Lovely story with an interesting twist. :)

Wow! This was really good! I loved all the history and intrigue. Have you thought about doing a sequel? I would love to read what happens next! But overally amazing job!

wonderful story. i was always faintly amused at all the simultaneous emotions draco could display with his eyes while his face remained impassive. a bit over the top perhaps, with all of their slytherin sensibilities, but the intrigue and suspense completely draws you in. oh, and it's very well written too.

That was long... but didn't drag. A very elaborate writing style, but you did very well with it. Everything was clear and the drama wasn't too much. Enjoyed it. Thanks!

Another one of your amazing works!!! On to the next! But you could probably do great things with a sequel...

that was the worst story...there was no romance! god i only kept reading in hope that there would come lots of chapters where they were together and all that shit. that was so bad, why write a story like that if only for 1 chapter where they are together?

Oh bravo! Fantastic tale, fantastically told. Wonderfully engrossing plot and beautiful development of characters! Bravo I say.

A supremely well written and entertaining story. ...Though it fouly kept me from my work with the aforementioned qualities it bears in abundance.

The only criticism that I have to make about this story is that it had to end. I found myself quite wrapped up in the beautiful language, the psychological character portrayals, and the world you created within the veil and the High Clan and the old powerful magic... I also thought it one of the most realistic romantic encounters between Ginny and Draco. I am slightly outraged that there aren't more reviews of this wonderful story. I hope you've posted it at other sites because it would be a shame not to share such a gem of a story with others.

This is Erised from ff.net but I thought I should drop a review here too because I love this story and how you focused mainly on Draco with the relationship between Draco and Ginny an intriguing side plot. You've created a world out of clan politics and I admire your ability to do that.

Well now that I have my two stories straight...........excellent work!!!! The last chapters were heart pounding in their suspense and the various players agendas finally reveled. The action backing it all up was exciting and thrilling. I loved that Lucius ended up in the muggle world walking away from it all..........and Narcissa finally got what she wanted in the end. Definately one of my favorites. TTFN Kelly