Reviews For Overshadowed
Name: redprincess reviewed Prolouge/Chapter 1 on Jan 03, 2008 09:21 am
Awesome Fic. Please update soon. I am most interested to know how Draco can keep the secret from Ginny.
Name: Jemma Hammond reviewed Prolouge/Chapter 1 on Dec 12, 2005 11:56 pm
The story was good, what I want to know is who does Ginny want, Harry or Malfoy?
Name: enchanted18 reviewed Prolouge/Chapter 1 on Mar 10, 2005 04:04 am
I love your title.:-)
Name: tkmoore (tkmoore@mchsi.com) reviewed Prolouge/Chapter 1 on Sep 01, 2004 06:53 pm
It was a very good beginning, well written and a lot of detail. The next chapter is also good and we see the beginning of a plot I think. Not a huge Hermoine fan so loved seeing her get her butt chewed off. Some characters were not as I picture them but that's why this is your story. And it also makes it very interesting to see them in a different light. Was wondering what Draco meant by the only reason they were still around was due to his interference? Will that be explained later in the story? All and all a good beginning.........update soon so we can see where it goes. TTFN Kelly

Author's Response: I'm not that big of a Hermione fan, either! that's why I did it. What Draoc said will be explained in chapter's 4&5 which are on the way. Chapter 3 should be up today or tomorrow. Just uploaded it... Thanks for reviewing!
Name: skully reviewed Prolouge/Chapter 1 on Aug 31, 2004 04:41 pm
Okay...I may be wrong but I think that some of the words in the prophecy are mixed up or missing. I thought the transition from hery thinking about Harry and the dream was a little rough. Maybe try more spacing next time, or italicized text. I'm not meaning to be rude, just trying to be helpful. I am really intrigued (bad spelling I know). I can't wait to read Chapters 4&5 when Draco and Dumbledore have a chat!

Author's Response: Nah, it's word for word. But after reading it again, I thought so, too. Thanks for the advice! I fixed it. I'll try to get those chapters up asap.
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