Name: Funnykido reviewed Search Party on Oct 26, 2004 12:35 pm
Good! As usual! Any D/G Action coming up? I have to say you wrote the last DG scene really well! And I cant wiat to find out whos behind the whole spellbook/unicorn blood thing! Keep up the good work!
Name: Funnykido reviewed Corridor Discussions on Oct 12, 2004 11:42 am
YES!!! FINALLY!!! SOME DG ACTION!! Do we, as your faithful fans, get some more next chapter? : ) pleeeez VERY good story! One of my favorites!!

Author's Response: maybe not in the next chapter...there is a decent amount of fluff to come (the story is over 42 chapters long so far), but I can't say when....Thanks for reading!
Name: Esus reviewed Corridor Discussions on Oct 12, 2004 06:24 am
Last time I was really happy, after seeing so many reviews... where are you all gone now? Uh, probably they run away from me and my crazy comments -.-
So, no problem, I'll going on annoying you, even because here I've got all your attention, so why waste it :P?

Chapter 17
I've known it... I've hated him from the first instant and I was right! Even if I guess you describe him in this way just to make us hate him :P! Well, he is really like Draco in some ways, but he's also different. He isn't so brilliant and smart, he was too easily caught by Ginny.
And it was quite obvious that he wasn't a good person; but, now, after knowing he's a Death Eater, I don't know what to think...
And, as for Gabrielle, it was too much easy. I mean "Nothing is as it seems" is my mantra reading this story and I must keep it in mind!
And you know, probably we'll found out that Draco knows everythign... tsk, mr I-know-it-all (second only to Miss Granger :P)... well, it's the second time he saved her, but i start to imagine that with Darien is no over. She can feel his eyes following her, it's no a case. Well, I'll look for my answers in next chapter.

Chapter 18
Well, Draco knows.(dear Drakie, you want to be better than Hermione? - Me) (But, I'm a Malfoy, of course I'm better than her - Draco, with proud expression)
Tsk, it was obvious. But, now, my feeling about Darien are much more confused, damn! Probably he isn't bad and maybe at the end I'll like him. And I don't know if it would be a good thing -.-
Really, you can't make me hate him, and then make me like him!
But, I can't understand Ginny mood: she can use pure magic and she's scared. Ok, I'm fine with it. She doesn't trust Draco. Fine with it also. But, why she can use her beautiful and brilliant brain??? No, she has to be overwhelmed with her temper and her fear... well, I don't know what to think. I need some more clues I think.

Chapter 19
Well, so Darien isn't bad. As I have figured. (Displeased? - Darien)(Yeah, I'm not happy at all. I decided that I didn't like you and now I can't see why I have to change my mind - Me).
And I still have doubts about Gabrielle... she's strange. Very strange. (You doubt of everyone, except Draco? Remeber that the all mess started because of him! - Ginny, losing her temper)(Well, but Draco was simply trying to do something good. It isn't his fault if he isn't able to do it - Me) (Me? Doing something good? Are you crazy?! And it isn't my fault at all, talk with the writer, she ideated all! - Draco)(Sod off you all! I must go on with my review now! - Me)
*mumble* What I was saying? Oh, yes...
So the famous scream is Ginny's scream... but the potion? Wasn't it suppose to give her a dreamless sleep? Well, let's see what Draco would do to handle this situation ^^!


Author's Response: It looks like you're working on a reviewing record, there! lol Your reactions to the chapters are so great! And, I wouldn't worry about the number of reviews I get, I've been posting on two other sites for quite awhile now, so for a lot of readers, this story is old news! I just found out about the archive, and wanted to bring it, because all D/G shippers should support a site dedicated to the greatest ship in the HP fandom *bias*
Name: Corvidae reviewed A Bargain on Oct 08, 2004 11:11 am
wait, what happened, it stopped?! i love it, i need it i want mooooore! great story *-*
Name: Silver Dreams reviewed A Bargain on Oct 08, 2004 08:25 am
you really do a wonderful job creating the emotions and reactions of both Draco and Ginny. I was really surprized with the ways and personalities of Draco's aunt, uncle, and cousins. I like the contrast to Draco's father...and if you think about it, they really do need to be warm and kind if you want it to be believable that they would do everything in their power to protect the unicorns--a creature so pure and beautiful. You have made Draco into such a believable character! I liked his masked (almost) anger when Ginny was being threatened. I really see that as how he would appear. I absolutly love how Draco's cousins disclosed to Ginny that they had seen "the way he looks at her when he knows she isn't watching" that is absolutly adorable! I love how Draco has feelings for Ginny, but he keeps them hidden..it's so wonderful. You have done an awsome job with Ginny as well. I love her fiery temper masked with ice. Great idea...and fitting to her career. I also love how you have incorperated Draco's love for her energy...it's something Draco would like. It seems that Draco would prefere a woman who will argue with him and stand up for her beliefes, not a passive woman who will always agree with him. Ginny is frustrating me so much with her close-mindedness! Argh! WHile I totally understand where she is coming from (her experiances in the war--btw, what WAS that memory?--and in her first year) it still seems like she should be willing to see things from another perspective. However, I can see that she is beginning to understand a little...maybe her mind is opening a little, but I hope she will start to see that "not everything is how it seems"! I love it, and I can't wait to read more!!!
Name: Esus reviewed A Bargain on Oct 08, 2004 07:06 am
I'm happy that you like my comments and that I'm not annoying you. Generally, if I love a fic, I leave always a long review (being myself a writer, I know that an autor would like them ^_-), even with only my impression on the plot and not on the style (I mean, I'm not English mother-tongue, I don't think I can really judge your grammar).
So, even this time, I'll put here again my impression... this time, I saw that someone else reviewed your story and I'm really happy about it!
Chapter 13
So, Draco begings to worry about little Weasel. So sweet **! But I think he will not understand it until the end -.-!
No pb, for now this is enough. And Ginny anger is described very well, I can merely feel it. You work very well with emotions, they seems real. And I like it.
Also I'm starting to understand what Draco means, saying "nothing is what it seems".

Chapter 14
I can just repeat myself: your way of describes emotions is incredible. They suit to your characters, makin them real. I mean, Draco's reaction in the forest was so like him: rational, but passionate at the same time.
But little Ginny would appear a little strange with her lunatic mood... but I think it depends on what happened in her past, doesn't it?
And how that horrible cousin know about her? And how dare he call her a rat??? Secrets, secrets and more secrets down here!

Chapter 15
Unicorns? So, a secret was reveald. And, maybe, Mr Malfoy isn't so bad as Ginny thought. Well, very well, I'm glad of it. But, this chapter was different from others, it seems not enden, as you missed to say something very important. Don't know why, just a sensation, a vague feeling on my skin... well, I go on reading now **

Chapter 16
Explanations... just the right time I guess. Definitly, I hate that man, that Darien... I can't understand what he's looking for... maybe he's just scared of what Ginny may do after discovering what they are doing: dark magic. But, my heart ached reading Draco's narration: his father was a terrible git, but killing Narcissa I did the worst action. Now, I just want to know how Ginny will manage all this: she is still dead frightened by Tom and she's starting to love the ferret. So, it would be hard to her to decide... This time, I've loved the chapter... more plus emotional, realistic again: just, I haven't like Gabrielle at all... she confessed too much easily to Ginny his cousin plan. It's a little strange... she's a Malfoy, doesn't she?

Name: Virginia reviewed A Bargain on Oct 07, 2004 03:01 pm
Don't have much time, so I jus wanna sy that I'm loving your story, post more chapter soon! Luv Ninia
Name: Esus reviewed It Returns on Sep 28, 2004 04:07 am
I can't believe that nobody have reviewed this story in the last three chapters O_O! I mean, it is so beautiful, with real emotion and good writing! So, if you don't mind, now I'll repeat here my opinion, just to induce some others on doing the same! Chapter 9
Of course, Virginia. But please, call me Draco. After our meeting last night, I thought that we agreed that we would work as a team on this; team members don’t refer to each other so formally,” he said with a smirk.
R.O.T.F.L... really, for the second time I nearly fell down my chair reading it XD! Draco is amazing and has a brilliant brain (his was a slytherin, what a brilliant observation -.-): his referring to their meeting the night before... just a incredibnle double sense that surely made Ginny mad!
But the girl made her point showing no reaction... oh my god, I don't know which of them I want to win O_O!
Really, really interesting.
Just a thing seem strange to me: what was Ron speaking about???

Chapter 10
Harry Potter? He's still alive... damn it >. And the others, too. I mean, as Ginny said, they CAN risk their life, but Ginny will ever be always the little one who doen't have to down dangerous things? It's so frustrating!
But, as Draco's said, I'm also sure that Bulgaria ISN'T READY for her.

Chapter 11
GIRL-WHAT?! You wanna me to die!
Just a little remark to little Draco: all Weasley have red hair... but, what about the "blond" in your family? :P
So, this chapter is over... I nearly had a heartbreak, but it's nothing reported to what Ginny would have thought hearing it. I'm waiting hard for seeing her reaction... even if I must remeber she's a diplomatic. I think that Draco'll have a hard time wit her ^^!

Chapter 12
Little Ginny: too many questions and no answers... but you have my same doubts, so, probably, I'm not mad.
Why Draco's hiding everything to her? Why is he doing it? Why does he want that Bulgaria sign the act?
And, what's hided in Ginny's past?
You put a lot of strange things down here and I just want all the answers! Update asap!

Author's Response: Hehe, thanks sweetie! I've loved reading your reactions to the chapters, both here and on FF.net. You're a power reviewer! Thanks so much for your enthusiastic support, especially because so much of my stuff has been posted on other sites for so long, it's nice to see a fresh reaction to the earlier chapters (some of them, I had to go back to read what I'd written so I could understand your comments -- it's been so long since I glanced over them!)
Name: tkmoore (tkmoore@mchsi.com) reviewed Exposure on Sep 23, 2004 08:32 am
Sorry to lazy to sign in.........isn't that terrible?! I read your story today and I really have enjoyed it so far. A very different approach which is nice and difficult to do. It's very well written and I like the way you have developed Draco and Ginny's characters. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing with us. TTFN Kelly
Name: infiltrate the enemy fat kid reviewed Exposure on Sep 17, 2004 04:25 pm
Oh, well done! I am truly hooked on this story now. Definitely not a cliched story and it's captivating all the same - love it.
Name: Kristin Dianne reviewed Noble Scheming on Sep 16, 2004 01:56 pm
Interesting. Is it a portkey, I wonder? Who knows? Well, besides you, of course. I really enjoy this story...I like the role..actually job, that you have given Ginny. I think, since most people see Ginny as having a lot of spirit, that this is the type of job she would have. Draco is portrayed well, and I'm really interested in his history and relationship with his cousin, Harry's lover. :D I love how Draco see's Ginny's "inner fire" I love how that totally sparks his interest... so far, I love what you have and I can't wait to read more! xoxo---KD
Name: Esus reviewed Exposure on Sep 15, 2004 09:53 am
So, Draco's really affected for someone who isn't himself? So incredible! I mean, doing all he's doing just for the wife of his nemesis and for a nation that isn't his own, isn't much Malfoy's!
Probably, ages far from Hogwarts have changed him.
And Ginny... well, i think she's gone a bit out of her "Ice Queen" role. It would be funny seeing them arguing, using the same tecnqiques. Or, maybe, with SHE using Slytherin's tecniques against him... and his reaction.
But, now I just want to see what's going to happen next: will Ginny understand Draco's POV? And, is she going to be attracted from him (Draco's is well cooked yet, as I can see ^_-)?
I think they will not be enemies anymore, but I hope that they'll have a good relationship, even only friendship.
Write next chapter soon!
Name: tkmoore (tkmoore@mchsi.com) reviewed Ice Queen on Sep 09, 2004 05:06 am
I love the beginning very fast paced and funny with a little drama thrown in. Lots of D/G tension already.....I love it with a little Harry on the side. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Update soon. TTFN Kelly
Name: Esus reviewed Ice Queen on Sep 08, 2004 11:41 pm
Ice queen... well, I think that immage suits well to Ginny. A young woman, busy and dedicated to her work: you figure well the crazyness of her job, no time for herself, no time for her family, no time for her emotions. But, there's a man who can destroy her façade... uh, I'm really waiting for their meeting. What she would do for convince him? What would he want back for helping them?
I think that the two of them would crash into each other like a storm... but, maybe, don't exagerate with her passionate rage against Malfoy: she is one of the best at the Minister, doesn't she? Make her a perfect ice queen than!
Name: skully reviewed Ice Queen on Sep 08, 2004 06:43 pm
Okay, I really like where a view of Ginny being the high and respected business woman. It's a new concept and you have thought it out well, I can tell. I have to agree that you did over-use "cried" and there is one part where you said that Harry "slammed the door quietly." That kind of distracted me. I really like where this is going. It gives the reader a modern feeling and makes the world of Harry Potter realistic. Keep up the good work.
Name: beads reviewed Ice Queen on Sep 08, 2004 04:36 pm
Good story. I like the plot and everything behind it, and I can't wait to read more. The only thing I really noticed was how often you used the word "cried." Maybe it wasn't that often, but it just distracted me a bit. Love the ice queen bit.
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