Name: Paria reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on May 23, 2005 01:52 pm
Excellent job so far. I just have the teensiest thing that bothered me about this chapter. Draco's shift from being friendly to Ginny to snapping at her was so abrupt and out of no where that it felt really unnatural and choppy. Draco as a whole is kinda confusing me. He seems a bit OOC, though I understand that it works for the sake of the story. Anyways, love your plot and nj overall.
Author's Response: Yeah. I'm working on Draco's OOC ness... It's always been my biggest problem. I re-watched all three movies and have been looking at all the Draco bits in the books to see how I can improve him...
Name: SlytherinsWench reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on May 02, 2005 07:59 pm
Great Story. I love the idea. And Heyer...I love her. Great premise.
Author's Response: Heyer=goddess. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: andromeda77 reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on Apr 27, 2005 07:01 pm
Draco raised one eyebrow in his inimitable (and admittedly sexy) way,
I LOVE THIS!
And the owl with the apology at the end was a nice touch. I was worried you'd leave that horrible insult out on the table until the next chapter. LOL Lovely job!
Author's Response: My friend Becca said it was OOC, and I'm working on not being OOC, so... I might have to take that bit out :( Maybe I'll add it in again later....
Name: LadyEndymion reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on Apr 23, 2005 06:17 am
Lovely chapter! Ginny does remind me of Pen Creed in Heyer's The Corinthian. Anyway, I loved their interaction in this bit and the very end was endearing. I loved that Ginny observed that Draco's conversation consisted mainly of complaints and pick-up lines - very Draco. And just what is Snape up to? I can't wait for more.
Elise
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The Corinthian is one of my faves... Sir Richard Wyndham *sigh*
Name: ivy reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on Apr 19, 2005 06:29 pm
this is the first story i've read on this site, and i love it. i'm hooked. thanks for not turning draco into a creampuff. you make him sound realistic
Author's Response: Awww... thank you! That means a lot to me :)
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Part Two: Into The Woods on Apr 18, 2005 12:37 pm
Captain Castairs *drool* Lol. She has another one, Nicola and the Viscount. Not as good as Victoria and the Rogue, but still good. But if you go to a library or something and search for the series 'Avon True Romance for Teens' it'll come up with TONS of those kinds of stories. Lol ok now about the story!
Draco's switch from being friendly to angry was kind of surprising. I would have like a little more transition. And also when you say 'almost literally jumped two feet into the air', I would suggest just saying 'almost jumped' and leave the literally out. Because the literally doesn't really add anything to the sentence. Does that make sense? Just suggestions! Can't wait till the library!
Author's Response: Captain Carstairs is quite wonderful... I think I have Nicola and the Viscount, too but I've never read it. I'll have a look for those at my library... Thanks for the constructive criticism... :)