Name: jame reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Feb 04, 2005 02:47 pm
love it, but hasnt it been awhile since u updated? its such an amazing story so please update soon!
Name: EnchantedBelle reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 18, 2005 07:54 pm
I am sooooooo glad that you didn't have Draco and Ginny back together on this chapter, if you would of it would of been too soon. I loved that idea! I did a fic where Ginny moves to America but it's on whole diff situation. Well hope to read another update from you! Much love! xxxx
Name: Shriya reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 18, 2005 05:40 pm
I think all of us reading this story at this point are wondering how in hell Draco's ever going to redeem himself for what he did... but the greatest part about this fic is how it doesn't sidestep those, er... personality problems that are sure to come in the way in any relationship Ginny and Draco have. Hopefully you can continue this with some sort of realistic reaction from Ginny (now that she's in America, it's not like she can get much farther away from Malfoy, right?)
Name: Sorriane reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 18, 2005 08:01 am
Well it was just WOW, really intense chapter. The way Ginny reacts is just so well written you can almost feel it, it is just too much. And there's Narcissa, it must have been so painful for her, it's really difficult just to imagine and feel what your characters have been through. Please update soon. Really want to see the reactions of both Ginny and Draco.
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 07:02 pm
I've just read this story from the first chapter till this most recent post and all I could think off at the end was how intense everything is. It started out so cute and fluffy and has become dark and angsty. Though the material isn't light an happy, I do have to tell you that you've really connected with the reader by making their lives not-so-perfect. It's the bumps that make us human and which have brought these characters to life. Great job!
Name: D/G fan reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 05:42 pm
First, let me say that all your fics are wonderful. Unfortunately I've been struggling reading this story off and on. I've been trying to read this fic because your others have been beautiful. I can't see how Ginny can forgive Draco. I'm having a terrible time reading this especially the way you write how Ginny's feels and reacts towards anyone associated with him. I feel sorry for Draco because you written him as an awful brute. His mother and friend are disappointed in him as an individual. He lost his sense of being a powerful enigma to rapist. I don't know what to think, but I hope it works out in some sort of twisted way. Sorry, if I sound horrible, but I really do enjoy reading your stories, so hopefully everything will work out.
Name: rembrandt reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 04:19 pm
oh wow, absolutely amazing. there is no way I'm going back to studying Chemistry now...I love this story. The characters, the romance, the wonderful plot, it's like a great soap opera! (In a good way of course) Thank you so much for updating! I had to see what would happen...but this was completely unexpected. Will Ginny find love or closure in the good old US of A? Love your story, am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 04:12 pm
*huggles Ginny* The poor girl has been through so very much. It's just gut wrenching. Hopefully a little time and distance will help her gather her thoughts. And I'm glad that Narcissa was disgusted with Draco - she can't fix this mess. He's going to have to figure out how to fix it himself - if he can. I can't believe Luna would forward letters, but I suppose she's trying to make her friend happy again. I wonder how long it will take Gin to get up the guts to read one, if she ever does.
Name: caps reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 03:35 pm
Well this was an interesting chapter. I loved Narcissa taking Draco to task and then telling him to leave Ginny alone. I am glad he is taking his mum's advice. The end was an interesting twist and I can't wait to see Ginny's reaction to What Luna has done now.
If I haven't said it before let me say it now:
You are doing a very good job with this story despite the contraversiality that accompanies this story because of the rape. Your explanations behind the motivations of the characters and their psyche are what makes this story enjoyable and different from all the traditional Draco/Ginny Fics.
I can't wait to see how you develop Draco's character in relation to what has happened so far.
You have done an excellent job with the story so far- keep up the good work
Caps
Name: Cate reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 03:09 pm
Wow. Intense, almost painful and beautifully written...
Name: dawn03 reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 03:00 pm
WOW. I stopped reading your story after the rape incident because at the time I didn't think there was anyway to come back from that, but I have to say, you have done a really good job and now I understand why you put it in the story to begin with. I like that your story shows a side of Draco that is usually passed over in the "happy" Draco/Ginny stories and I can't wait to see what else will happen.
Name: The Emerald Queen reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 02:52 pm
I am loving this story. I was horrified when Ginny packed everything up and was heading to America, she really is running away and I don't think the distance will change anything. The person I love in this fic though (well the 2 people) are Luna and Zabini, they are really great. I am glad Luna has seen fit to intervine again and I really hope Ginny will read Malfoys letters.. though I can understand why she wont go back to him... Great chapter and I can't wait for you to update! - Laurels
Name: stormcloud reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 02:48 pm
wow - that was a good twist. I was a little worried that there might be some easy resolution. the question is can draco really change or will he revert back to old behaviour? great story and great writing... please update soon
Name: Dex reviewed
The Porskoff Ploy on Jan 17, 2005 02:42 pm
I love this story. It seems Ginny might have a sort of stolkholm syndrome. But the way you tell them is so convincing. Keep up the good writing.
Name: Dex reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 10, 2005 01:07 pm
This is such a great story. I like how you kicked Lucius out, but I have this sneaking suspicion that it's going to come back and haunt the couple. :) I hope you can get the next chp. up soon.
Name: EnchantedBelle reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 10, 2005 11:03 am
Too lazy to sign in! but I must tell you make Draco suffer a lil bit more before having Ginny talk with him. A person who rapes another person shouldn't be left off the hook that easily. He needs to learn that hurting the things you love is not an option! =] Very lovely story and I do find Narcissa to be amusing and very important as she is the one with pants on at the house. I do hope to read another chapter from you! Ttyls
Name: Rue reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 10, 2005 05:07 am
this is just getting better and better everytime i check for an update. anyway , got any plan on posting or sharing this fic. to checkmated?!
uhmm , thank you so much and hoping for the next chap. soon!
Name: london reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 09:01 pm
No freaking way!! This is the craziest thing I ever read! Crazy in a good way…Oh, Draco crying (made me cry too) and his mother goes to Lunas and Ginnys! Oh, I can’t wait for this to be finished. ::Jumps up and down wile clapping like a moron::. This chapter was GREAT!! And Blasie, oh I love him in this..Well I love him in everything, but particularly in this…
Sorry I don’t have anything of interest to say besides this is a fantastic story!!
Name: blondie07 reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 06:30 pm
omg that was a horribly sad chapter and its so frustrating cause i want to see ginny and draco back to together but at the same time i dont see how ginny could forgive him. well i hope things work out in the end.
Name: Tiffany reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 12:34 pm
Nice, I like it so far. . it's creative!
Name: Ladybleugonewilde reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 06:15 am
Ach!!...Oh my Lord, I won't have any fingernails left by the time you finish this story....I'm ecstatic that you updated so quickly....and hope you can maintain the same pace *consider my manicure, I beg of you!!...sobbing theatrically*
p/s....this story is so good!...-insert mind-blowing compliments here-
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 05:06 am
It's an awful way for Draco to learn that his actions do have dreadful consequences. The mess he created is almost beyond repair. Narcissa is a strong woman, tossing her husband out and learning that her son is a rapist in the span of the morning and not killing either of them. I suppose she knows how much this is eating at Draco. It must have been difficult for her to see her grown son cry. I have to give kudos to Luna for at least putting up a bit of a fight before being overwhelmed by Blaise and Narcissa. And I have to feel sorry for Ginny, being tagged teamed by Luna, Blaise and Narcissa there at the end...
Name: stormcloud reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 04:41 am
You are on a roll - I am so pleased to see you update this story. I love it and am extremely curious to see how the rape issue will be dealt with. I hope that it won't be over simplified. I don't normally review but as part of my new year's resolution I will be giving praise where praise is due - and in your case it really is deserved. I love your writing and keep doing happy dances when you update - so please continue...
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 04:23 am
Gods, I don't know if I'd ever be able to forgive Draco if I were in Gin's position. Ever. Lets hope Luna, Blaise and Narcissa make a serious impression on her. Brilliant fic! Thanks for the quick update! - The Lovely Lioness -
Name: Sorriane reviewed
The Hawkshead Attacking Formation on Jan 09, 2005 03:27 am
Great chapter !!! Can't wait to see Ginny's reaction !!!