Name: Gannet reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Jul 17, 2005 08:01 am
I've just read this story, and it's wonderful. Thank you for writing!
Name: alice reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Jun 21, 2005 03:39 pm
Wow...this was a really great story!!! Rather odd (I mean, Draco the cop?!) But very hilarious and refreshing! But...I wonder if Draco has ever worn the tall furry black RCMP hats? I can't imagine that, that'd be just hilarious! ;) But it was really very sweet, Neville was hilarious! I do wish there is some kind of sequel though...and exactly who was really behind the kidnappings?! Anyways...that was a really good story, should have been studying for my exams but I got hooked! Keep up the great writing!
Name: Sara F. reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 17, 2005 07:07 am
I read this story a while ago off of another website and I absolutely loved it. So when I saw that you posted it here, I had to read it again. You did such a great job of defining the characters and their emotions. It was long, but your plot line flowed and it was never boring. One thing I must say is that it ended rather abruptly. Is there any chance for a sequel or an epilogue??
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 16, 2005 05:28 pm
I can't get this story out of my mind! I read your whole story, one shot, up all night several days ago. I thought it was a little wierd but terribly addictive and so I kept on. It was difficult for me to wrap my mind around your portrayal of Draco. A super stud, muggle-loving, law enforcement officer???? It was just so at odds with the way I think about him that I didn't know what to think. He runs out of Malfoy Manor because it's creepy and then sells it, for godssake!! I finished your story (loved the whole kidnapping scene and the ending was wonderful!), and I just keep having images from it pop into my mind. Canada, his brother John, the native american back-drop, pulling a gun because he didn't think to use his wand, bewitching the toys. So thanks for opening my mind. It's just a great story! I'm sad that it hasn't gotten more reviews. I'll be on the look out for anything else you write. Great job!
Name: Adelagia reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 14, 2005 02:04 pm
I don't remember how I found this fic on your personal site, but it's one of my absolute favorites and a real classic, and I'm glad you posted here so everyone can read what an extraordinarily excellent story this is. All the characters are so well-written and well-rounded it's impossible not to get emotionally invested in everything they do. I just love this fic to pieces and am in awe of your writing, from the fluid and often funny dialogue to the portrayals of real, adult lives and emotions. Kudos indeed.
Name: gingin reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 13, 2005 08:59 pm
I am in awe...this story was beautifully done. I couldn't stop reading, and for that I am sorry. I should have stopped to give you credit every chapter for such a great job. The characters were outstanding. The descriptions were out of this world, and the addition of the Native American, and his language were awesome. In short you took my breath away several times......Thank You!