Name: Slytherins Wench reviewed Fire Flies in the Shadows on Oct 25, 2004 07:49 pm

That was a good spot to leave off in Chapter 2. Perhaps in the next chapter you could give us more of a backstory on how they got together, like specific incidents? And more about how Pansy got to be tough. I like the idea of your story and would like to see it fleshed out. :)