Name: newfanficlover reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Jul 25, 2010 07:30 am
For this chapter the only thing i would say is you spent allot of time saying how much she wanted to be apart of the meeting and know what is going on. In my opinion just get it down effectively then keep the story moving.
Name: emvee reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 06:05 pm
i like this a lot. i especially like your canon references. for me, they add to the realism. i think you nailed ginny's character real well. i'm looking forward to reading what you will do for draco. please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! Compliments on characterization really mean a lot to me, seeing as I'm really trying to stay true to that and canon.
Hope you enjoy chapter 2!
Name: Jenna reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 03:59 pm
that was awesome. I am really starting to like this. I would have never have thought that Malfoy would be in the headquarters like that!
keep me updated with this story. my e-mail is hazel_angel_04@hotmail.com.
thanks and happy New Year!
Jenna
Author's Response: Thank you! There's much more in store, just wait!
Yes, Malfoy in the Order's HQ. It has all kinds of possibilities...
Happy New Year to you, too!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 02:24 pm
I can't stop smiling! I'm loving this! Oh, and I beta, and would LOVE to beta for you. My address is skoolj@gmail.com if you decide to take me up on my offer. Can't wait to see how Gin handles Draco on his 'tour'! - The Lovely Lioness
Author's Response: Thanks for offering to beta for me! :) I've just finished chapter 2, so I'll send it to you right now. Thanks again!
Name: Tiffany&Co reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 10:08 am
Really good job, I especially like Ginny's character, completely the opposite of bland. I enjoyed her temper tantrum, which was interesting and kind of funny (considering she was complaining about being treated like a little kid) but seemed a pretty logical (if not practical) reaction. Draco Malfoy seems pretty interesting too. I'd say I'd be your beta, but I haven't been one before, and I'm not sure I'm very good at Britpicking, considering that I'm not British...^-~
Author's Response: Thanks! I've tried very hard to make Ginny's character entirely un-bland...she's no shy little girl, that's for sure. I enjoyed writing her temper tantrum, which yeah, was kind of ironic, but I think it was pretty justified under the circumstances. And Draco...of course he's interesting, he's always interesting!
Name: tweedledee reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 06:10 am
this looks good. I don't know what you have brewing for parts one and two but as far as I'm concerned being thrown in the middle seems more fun. Poor Malfoy with the modified memory looming.
Author's Response: Thanks! Oh, I've got plenty brewing, don't worry...
And yes, poor Malfoy indeed...although the looming modified memory might not be the worst thing in store for him. And it's only looming, not definite. But then again, maybe it will be the worst thing in store for him. But either way, poor Malfoy, indeed. *cackles*
Name: Christine reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 29, 2004 03:40 am
This is good, I would offer to be like a beta or whatever, but not so good when it comes to writing I'm afraid. I wouldn't be very good at it, I can only spell, and that's what dictionary's are for. Anyway, Please update again soon!!
Christine
Author's Response: Thanks! It's alright about betaing...got one now! :) I AM a terrible speller, though...lol. My trusty spell check has gotten me out of many a jam. I've updated already, which is quite soon, I think...hope you like chapter 2!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 28, 2004 06:54 pm
Great start! I like the contrast between ginny that she's being treated like a child and then acting like one. We get a real sense of her character through her snit fit. And you've set things up nicely for a relationship to develop with Draco. Cool!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it is kind of ironic that Ginny's complaining about being babied and then she goes off and pitches a childish fit about it...but hey, when reasoning calmly won't get you anywhere...
Name: Mynuet reviewed
From Bad to Worse on Dec 28, 2004 06:37 pm
Fabulous start! I really look forward to seeing more. Ginny's impotent rage and instant recognition of the similarity between her position and Draco's were excellently done. It seems like you could end up with either teen convincing the other to switch sides, or to say forget it and just take off - and that I can't predict which way you're going to go just makes me all the more eager.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like this so far! I had quite a bit of fun writing Ginny's little tantrum...I thought it did turn out pretty well. :)