Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Broken Memories on Dec 29, 2004 12:53 pm
Is it a boy or a girl? Quite the gossiping type, Gins friends, aren't they? Can't wait to see how the 'class' turns out! -The Lovely Li
Author's Response: those two characters are based on my two best friends, Casie and Sierra, and the actual persons are much, much worse lol.
Name: skully reviewed
Broken Memories on Dec 14, 2004 08:56 am
Hey it's me again. Regard that last comment. I just re-read and found what I commented about. Sorry.
Author's Response: No problem, thanks for R/R!
Name: skully reviewed
Broken Memories on Dec 14, 2004 08:54 am
I like where this plot is going. You seemed to rush things a little, but anyone who has read my reviews or my story knows I"m a stickler for detail. There is only one thing that confused me. At the end of this chapter it seemed like they were at the feast, but then Ginny collapsed on her bed. You have a great story going, and I can't wait to see who else is in this class. :-)
Author's Response: Thankyou, I know its kinda rushed, but the last time i put in loads of detail in a story i once wrote, it ended up going nowhere. You can tell where my plot is going? i was trying to make it a surprise *sigh* I am very bad at this.
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
Broken Memories on Dec 13, 2004 06:37 pm
This is great start! Just noticed you don't hav any reivews yet and I'm thrilled to be the first one. I like how you've set Ginny up with a special gift that will be great for advancing the plot. I look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, yes, this plot is gonna be very fun, and these characters are going places they've never been before.