Name: A4LeafClover reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 29, 2004 05:11 pm
Right now I'm wipping away tears as I'm typing this review and adding to my little hill of wet Kleenex on my desk. Once again you manage to amaze us readers out there with your story. Such a wonderful chapter; so emotional *sniff* and powerful. I patienly (well, as patient as I can be) wait for your next chapter. Signed, a loyal reader.
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 29, 2004 02:11 pm
Oh.......I don't know what to think! I wan't Gin to understand Draco so badly, but at the same time Draco was HORRIBLE to her. Argh. . .I've never felt so conflicted. . .well, had such conflicting thoughts. . after a chapter before. Must go sort them out.
I'm terribly enjoying this fic, and please update EXTREMELY quickly -The Lovely Lioness
Name: Sorriane reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 29, 2004 06:30 am
Great story !!!! Update soon !!!!
Name: Applecede reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 29, 2004 02:58 am
Mm. Another fic bookmarked. I just started reading this and have read it all the way to the end, where I'm hopefully refreshing the page. Draco and Ginny's feelings are very real and well done; I think that's what I love best. I wondered though - Narcissa seemed a bit dominatrix to me, is there a reason for this? Or perhaps I've just been too used to read Kirixchi and Aulizia :) Anyhow, I look forward to the next chapter! Great work - well written and thought out!
Name: Blondhunter reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 28, 2004 07:59 pm
Wow, I saw this story updated on the recently added, so I decided to check it out.
I did read the snitch story a while back and loved it, so I really was excited to come across this story.
All I can say is that the last few chapters are really an emotional roller coaster, very much like life. Nothing is perfect or will stay that way, but that is what makes life worth living, the mystery of it all.
Anyway, great job and am looking forward toward the next chapter!
Name: Christine reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 28, 2004 03:29 pm
This is a really good story!! I saw it today when I got on and I decided to try it out. And I was really impressed. I hope that you update again really soon!!
Christine
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 09:44 pm
Oh.my.GAWD! I just can't breathe right now after reading that ending... Ginny is so fragile right now and Draco's desperately trying to make things right again! I guess you really do hurt the ones you love the most! I just love it and I miss you terribly -- oh yeah, I have a job now and I just wanted to tell you that since you were so nice and caring to me! I hope you have a wonderful holiday season *hugs*
Name: D/G fan reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 08:38 pm
Emotional chapter. Thoguh at the end it did give it the slight chance that they could be together again. Even though Draco had wronged. good fic, update soon!
Name: Lady Luck reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 08:37 pm
What Draco did is unforgiveable, completely and utterly. However, I wish Ginny would reconsider him... after she causes him lots of pain. Malfoy's father, who i will not name, should die painfully and slowly.
The writing is amazing. I have to remind myself to breathe at times. I'm completely caught by this story and dearly wish for you to write more ASAP.
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 04:45 pm
*sobs* That was horribly gut wrenching. *heaving breath* Poor Ginny. I just want to gather her in my arms and tell her everything is going to be okay. Draco at least made a step in the right direction - he tried to explain, but she's not in a place where she's willing to hear what he has to say. He's wronged her badly and it will take a good bit for her to listen to him. Lucius needs to die and die painfully and slowly - I vote for peeling his skin off and rolling him in salt. He just had to go make a very bad situation worse by meddling. Narcissa seems like a woman with a plan, but I think she's underestimated the situation....oh gosh this is just so good! I'm so glad you updated!!!!
Name: rembrandt reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 04:23 pm
Excellent! You've updated! This story is brilliant - I love it! This chapter is even better, this tells us there is hope for Draco yet, and he may yet be able to win Gin over, (pretty please?) eh? Love your story and your writing, keep it up and update soon!!
Name: val reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 04:01 pm
i absolutly love this story! im so excited u updated, but now im dying to find out what happens... update asap, ur amazing
Name: sillysun reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 03:10 pm
The end of this chapter was gut-wrenching, but the way you wrote it was great. Really well done - I squee every time this story's updated!
Name: Mynuet reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 02:28 pm
Poor Ginny. And, much as I didn't think I would say this a couple of chapters ago, poor Draco. My faith that it can all turn out okay has been restored, so now I'm just waiting to see how.
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 01:32 pm
omg that was so sad and i really hope things are goin to be ok between them although i dont see how she can forgive him for everything that happened.
Name: LadyEndymion reviewed
Hitting the ground when the Feint fails on Dec 27, 2004 12:44 pm
Oh my gods, what a chapter. It nearly made me cry. You wrote Ginny's emotional upheaval really well and I am glad to see that Draco is suffering. He deserved it. I can't wait to see where you will take this. What a painful chapter.
Name: ombie reviewed
The next match on Nov 21, 2004 02:01 am
hey , i've read "Catching the Snitch" at checkmated and thank you for posting there that you've got this sequel here. so , i check it out , then. and thank you so much. i like it , it's cool. can't wait for chapter 7.
Name: Gawariel reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 16, 2004 05:37 am
You have an incredible style of writing! Whenever I start reading a story of yours I get completely sucked in.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 16, 2004 03:43 am
BRILLIANT FIC!!!!! I just sat down and read the whole thing, my roomie couldn't even get my attention. They are in the most positively squeel in anguish at awkwardness and lies point that I've come across! How could you DO this to them???? It's so well done though! You'd better update soon and get them out of the fire (out of the fryingpan - into the fire) or you might find yourself with a mailbox full of nagging reviews! I LOVE IT!!!! - The Lovely Lioness
Name: blondie07 reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 03:37 pm
oh god that was horrible(not the chapter but what happened.) how could draco have been so stupid and how is he going to react now that ginny has decided to forget about him. he deserves it though for what he did to her!ooo i cant wait for more chapters.
Name: Nakita reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 03:29 pm
Can we say plot twist?!?! Yes we can because thats what this chapter was at least to me. Love it! Bring on more plot twists! I'm all over this story. I totally love it, and anything that happenes in it will be welcomed by me! Update soon please!
Name: Rainpuddle reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 12:33 pm
Dear Draco and Ginny, Sorry, but I have to address you both because this applies both ways. I want you to remember "what tangled webs we weave when we first practice to deceive." Both of you are going to get in so deep that neither of you will be able to find a way out. Now you are both being stupid and underestimating your families. This precarious house of cards you are building is going to come toppling down on you both. I have this feeling we haven't seen the last of Lucius Malfoy's deviousness and I also get this sneaky feeling that something major is going to force you two to have to deal with one another...I'll be waiting in the wings with my "I told you so." Pud.
Name: beckysue2 reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 07:34 am
oh they have to get back together! I need more smut!!!!! ok. Sorry that was really bad! ANyway, i think they need some babies and stuff, so see what you can do, OK?
Name: Shades of Gray reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 06:48 am
De Nial is not just a river in Egypt.....
Well this was an entertaing little chapter- seeing the reactions at chez malfoy and the burrow. I can't wait to read what Arthur wrote back to Lucius and see what Draco's reaction is.
The next meeting between Draco and Ginny should be explosive.
I have to say... this is becoming a very entertaining and well written story.
Keep up the good work
Shades
Name: VioletJersey reviewed
The Wronski Feint on Nov 15, 2004 05:59 am
Girl, all I have to say is that I can't wait to read what's going to happen once Draco & Ginny finally see each other again. The denial of their relationship will definitely affect him in a bad way -- and do I sense that this fic is not going to have a happy ending?