat Out of the Bag

Meg, I loved this chapter. It was very dramatic and sweet, yet just the right amount of both. While I agree with Kim that their peers over-reacted, it also makes perfect sense. High School students are never over-dramatic. *rolls eyes and smirks*

I like how you didn't take the easy way out and had everyone act as though it was nothing big. There is real adversary. Plus, including Lucius’ letter was a nice touch. Of course Draco’s family would never approve.

I love Draco's explanation of why he calls Ginny 'Ace'. It's very fitting. I always like it when he gives her other nicknames, ones her family or Harry don't use. It makes their relationship appear more special. He wants the part of Ginny that no one else sees -- his Ginny.

The love scene at the end was very sweet and fitting. I liked it quiet a lot. I’m not a big fan of reading or writing smut (ignore Mine, Forever), so I liked it in stories where it has always been sweet and tasteful for it to stay that way. You have stayed true to your story, which is always lovely to see in an author.

I have this feeling that you have something in store for us though. Especially when you owl me saying, “I can’t wait ‘til you read the end”. Lol. That and your Draco is too perfect sometimes. *eyes you warily* I’m onto you, Megan!

Overall, wonderful job on this chapter.

Author's Response: I still can't wait!!! I wish you weren't so busy!! I'm like on the edge of my chair waiting for the email! OMG!! :)

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Love Is All You Need

I hate Hermione! I know that Ron will always take Harry and Hermione's side over Ginny's, but how stupid is he? Why would they seek him out to tell them that Ginny was going to tell them something like that unless she had really seen it? It would make more sense for them to just deny it afterwards. I generally don't like to see Harry and Hermione in such a bad light. I hope we are given some sort of explanation for this (or they apologise to Ginny). I guess I'll have to read what you sent me to find out. ^_~ Damn me for being so busy with work!

I really liked Draco in this. He was very supportive, a very good boyfriend. I like that he snapped back at her when she flipped out on him for no reason. He doesn't deserve that shite. It let's us know that Snarky!Draco is still there. He hasn't gone completely soft on us. *smirks*

Good chapter. I will beta the next one tonight after work. ^_^

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm still dancing with anticipation. Read, woman! Read! You know I'm just kidding :) but I really can't wait.

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Head Over Heels

Something is definitely up with Draco. I wish your beta would just hurry up and finish this. I mean, she's a real--oh, wait, that's me. She's doing a great job. Keep it up. ^_~

This chapter makes up for the last chapter where I wanted to punch Hermione in the back of the neck. It's nice to see that Ron didn't rat her out. Maybe he is finally beginning to understand that Ginny is not at fault. And, like high school, the students will get over the whole drama of what happened, and thankfully Ginny realises this. The last line is very foreboding, by the way. Me thinks you have surprises in store. ^_~

Lovely chapter. Very cute.

Author's Response: Me thinks you do know me too well, Lia. :)

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned

Draco is going to reap what he has sown. What an asshole. I mean, I can sympathise with his situation, but he should have never dragged Ginny into it if he thought it could never work. But then, we rarely think ahead when it comes to using our heart to think, nay? I love how Ginny storms off. She showed a lot of restraint by not crying, breaking down, or throwing things at him (I would have done all three). Good for her. The last line is awesome, btw, so foreboding. Lol! I can't wait to read the epilogue. Oh, wait, I am! ^^ I shall have it back to you later today.

Wonderful chapter. Although it isn't a happy one, it isn't abrupt either. There were signs, and I'm glad you played it out like this.

~Lia

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Epilogue

I like this ending much better than your previous one. If anyone had known that your last chapter was your actually ending, they would have really wanted to lynch you! ^_~ So everyone should be happy that they received an epilogue.

I like the bitter-sweet endings, the ones that gives us some hope and yet some pain as well. I am happy that this epilogue was from Draco's PoV since the rest of the story is from Ginny's. This shows us how Draco has suffered--and deservedly so.

It's so open-ended, and I love that. I can either imagine that Ginny still marries Harry (yuck), or that Draco divorces Astoria and gets back together with Ginny (yay). There are so many possibilities.

Well-written, my dear. While some might not like this ending, I do because it is the most realistic one, for me. ^_^

*big hug* ~Lia

Twisted Reality by CCC    (Reviews - 39)

Ginny's reality becomes mixed with her dreams. Which life is real? Why would her family insist she's married to Harry when she knows she's married to Draco?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2926 | Read count: 3158 | Published: Nov 14, 2009 | Updated: Nov 14, 2009
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Date: Nov 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I sense that this is a sequel to a story you have written before. You must inform me which story has them both housed in Grimmauld Place together. I demand it! ^_~

I really like this short story. You're really left scratching your head as to what is real and what is fantasy.

I'd like to think that Ginny would fall in love with Draco of her own free will, but this is almost as good. *laughs* As much as I do love Harry, any story that has Draco one-uping the Boy Wonder is A-Okay in my books! ^_~

Author's Response: Hmmm, I've written a few Grimmauld place stories. This one stands alone. I'm glad you liked it.

Of Dirty Pillows and Polyjuice Potion by Loveable Punk    (Reviews - 10)

Winner of the 2009 Fic Exchange Award for "Best Smut".
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4131 | Read count: 5418 | Published: Nov 24, 2009 | Updated: Nov 26, 2009
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Date: Nov 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Of Dirty Pillows and Polyjuice Potion

Lol, naughty. I'm not usually one for reading smut, but this story was highly amusing, portraying Draco as the smarmy bastard that he is. I do love Dominant!Draco. Yum. ^_^

Author's Response: I always felt smarmy (great word) and sarcastic was the way to go for a fun Draco. Thanks for the review. :D

Distracted by like a falling star    (Reviews - 23)

Draco is distracted by red hair in the library.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4655 | Read count: 3533 | Published: Nov 25, 2009 | Updated: Nov 26, 2009
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Date: Nov 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Ginny is feisty! Hehe, very funny and very cute. This is an amusing one-shot.

The only thing he got out of that encounter was that he got to rib Blaise about the fact that Loony thought he was cute. And that didn’t even go as planned; Blaise had simply raised an eyebrow slowly, as if pondering the possibilities of going down that path. -- Hehe, nice hint at the often played Luna/Blaise sub-relationship in DG fics. *thumbs up*

All-in-all, I thought this was rather adorable and funny story. You did a great job. ^^

Christmas Cheer by MemoriesFade    (Reviews - 18)

Ginny didn't know that she would end up in the desert on Christmas, nor did she expect to see Malfoy there. But 'tis the season to be jolly, and spread some Christmas cheer along the way.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Molly Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3221 | Read count: 2912 | Published: Dec 14, 2009 | Updated: Dec 15, 2009
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Date: Dec 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Cheer

I've noted that your Molly is always a b*tch! Lol.

I really liked the banter between Ginny and Draco. It was very in character.

“Done checking me out Weasley?” -- Now this made me laugh out loud at work. Heheh. That is so something that Draco would say.

I especially liked the euphemism for Christmas cheer. Very clever and droll.

Well done, Ann. It one of those fluffy, funny fics you want to read when you're having a bad day. ^_^

~Lia

Author's Response: Lol, I didn't even realize that. I'm going to work on a story where Molly isn't mean. I really think this piece was rushed. But it was just a bit of fun. Thanks for the review, Lia.

In Which the Feast Becomes a Farce by Boogum    (Reviews - 11)

Ginny had wanted it to be perfect. Draco had wanted it to be over. But no one can guarantee they'll always get what they want, even at Christmas.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: The Married Life of Draco Malfoy
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4169 | Read count: 4482 | Published: Dec 14, 2009 | Updated: Dec 15, 2009
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Date: Dec 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In Which the Feast Becomes a Farce

The blond glowered at his wife, who was currently singing along to said torture. He was horrified to discover that she was even including actions.

Kim, do NOT kill me with laughter at the beginning of a fic, okay? This is not fair!

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“How do you think they’ll feel when you greet them with a slurred hello?”

“Sober.”


OMG, I love your banter/dialogue. Such dry wit, m'dear. ^_~

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“I know, but I’m sure the dinner will feel just as meaningful when we’ve satisfied our hunger on a bird that doesn’t taste like ash.”

Damn you for always making me cackle at work. I swear everyone here thinks I'm insane(r).

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Severus Snape, who had long tired of the night’s excitement, not to mention the people surrounding him, had somehow got caught in the way of one of Harry’s flying kicks.

OMFG!!! I am crying now. Flying kicks. LMAO! Kim, please, stop! PLEASE!

This was brilliant. Your already wonderful talent as a writer just improves with each day. This was excellently executed. I was thoroughly enthralled and moved (to laughter and tears) by your hilarious dialogue and amusing turn of events.

~Lia

Author's Response: Can you tell that I had a lot of fun with this? I thought the flying kicks added a nice touch. ^_^

Hit and Run by bere    (Reviews - 17)

Both hands toyed with the envelope, flipping it over and over again. After a few moments, she ripped open the top of the envelope, finally tired of her own hesitance. A black and white picture slipped onto the floor, yellow around the edges from years of hiding in some wayward shoebox.

Draco Malfoy. Draco Malfoy was her next hit.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4736 | Read count: 1797 | Published: Dec 18, 2009 | Updated: Dec 18, 2009
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Date: Dec 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a rather lovely short story. I could actually see Ginny as the assassin. Some people tend to fixate on the old Ginny, who was quiet and shy Ginny. Then there is the Ginny that some choose to forget: the self-righteous, dogmatic, pontificating redhead. I can very much see her blindly following the Order's 'orders', even if it meant killing her own brother for the greater good. She sees things in either black or white. Yet, I can also see her being seized with irrevocable guilt afterwards. She is an impulsive girl, in my mind, and impulsiveness leads to regret. I think you did a nice combination of past, present, and future world.

As for Draco, I really like the fact that you made him actually want to serve the Dark Lord. He is, obviously, someone who can see the shades or the grey in life. He is also worn, broken, maybe even defeated. He is somewhat of a shell of the boy he once was. His plight gives us pause to pity him for he is the instrument of his own downfall, in a literal and metaphorical sense. He both plays and is played upon. He is lost. It’s very touching.

While others may have been shocked at the ending, I saw it coming since the beginning of your story -- Draco wanted a 'break', an escape. Besides, it was the only fitting way to it, nay?

Well done. I’m glad you posted this plot bunny. ^^

First Kisses by Januarybaby    (Reviews - 41)

Pansy Parkinson spun the bottle. Time seemed to slow down for Draco and he just knew that it was going to land on him. It did.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1153 | Read count: 4073 | Published: Dec 18, 2009 | Updated: Dec 20, 2009
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Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When they broke apart, the only sound Draco could hear was that of Ron hitting the floor as he fainted.

Best description of Ron, ever.

Author's Response: That's my favourite line. I'm glad you liked it too. :)

Author's Response: That's my favourite line. I'm glad you liked it too. :)

Restoration by Ada Achlys    (Reviews - 58)

After the war, they rebuild.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 12434 | Read count: 8562 | Published: Dec 23, 2009 | Updated: Feb 09, 2010
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Date: Dec 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Simply delightful. I really do like this introduction. I have to run now, but I promise to give a proper review upon my return. I just wanted to let you know that this is an intriguing premise, and I intend to follow this.

Reviewer: Incognito Signed
Date: Jan 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ooooh, I really liked this chapter. Immensely. It's so cute and awkward (Ginny is awkward, what I mean).

It executed a perfect backflip in her direction and then performed what Ginny would have called a roundhouse kick were it human.

That actually made me cackle. Lol. I do love your Ginny in this story. She's such a little firecracker, and Draco is still arrogant. Mmm, yes, yes. I like this. I shall definitely be tracking this story. ^^ Nice job.

Scars by Januarybaby    (Reviews - 6)

I run my fingers lightly over the raised welts that cover my sleeping lover’s back. They are red and ugly, and even though I know that they rarely cause him pain, I can’t force myself to do anything but touch them gently, so very gently.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1765 | Read count: 3115 | Published: Jan 04, 2010 | Updated: Jan 04, 2010
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Date: Jan 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is very sad and poignant. I really empathise for Draco and am glad that he has Ginny. Very well written, my dear.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. It means a lot to me as you are one of my favourite authors. I'm glad you liked it. :)