That's a beautiful beginning. I like that Harry isn't put down or looks bad like in many G/D ffs. (I do prefere G/D but I really like Harry too!
A wonderful opening that establishes, what I assume will be, some very key relationships. The build up of Harry and Ginny’s relationship was superbly written; the incorporation of his flaws as well as the good in his personality set him apart from the usual fandom!Harry we see regarding this ship. Ginny’s character was thoroughly explored and I can only assume that she will grow and flourish throughout your fic :D! On we go...
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the prologue, and hope that you like the rest of the story just as much! Thanks for reading, and for the review.
I found your story today and plowed my way all the way through it. I have to tell you it was really a wonderful story! I found myself hoping something would happen and then you would write it just the way I thought it should go.
For instance, I thought that if there was some way that Ginny needed to be saved then, of course, Ron and Draco would be right there to save her, and then Ron could realize that Draco was actually a great guy.
Then, the next chapter, you did exactly that! Wonderful!
And to finalize things, you know Kerichi, she beta's my few and far between fanfics (unfortunately I don't have anything on this particular website yet).
Great Job! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response:Thank you very much for your review. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, and that everything happened the way you thought it should! I hope that you enjoy my other stories as much. Thanks again!
~I loved it. Not fluffy but not angsty. Wonderful mix~
You know what I like best about this chapter? That Ginny doesn't let Harry push her away. What did you think of the end of their relationship in HBP?
Author's Response: I thought the end of Harry and Ginny's relationship was pretty predictable. In terms of plot structure, Ginny isn't part of the trio, so she needs to be out of the picture for Book 7. And Harry pushing her away is the easiest way to manage that. On the other hand, it didn't seem like Ginny to allow it to happen, but she did put up a pretty good fight.
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good start, I'm eager to find out where she is going to go... Keep up the good work!
Great beginning!! I must confess a certain weakness for H/G (I used to be an HG shipper with a weakness for DG...how the tides have turned). In any case, I thought your prologue was pretty moving, and I liked H/Gs relationship. You could have done without adding the cliched he-pushed-her-away-for-fear-of-her-being-targeted-by-his-enemies thing, though. I liked the twins' support, and the interesting connection you made between the manipulation of both Ginny and Harry, and Remus' role, too. Keep going!