Name: detlefren reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Aug 16, 2007 01:45 pm
Awww... That's really sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Name: Mollie reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Jun 08, 2007 02:05 am
This is cute. I love how you first show Draco watching her, and then here watching him and then you have them together. It was different, in a good way.
Author's Response: "Different in a good way" reminds me of a movie line. haha. Thanks for the review!!
Name: a beautiful lie reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Dec 17, 2006 05:46 pm
I love it so much!!! Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I really appreciate it.
Name: momo_myuh reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Sep 16, 2006 01:33 pm
i think it's cute ^^
Name: lissa4776 reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Sep 28, 2005 03:39 am
i really like this poem i think it would make a great short story think about and keep up the good work
Name: Tahira reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Dec 12, 2004 04:11 pm
I think the poem is so cute! You have a lot of talent and should continue writing more poetry and try writing stories (long or short) that are based on your poems and you'd have a great plot^_^ Keep up the gret work lol*
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was considering writing another story or poem, but I don't know how to start it. so...
Name: Nita G Isenhour reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Nov 06, 2004 05:29 pm
Good blank verse, and you're right, poetry doesn't always have to rhyme. I like the way their thoughts were mirroring each other. I wonder how many times that actually happens in real relationships.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really appreciate that. I also wonder if those kind of things, the mirroring thing, happens in real life. Thanks again.
Name: Anonymous reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Oct 14, 2004 03:54 am
This is sweet, but as poetry it's pretty bad. it had no rhythym and no symbolisim. This would make an alright story. It doesn't make a good poem.
Author's Response: Well, thank-you to whoever you are, but I learned in English class that poetry doesn't have to have specific rhythm or anything, I appreciate what you said though. Next time I try to write poetry or something I will remember to make it have some rhythm and symbolism and stuff...I knew that it wasn't too good, I appreciate the advice.
Name: dracos_beauty927 reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Oct 10, 2004 12:16 pm
I loved it! Your writing is very good!
Author's Response: Thank-You so much. I am really glad that you liked it. --Christine
Name: missparker reviewed
Just Another Lousy Day in Paradise on Oct 08, 2004 10:51 am
i like.
Author's Response: thanks...I wasn't sure if it was going to be any good :)