What a charming, refreshing, mind-blowingly realistic fic about Ginny's first time. This was so wonderful to read, all, the worries, and insecurities, and doubt. Great job!
Splendid story. I always like to read about first times in Draco/Ginny context, and yours is surely one of the best I've ever read.
i love reading this story.
Wow. This story was incredibly good. It was like an actual story that has a point and a really really good ending, unlike some of the stories I've read that have sex in them just to be hot. I thought that Ginny's character was quite a bit different than I imagine her, obviously, but I have to say you made quite a good character of her. I liked Draco too. I have to say that this story is definitly more real than most. Congrats.
That was a very good job! Very realistic I would say. Even if they are a little out of character, I enjoyed it a lot. Love your writing style!
Absolutely beautiful. Beautifully written, portrayed and executed. A very real depiction of a girl's first time, as well.
How refreshing to read an original Draco/Ginny fic for once where the dialogue is how real people converse -- full of misunderstanding and wounding and imperfection. This is the best fan fiction I've read in ages. Props to you for straying from the usual D/G roadmap into something fresh. The last line is magic!
Honestly, fabulous job here. Bravo!
Wow, just wow. This was an amazing fanfic. As many others have said, it's very realistic, and you made the characters human. They are no longer a figment of someone's imagination, or a person in a story, they've become every other first-time couple out there. That was usch an amazing story.
Well... Since your goal was making this story realistic... You def. succeeded, and it was marvelous!
I really enjoyed the story...but the swearing after a while got kinda boring. There was just so much of it that after a while it got common place...and really dtsracting. It took away from the plot itself in a major way.
That was amazing. Sorry I can't offer much more than that.
This. Story. Is. Too. Fucking. Funny. "Jigga wha?" Telling you how hard I laughed at the image of thugged out Ginny with her hands stuffed in her pockets is pointless, because I'll go on for hours. The thing is, it was really scary because the way you wrote it, I COULD imagine thugged out Ginny strolling along in Hogwarts. My god. Too funny. But I think what's really great about this story so far (and in the first chapter, you're on a roll!) is that there is an underlying sweetness to Ginny that makes everything so much funnier. Like her going on about how scared she actually, really is. Wow. Anyway, I'm off to the next chapter.
That was truely thrilling! I enjoyed the narrative of your story, especially the new experimental Ginny and extremely self absorbed Draco. This has made a mark in my personal all time favourite story, the perspectives are done well and i'd *cough* have to assume what is very near realism. I enjoyed it, well done! Please keep your fans well read..!
The way you portrayed Ginny was hilarious! And the last chapter was so dramatic yet well-written. Seriously awesome job.
You did succeed in making this story realistic! It really is quite refreshing...
Hi there :) At first I found the third-person perspective a little strange after the first-person intimacy of the first 2 chapters, but it kind of works as my brain fills in the blanks, if you get what I mean. And then it's even better. :) Also thought Ginny was a little underfoul in characterization, but maybe it was her nerves. Anyway, thanks for another great read!
that was sooooo amazing ans was not at alllllll cliched and i was so impressed by how you made them real, not just "pretty" people who have perfect sex their first time... yada yada yada. ooooof i love it.
I LOVE IT!! It is such a good story. Keep up the good work!
Wow. That is the funniest thing I have read in a while. Even though I don't like to swear, I am VERY impressed with the creative oaths you came up with. And "that really frosts my vagina" might have to be added to my list of phrases! This is a great story so far!
Wow. That was great. Apart from the spelling, grammer and word-use errors (Wary, not weary. Decor, not Decorum (Decorum is the way a person behaves, Decor is decoration etc etc)) I like the foul-mouthed Ginny (although I do personally loathe the word 'Cunt') and the sex scene was brilliantly written, very believable and realistic. Great job.
i LOVEDDD this story . it was SO (!!!!!!!!!) good.
I love this story. To bits and pieces. I love it so much I recommended it on Portkey. Here's the link to the recommendation :)
Author's Response: I'm not too familiar with Portkey, but just the notion of a "recommendation" makes me smile. Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed. -Mal
I LOVED it! It perfectly conveyed all the emotions and awkwardness of a first time. That was one of the most poingent love scenes I've ever read because of the humaness of the characters. They were real people that weren't perfect and had insecurities. You made it so real...wow...Fantastic job! I really don't have enough words for how good this was...
This is so incredibly well written! You have totally and utterly captured the essence of real characters. I feel like this Draco and Ginny are real. Great stuff!
Loved the argument.