Name: Losa reviewed The Dark Lord's Lair on Mar 05, 2005 01:31 pm
The idea of dream travel is not new (some cultures believe that the dead can make contact with the living though dreams). You have taken the original concept, added some twists, and made it your own. I love your stoy and can’t help sneaking a look at the “pensieve” in you LJ. Now I’m dying to know what will happen in the Burrow that causes Ginny to break up with Draco. You clearly planned ahead in your writing, and everything is starting to fall into place very nicely. Voldemort made a comment on how Ginny had grown into a young woman. That seems weird to me because he never met her as a child - Tom Riddle in the diary did, and he was destroyed. It’s logical to say Voldemort didn’t know everything Tom did (Tom certainly didn’t know about his future self – he only learned about his defeat by Harry from what Ginny wrote in the diary). If Tom ever had any romantic interests in Ginny, those feeling couldn't be transferred to his future self.

Author's Response: You know...you have a very good point there. Now I'm wondering if I should leave it the way it is or make a significant change. Suggestions? (you're welcome to leave a comment in my LJ)
Name: rembrandt reviewed The Dark Lord's Lair on Mar 04, 2005 03:49 pm
uh oh....looks like old voldie knows what's going on... time to be scared...very scared..
Name: imelda reviewed The Dark Lord's Lair on Mar 04, 2005 03:44 pm
Ooooooh. Very, very scary, for both Draco and Ginny. Draco, because he's been discovered, and Ginny, because of course Voldie's got some interest in her. At first I was groaning at the thought of Voldie finding out, but now I'm intrigued!
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