Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed A Young Fool's Path on Jun 11, 2006 12:28 pm
Hahaha Draco Loves cherry coke!

Author's Response: Actually, he loves Ginny's cherry cokes!It is such an odd ball idea, I had to use it.
Name: Hajra reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 11, 2006 08:37 am
Well they're not the only ones that need to catch their breath! It was a lovely chapter... I can't wait to find out how they react to the inevitable aftermath...Thank you!

Author's Response: They were a bit wrung out, but are doing much better now. Thank you!
Name: Hajra reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 11, 2006 08:36 am
Well they're not the only ones that need to catch their breath! It was a lovely chapter... I can't wait to find out how they react to the inevitable aftermath...Thank you!
Name: Starfish reviewed The Sawtooth Edge on Jun 11, 2006 07:08 am
I was going to wait until i finished the story to write a review but i just have to comment on how stupid Crabbe and Goyle are. OMG i feel so sorry for Ginny now. If i were Draco i swear i would havehexed the hell out of them but he should have known better than to say something like that to those idiots. Great job so far!

Suddenly i have a craving for a large cherry coke...now who is to blame for that?..: )

Author's Response: Large cherry coke. What's better than that? Don't worry, Draco realizes the error he made. Sometimes our mouths do run away with us. Thanks for the good words.
Name: passion reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 11, 2006 04:52 am
WOW...That was just absolutely Beautiful

Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you liked it. It was a difficult scene to write. Would believe it was harder to write than the attack scene?
Name: Kisou reviewed Puss in the Corner on Jun 10, 2006 09:09 pm
I don't know if you tried to do so and couldn't, but it would be nice if you would put Tom's voice in italics or do something else to that effect. It's a little confusing figuring out who is talking. You might also want to put thoughts in italics because I've had a little bit of confusion about those too.

Besides technical errors like that though, this is a wonderful fic. I keep getting angry at people, but I do believe that's how you want it, so I guess I can't really blame you.

Author's Response: Who are you getting angry with? Yep, when I uploaded that chappy, we had a booger of a time with formating and I kept losing either the italics or the sentences would look all wonkie. Have a new journal writing program now. It helps some with the HTML. Thanks for leaving a reveiw.
Name: scythian reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 10, 2006 07:57 pm
Lovely.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: CharmedLife19 reviewed Chapter 11 on Jun 10, 2006 07:29 pm
Wow. Just... Wow. I have questions, but I can't remembered them at the moment. That was... yeah. Great chapter. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: If you remember your questions, let me know. I would love to answer them. Thank you for reading.
Name: WG reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 24, 2006 12:01 pm
*BIG grin*

More please!

Author's Response: Big Kiss! I have uploaded a new chapter!
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 23, 2006 02:22 pm
may I say, GREAT story.

read it in one sitting, you have a great writing style.

Author's Response: I bet your butt was tired! Thank you for commenting on my style. I am trying to keep this humorous (SP?) while acknowledging the tension. Thanks for reading. Hang in there. Only three more chappies to go.
Name: Adrienne Westchester reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 23, 2006 02:22 pm
may I say, GREAT story.

read it in one sitting, you have a great writing style.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 23, 2006 07:08 am
A stupendous chapter! I really want to see how Ginny and Draco fair out in the real world! And perhaps how Snape would react to finding them sleeping on his towels! :-)
Update soon!

Author's Response: You win the grand prize! You are the 700th reviewer! *loud clapping heard* As our big winner you get your choice of melted Easter Bunny or the Sugar Egg with ants. Draco is autographing your own pair of knickers. Hope the ink don't run seeings how the darned things are still dripping wet.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 9 Morning Star on Apr 23, 2006 06:45 am
I loved this chapter! And I see that I only have one more to read before your updates run out! ::cries::
I can only live knowing that soon you will update again! :-)

Author's Response: I know I am slow with updating, but I hope you are still alive. I am glad you are enjoying the story as much as I am with writing it.
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Tall Mountains and Deep Valleys on Apr 23, 2006 06:24 am
Did Ginny know that Draco had looked into her mind? Is that why she hit him? or was she watching from the shadows?
Such a great chapter! Update soon!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Cathedral Windows on Apr 23, 2006 04:29 am
That's so sad that that happened to her! And I can understand Draco's unwillingnes to stay until she woke but he should be trying to wake her up so she doesn't have to re-live it again!
Great chapter, update soon.
Name: Serenitey reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 23, 2006 02:35 am
this fic is intriguing and very well written. ive just read it through and i thought you handled the rape scene very well. you were graphic without being explicit. it had the potential (in my opinion) to ruin your fic as it is such a serious subject and pivotal plot development. i really enjoy the banter that draco and ginny have and the connection to hogwarts and the trust they began building there. i also like your severus and the relationship between he and ginny. he is actually a 3-D character and done well which is rare. i loved the line from him, “oh shes going molly.” fantastic fic. update soon. accolades *salutes*

Author's Response: Sorry it took me so long to respond to your thoughtful review. It really calms my mind to know that I was able to get the point across without being too nasty about the issue. Severus is a peach, ain't he? Please don't tell him I said that! I am hoping to take up my Snape/OFC (NOT Hermione) this summer. I LOVE writing Severus! He can be such a challenge. You want to keep to canon, but we have to remember that Snape of the HP world is given to us through the eyes of children. That does give us some room to play with his character, but we cannot move too far away from the depiction of JKR. Trick-sie, it is. Very trick-sie, my preciousssss.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 06:02 pm
This chapter was brill! I adored the play -- and I loved that they actually seemed to get along but their characters weren't so drastically drifferent than they really would be. Another fabulos chapter. Can't wait for more.. though I am quite worried that Draco may be better at Divination than he thinks... that last line... Interesting choice of words Draco boy!
Name: Pajama Pants reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 04:36 pm
Just read all of your excellent story to date. They're uncomfortable topics, but you've done an excellent job of treating all involved properly.

The chapter titles are quilt patterns, yes?

Author's Response: You are correct. The story title and each chapter title are quilt patterns. A quilt is made of love. You can take fragments of what was once a whole piece and make something new. Just like Ginny and Draco's lives. It just requires the right stitches.
Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 01:16 pm
Excellent chapter! I can't wait for an update!
Name: Jules reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 12:11 pm
Hey, I fell upon this story this afternoon and couldn't move until I'd read it all up to this chapter! I really like the story and you have a beautiful writing style which switches between humour and drama really well. The tension between Draco and Ginny is incredible! One thing - pleeease let them get together soon, it's killing me!
Name: imelda reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 05:16 am
I really liked this chapter! I think best of all was Ginny's immaturity. "Ewww, Malfoy cooties!" is pretty much my favorite brand of humor, and seeing her with his boxers on her head was classic. It's nice to have an update after all this time!
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 05:06 am
THANK YOU!!!! I am so HAPPY you updated, I absolutely love this story, and I think it might possibly be my favorite ever on here, please continue, this was really great! And I loved the "I-don't-sweat-I-glisten" part, genius.
Name: passion reviewed Chapter 10- The Evening Star on Apr 22, 2006 04:49 am
woohoo!!!a new chapter!! i liked this chapter..it was really funny...just love the characterization you made out of Draco and Ginny..they are so cute together..love your work!!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 9 Morning Star on Apr 08, 2006 12:29 am
I adored it! I read the whole lot all atonce and now I am dying for more. Interesting take on the Dark Lord in the Chamber thing... and I a,m really hoping that Draco will keep his earlier promise... that he will get the guy who did that to her... convieniently this could be a set up for him helping the good-guys. As long as he doesn't marry that bint Parkinson. Great story.. can't wait for more! ;)
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 9 Morning Star on Apr 01, 2006 05:31 pm
Oh PLEASE don't let this be a dead-in-the-water fic, it's so wonderful and I absolutely adore snape, he's just like I knew he was! Thank you thank you thank you! Please please don't stop writing!

Author's Response: Heck girl! Calm down. I know it has been a long time. Real life takes a plug outta my butt sometimes. I am working on Evening Star, the next chapter. It will be the longest and the most involved yet so I am devoting a good deal of time and care to its construction. Be patient. Thanks for the support and taking the time to let me know you care.
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