Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Another You, Another Me on Sep 10, 2006 01:25 pm

~A perfect chapter.~

Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Remember Me on Sep 10, 2006 10:12 am

~I dont like that he has no memory.~

Name: Sammy reviewed Life, Interrupted on Jan 03, 2006 08:44 pm

Oh God.  I just read the whole thing, start to finish.  I've seen fic like this before, where someone loses their memory and has to come back.  But the twists you put in...you made it so much more human.  Thank you so much.

Name: Lyndsie F reviewed Life, Interrupted on Jun 25, 2005 06:59 am

Overall I liked this fic. I like your writing style and the plot was believable. But of course, it's the negative things that always stick out the most and what I remember... so here are a few things that could use improvement: -You nearly always make things possessive when they shouldn't be. Such as saying that the kids "are Malfoy's". That technically makes sense if you are saying that they belong so someone with the name Malfoy. However, if you are going to say that someone is something themselves there should be no apostrophe. Such as "They are kids" or "They are Weasleys". If you want to say that something belongs to someone else then you say "They are Ginny's kids" or "Those are the kid's toys". Of course, the last noun can be dropped in the right circumstances. Q: "Whose toys are those?" A: "They're Seth's." - Keep an eye on the difference between your/you're. This error was made quite often (but not always). What helps me is I aks myself "Can I replace this part of the sentence with 'you are'?" If you can, it means it's 'you're'. If you can't, 'your'. - A plot thing (which is really only my opinion so it doesn't mean as much): I thought the whole thing ended very suddenly with that last chapter. There were a lot of loose ends that I felt were left dangling. Whatever happened to Blaise? What about the Potters and the baby? Stuff like that. I also thought the scene where Draco wakes up in New York to be a little odd because the stuff he remembered and the stuff he didn't did not seem to be very consistent (but then, this was due to magically influence so maybe that explains it). Ok, so I really do like this story. I wouldn't have read the whole thing nor reviewed if I didn't. I think you're a great writer with lots of potential, and I wanted to show you some things that you can improve to make your work even better. Keep working; I'm reading. :)

Name: oriental_chica reviewed Life, Interrupted on Feb 08, 2005 03:52 pm

Great fic... i think i would have preferred it more if somehow, all his memories came flooding back... but i know you wrote the story like this for a reason, and it really is quite spectacular.

Name: mary reviewed Life, Interrupted on Sep 28, 2004 02:58 pm

very interesting fic, one of the few that focuses o d/g after they are married

Name: Manraviel reviewed Life, Interrupted on Jun 17, 2004 06:17 pm

It was a good ending but I would have liked to know what happened after Ginny returned to the Manor and found Draco. It seems you jumped the entire part.

Name: Manraviel reviewed Friends and Family on Jun 17, 2004 05:51 pm

Hmmm...Blaise and Molly talk to Draco. There's a lot of talking going on in this fic. Not that it's a bad thing. I am so in love with your fic.

Name: Manraviel reviewed Decisions Made on Jun 17, 2004 05:34 pm

Oh dear! A cliffhanger! And no Ginny can't just make Draco go. They *will* work it out won't they.

Name: Manraviel reviewed Father on Jun 17, 2004 05:10 pm

Wow. I feel so sorry for Draco. You have done a really good job here.

Name: Manraviel reviewed Here With You on Jun 17, 2004 04:36 pm

I guess Ginny's disbelieving scene made sense. After all the grief it isn't easy to have your world rocked like that. And I was glad to see that Harry and Ron are okay and happy with his coming back. And Molly dotes on her only son-in-law...hehe no wonder Ron was scowling.