Name: stormcloud reviewed Intrigues: A Prologue on Apr 04, 2005 01:50 pm
quite good and intriguing... I was a little worried when you said that it was not betad but as it turns out for no reason… interesting plot premise. please continue

Author's Response: I actually do more beta work than I do writing, so my grammar and spelling tend to be excellent. I generally use a beta as more of a preview audience, so to speak... an expert on canon, fanon, or plot, so they can help me with those aspects...
Name: Marina Black reviewed Intrigues: A Prologue on Apr 04, 2005 12:31 pm
This is a lovely fic, suprisingly refreshing! I really enjoy reading it as a person looking in rather than having a 3rd person narrarator. And to me, this seems like something Ginny would do. I can see her slipping off to find out all about Draco's nasty habits, his shag partners and even his dimwitted partners Crabbe and Goyle! Keep up the good work and if need a beta you may e-mail me: Missaigon1fan@mail.com (Just put my name, Marina Black, in the title. I share the e-mail with my sister. ) Danke! Marina Black

Author's Response: Thanks for the offer! I might just take you up on that once I'm finished...
Name: oak_pixie reviewed Intrigues: A Prologue on Apr 04, 2005 10:21 am
wow this is a great start and i can't wait to continue reading it. I POV of ginny. i like the way she seems to intereacts with the reader. plz update soon!

Author's Response: The Ginny POV will be continued throughout the whole thing, but not as directly... it will be in third person, but third person limited except in the epilogue and prologue... I'm glad you liked it!
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