Name: twiddlekinks reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 18, 2005 10:44 pm
Feisty and Fiery -- I can't wait to see where this goes! Great job! :)
Author's Response: Fiesty and Fiery.... I like that. Thanks so much. Great handle, by the way.
Name: Natasha reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 17, 2005 03:00 pm
I love it!! Who rapes who? What happened to Ginny in the past? I need to know. I must know!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I DID update! See >>>>>>>>>>>>>
LOLOL Thanks for your enthusiasm!
Name: i love draco!!! reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 17, 2005 10:27 am
AHH!! I LOVE IT!! DRACO IS SO SEXY!! UPDATE SOON! you're an AWESOME writer :) keep up the great work
Author's Response: Yea, if I weren't an old woman, I would be on him like white on rice!
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 16, 2005 04:21 pm
ooo, this is really good. you have lots of good stuff in here. i really liked "Ginny had pressed her face into Draco's breastbone during the spinning flight, inhaling great lungfuls of his odor, absorbing the steady beat of his heart"
the subtle descriptions in that line were really, really powerful!
i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. I want to portray Ginny's inability to remain immune to Draco, despite what has happened in her past. Glad you like what you have read.
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 16, 2005 04:17 pm
mmm, i like this. it seems a bit dark thought. of course, you mentioned that it was going to be. update soon!
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 16, 2005 02:07 pm
I just read your reply to my review and had to thank you for making me laugh! That was just what I needed after coming off a long horrible work shift! To funny.
Author's Response: You welcome. Up loaded chappy three about an hour ago and STILL nothing! Boy, some heads are gonna roll on this. Yea, man.
Name: Aurelie reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 09, 2005 03:38 am
Great story! I love the way you make D. and G. appear, their backgrounds, feelings, relationship... Write more, I'm eager to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond to your review. I am slack. Thanks for reading and I am glad you like the background information. It sets up what is going to come later. I just didn't want them falling for eachother over the summer ala Grease. Hmmmmm... Now THAT would be funny. Someone want to do a Grease challange?
Name: distempered reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 08:41 pm
Heh, Draco Malfoy IS sex walking. Anyway, great beginning...this fic is going to be very interesting. I like this characterization of Ginny - feisty and in all honesty somewhat bitchy, but there so much more to her than that. And Draco's still a total punk, but there's something going on under the surface. Nice job so far.
Author's Response: I like to see them in my head like some old movie. I can picture the attraction and the conditioned response to flee that Ginny displays. Draco has long since gotten over his dislike of Weasleys. Well, one iin particular. You will find out more later.
Name: bobcatchik_1012 reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 08:21 pm
that was soo good you should toally wirite more it was sooo good and like it had all the right elements of story so write really fast
Name: Funnykido reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 01:02 pm
I have to admit, the first chap was a little iffy, I didn't like it that much, BUt I like the second chapter MUCH BETTER! Im assuming Riddles the one that raped her. Any plans for when she'll tell Draco? Can't wait until the next chap!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the second chapter better. What about chapter one bothered you? I am always open to suggestions if it can make for a better story. Email me off list, if you like! Thanks for reading
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 09:15 am
I followed your story on AdultFanFiction.com... Love it! and can't wait to see where you take it....I'll review more once you've posted up to the last chapter I read over there :)
Author's Response: *blush* Thank you. I have done a total rewrite of chapter 5 and will post it here in a few days. The problems I have been having with 6 are now resolved with the rewrite. Glad you like the story and have stuck with it through the dry spell.
Name: Q reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 05:58 am
I like the way you write, honestly I do. Only.. you might want to avoid words like "Yea" and "Yep", it kind of dampens the richness of the story.
I really liked it when Ginny was frightened and Draco got curious but Ginny refused to tell me. Makes me all shivery and happy!
Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: I can see where you are coming from, but I wanted to keep with a young adult, still untried, sorta thing.
You think my story has richness? Bless you!
Name: Dahlia reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 08, 2005 04:36 am
This is brilliant. I'm so wrapped up in the story! I look forward to a continuation soon!
Author's Response: I will be posting more chapters in a few more days. Thanks for reading and taking the time to let me know you appreciate my effort. smooch!
Name: Lor reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 07, 2005 06:22 pm
Wow I really really like this!! Keep up the good work!! I cannot wait!
Author's Response: Thank you for your enthusiasm. Did I spell that right? Anywho, I appreciate you taking the time to let me know you like the tale. I will post more chapters in a few days. I have 5 already written and number 6 is in the final stages. Would you believe that this was supposed to be a one chappy shot? Good grief!
Name: Embellished reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 07, 2005 04:53 pm
This is an interesting premise. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it...
Author's Response: Thank you. I have been trying to kill this particular plot bunny for some time now. Little sap sucker just wouldn't go away.
Name: Nm reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 07, 2005 04:52 pm
Your Draco/Ginny dialogue is really good. I thought the chapter break was a bit akward though..too abrupt. Nice job so far.
Author's Response: I love writing Draco and Ginny. They are simply perfect for each other. I can feel the heat each time I sit down to type.
Which chapter break bothers you? Let me know.
Name: imelda reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 07, 2005 04:38 pm
What a lovely chapter! I mean, lovely in its writing, because it wasn't exactly cheery and fluffy. I like Ginny's fire; even though it's doing her more harm than good it's fun to read about. And Draco is shaping up to be very interesting...I like the way you're shaping his interest in Ginny to be more than what I thought it would be, and the last scene was just great--his selfishness has not disappeared, has it? V. nice.
Author's Response: You just gotta love those boys in black!
Name: bellasol67 reviewed
Tumbling Stones on Apr 07, 2005 03:16 pm
So far so good...my my, how will Pansy react to this little development! LOL!
Hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and taking the time to tell me you like what I have done. How will Pansy react? Let's ask Draco?
"Draco, how will Pansy react to your involvement with Ginny Weasley?"
Studies nails in a bored manner. "What about my self causes you to believe I am even concerned?"
Name: Anise reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 06, 2005 03:02 pm
How annoying, you can't edit reviews on this system... well, anyway. What I thought of (too late) is that it all depends, really, on how a rape is handled. I just beta'ed an amazing fic for Mylan (which she had BETTER post here!) where Lucius's rape of Ginny is the inciting incident, and in a way, the entire premise. But it's not... (searches for word...) offensive? It's very hard to handle the subject well, no doubt. Maybe because of that, I personally don't write it. I do think that Tom mentally raped Ginny and I generally write it that way, but for a variety of reasons, I don't think he physically raped her (mostly because he wasn't solid enough to be capable of it. I wonder if that's where you're going with this?) Anyway, your writing seems good enough so that I'm reasonably confident you could handle it. And now I've spent enough time reviewing, and must return to vi and other horrible Unix homework things... :P
Author's Response: *winks at Anise* You clever girl you!
Name: Anise reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 06, 2005 02:57 pm
I like the writing a lot. But yes, you're scaring me a tad bit by talking so much about the awful rape!! Er... the impact kinda depends on who gets raped, and why. This isn't going to be one of those fics where Harry goes psycho and rapes Ginny, and then Draco steps in like a knight in shining armor, is it???
Author's Response: Harry? Ewwwwwww! Never. Draco would never stoop to wearing armor, white or no. I have five chappies ready to be uploaded in the next few days. I don't want to spill the beans too soon. Thanks for letting me know you read. Still loving your work!
Name: imelda reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 06, 2005 02:15 pm
Well, it's a good start, though your constant warnings about the awful rape scene have got me a bit worried. I'll keep reading, though, because I like your writing--the dialogue between Draco and Ginny is really good, and the story's shaping up to be interesting. The scene where she's frozen and then attacks Draco is a bit...overdone, to put it plainly, but you made up for it with the last line. Looking forward to more. :-)
Author's Response: Constant warnings? I have to go back and check, 'cause I think I only put it in there once. I am glad you captured the meaning of her attack with the final word. I wanted it to be a hard hit to the readers, set up the remainder of the story. Thank you for noticing, what I feel, is a big part of the story. Thanks for reviewing so quickly! I just now noticed the story was on.
Name: cuteblondebabe reviewed
A Young Fool's Path on Apr 06, 2005 01:24 pm
Wow. I loved the story. I really like how you protraded the character. Hope you post the next parts soon. Can't wait to read them.
Author's Response: Thank you for the speedy review! Wow, you are quick. I am glad you like the way I have written both Draco and Ginny. I think they are perfect for each other, since they have both suffered under the same hand, Lucius. I have 5 chapters ready to be up loaded. I will do a chapter every few days. This really started as just a one shot, but grew very quickly. Again, thanks for the review and the encouraging words.