Name: Angie reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 07:27 am
oh, how i love it when fics start stright to the point with smut...
i think i'll head to the shower now...
(great start btw)
Name: tkmoore reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 06:01 am
By all means..........do give yourself a break. Starting with smut like that is completely forgivable!!!!!
More.........Please *grins*
TTFN
Kelly
Name: judimatt reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 05:16 am
Okay...somebody get me a cool drink, a cigarette, and dammit where is BOB when you need one! Great smut, believe it or not, I'm flushed. WOW! I hope Draco went and had a good wank after that, because I could sure use one too!. I hope you continue to write on this. It could really go anywhere, I didn't see too much hint of a plot. I vote total smut-a-thon! ALL HAIL THE P-W-P!
Thanks again, that was a great bit of writing. I like uninhibited Ginny.
Name: stellar reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 05:12 am
this fic actually made me laugh. not in a bad way mind you. like, a happy laugh. hehe it's just cute. :D wana see what happens next :D
Name: janai'sbaby reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 04:56 am
Instead of letting him just get what he want. Why not have her ignore him for a bit give it a chance for character development. I was just watching this movie called "Love Stinks" some parts in this movie would be interesting. then again i don't know if it fits this one exactly, but if you are looking to do another fic it might work.
Name: Chauri18 reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 04:48 am
DRACO! DRACO! DRACO! Sorry i just love this character when he's written seductivly.
Name: Chauri18 reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 04:48 am
DRACO! DRACO! DRACO! Sorry i just love this character when he's written seductivly.
Name: claire reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 04:46 am
whatever may come i do like this (and sorry about the verbal irony thru' out)
it is a little rough. and i don't mean in a kinky way.
that isn't to say i didn't like it; but everything felt... contrived? and darling draco, except for the 'in passing' mention of of erection, didn't seem to have much reaction to ginny... he /is/ a teenage boy. if this is supposed to be pwp then fine; however, if you are trying to expand this into a longer story then please indulge in some characterization. you do have a very interesting start. try not to make cliche.
Name: Q reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 02:48 am
I like it. perhaps next time Ginny could take revenge on him, without it being too obvious that she's taking revenge.
whatever. I do like your style.
Name: Fe reviewed
Chapter One on Apr 01, 2005 02:14 am
My my, you certianly cut to the chase eh? Thats the way to do it, I say. Def. made my day...and made me wet...hehe. Great Smut. Can't wait for chapter two.
Name: MarisolQ reviewed
Chapter One on Mar 31, 2005 08:31 pm
After coming home to 2 screaming todlers an a shit for brains babby daddy. This story is a breath of fresh air. No extreme drama in the future PLEASE! Some of us got enough in our own lives to then read it in a fic. Anyway keep up the smut, mama.
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Chapter One on Mar 31, 2005 08:09 pm
yea well im a nc-17 whore too and that was a freakin good smut scene. i cant wait for the next chapter and draco's turn. hehe
Name: janai'sbaby reviewed
Chapter One on Mar 31, 2005 07:36 pm
Too much smut *shake's head* NC-17 Whore or not you can never have to much... OK! Though in case it gets really bad..... ummm seek group theorpy!
Name: badum reviewed
Chapter One on Mar 31, 2005 07:05 pm
great smut. I can't wait to read more
Name: Emilie reviewed
Chapter One on Mar 31, 2005 07:01 pm
I like this story, a lot. Definitely looking forward to reading more chapters. Can't wait.