Are there any more chapters to be found?

chapter three cannot come sooner!!!! :-D

Great story. Please keep going. The beginning of the story really helped to capture my attention. I applaud you. Only thing that I think needs a little work is the dialouge, some of it seems a little forced and predictable. I know that it always helps me to write a scene and then read over it again, and if something is not up to your standards (can you tell I'm a perfectionist lol) then you rewrite it. Usually, at least for me, it comes out sounding better. Just wanted to let you know. But really, you are a very talented writer. Keep going!

Author's Response: As a perfectionist myself, I do tend to re-read exhaustively. I'm sorry you find my dialogue lacking, however I wonder if it might be a nationality thing? I dont know if you are american/canadian or English, but the cadances of different accents may play a large part in changing the interpretation of a sentance. As a brit, I am happy with most aspects of the dialogue. there are a couple of sentances I couldn't manage to express more eloquently, however I write as I speak - the sentance you're reading? Its the way I would say it. Also, please note that it is /implied/ in your review that I have been careless and sloppy in my chapter construction and have not re-read or corrected poor sentances - this is not the case, I am prone to edit entire chapters just to correct a symbology error in the webpage coding, so I feel it a little patronising to be told that perhaps I should re-read my scenes while I am writing them... o.OrnrnBut thank you for your review.

I love this fic and this is my second time reading it.

When can we expect the next chapter?

Is Ginny pregnant?



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :-)

Ummm..... pass.... no idea.

Well you'll have to wait and see, but based on the evidence, what is your conclusion?

You are the most wonderful person ever and I think that you should definatly update because I don't know how long I will be able to function without a new chapter. I love it!!

You have a 'role-reversal' planned? As in you plan to continue this one?!? YESSSS!!! HUZZAH!!! I can't wait! I've always liked this story - the scene with Draco opening the door in Ginny's robe... ahh. Good stuff that! Keep it up!!! =)

Aww so cute! Great fic!

Ugh. I don't like that her entire family is being so harsh...not that I would have had you write it differently, it's just families...ugh!

I'm interested to know what's going on with Ginny as I have a sneaking suspicion that it isn't pregnancy that's making her so drawn and all.

Normally, I don't like to read fics until the are complete because the wonder I experience over what is going to happen is almost too much to bear...I'm, of course, being melodramatic, but that's beside the point, really. *smirks*

I do hope that Ginny isn't horridly ill with something devestating and that this doesn't turn out in some horrible death scene with Draco left with a small infant to care for...or an older child for that matter. That would be awful!

I really am into this story. Please update soon!

hint hint here and a hint hint there ohmy there are hints just everywhere good stuff keep it coming keep it coming

I like!! I'm always interested in how different authors imagine the genesis of a relationship between Draco and Ginny. Your version is lovely - Draco redemption is always a good thing. I also found your portrayal of Bill to be excellent; he really comes across as a conscientious and earnest brother (he made a good argument), despite being somewhat of a dickhead initially. And Ginny, of course, is fabulous... and pregnant? =) Can't imagine how that's going to go over with the Weasleys...

OMG!! This is really good!! Can't wait for more!! Now I'm gonna go read the "smut cookie"--- :) Thanks!!!