- Best Prose (Passage that knocks you on your ass)
Lost and Found
His blond hair, matted with rain and mud lay still in the bitter breeze, and storm-colored eyes were open wide with nothing to see. She placed her lips to his in a final goodbye; at least this time, the fate had given her a way to tell him that she loved him.
For the Love of the Game
Ginny smirked down at Draco. “Gwenog Jones just gave me her robe. Say goodbye to your private collection, Draco, because you are so going to lose this wager.”
“It's all right,” Draco wrapped one hand around Ginny's ankle. “I have what I really want right here.”
The Pike
"No one has ever loved me before," Draco panted, his hips moving like pistons between her thighs. Their eyes locked. "And I've never loved anyone either. You are the first."
"The last," she corrected him. "I'm also the last."
The Black Alder Tree
Ginny looked at him and wished that she could hate him - she wished she could hate him for playing a part in all of this and thinking that he could still comfort her. She wished she could hate Neville, for bringing this upon them, just as she wished she could hate the Order, for taking Draco away from her. She wished that she could hate someone other than herself, but she couldn't - she couldn't hate them. They were all just doing what they believed was right, what they believed would help make the world better. She envied them, their conviction and their faith. They all knew what they believed.
Ginny Weasley, on the other hand, had no idea what to believe anymore.
The Truth Will Out
"Chocolate?"
Ginny's eyes narrowed to slits. "Why would I want chocolate?"
"You told me that you crave chocolate around this time," Draco explained cautiously.
"Oh? And what is this time?" Ginny asked with an edge of danger to her voice.
"You know," Draco uttered uncomfortably.
"No, I don't know," Ginny replied innocently. "You'll have to tell me."
Draco glanced around to make sure they were alone. "It's your grumpy time," he whispered hurriedly.
Seekers and Secrets
It wasn't that he couldn't find a name for himself anywhere he wanted to. It was that he wanted to do something that would force even his toughest critics to eat their words. That part of him still had the intense need to prove his own skill, that Potter had always just been lucky in school, was a notion he refused to entertain. Still, he had his smirk permanently etched on his face as he walked to the pitch, the latest model Firebolt on his shoulder. He was taller than most Seekers, but the days of Krum and brutish Seekers was over. Now the teams were looking for lithe and agile.
Lost and Found
Her heartbeat mocked her, because it was still beating, and his no longer would. How could this have happened? She had already lost him once, why a second time?
“Ginny, I’m sorry, I had to! Look at him! He took the mark!”
Harry’s reasoning made so little sense to her brain, nothing mattered now. Ginny had thought she was going to be okay, that she could have survived his death, but in the course of a few minutes her world had been resurrected, only to come crashing down around her.
His blond hair, matted with rain and mud lay still in the bitter breeze, and storm-coloured eyes were open wide with nothing to see. She placed her lips to his in a final goodbye; at least this time, the fate had given her a way to tell him that she loved him.
Man in the Box
“He didn't know what he was doing, didn't know what he would say, only that the world had almost ended and he had never even spoken to her, touched her. He was not unaware that he was not a brave man, but as he slipped through the door into the darkness that precedes dawn, he felt the air thicken with destiny and fulfillment and only the fact that he wasn't sure he'd ever have a chance to see her again made him keep moving forward.”
The Black Alder Tree
"No, Ginny, don't - don't cry," Draco said frantically, brushing away her teardrops with his thumb. "Why are you even -"
Ginny shook her head. "I don't know," she choked out, half-laughing at the silliness of it all. Draco was the one whose life was literally falling apart, and here she was, crying.
Draco pulled her close, and she knew that he was trying to make this hurt go away, just as he had with all the others, all those nights in the past. And it broke her heart - how he tried so hard to save her, when he couldn't even save himself.
Finding Time at Bamburgh View
"I have done many things in life that I regret. Most of which you are no doubt fully acquainted with. The thing that I regret the most, though, is the fact that once again I seem to have completely messed things up between us."
"Again?" she asked, her voice straining to be above a whisper.
"Again. You'll come back to me though. I know you will." Draco leaned closer, his mouth hovering over hers. When he spoke, there was a knowing tone to this voice that sent a shiver up her spine. "We've tried every way we can, you and me, Ginny. Each time something slightly different changes, and each time we end up just a little bit closer. You'll be amazed by some of the stories."