Name: harry26 reviewed
Draco Malfoy on Jan 04, 2007 12:51 pm
I love it, just amazing!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Draco Malfoy on Sep 24, 2006 02:07 pm
~OMG...that is not what i had in mind at all~
Name: Bla reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 03, 2006 12:37 pm
I can't read any more. Its so overstuffed with every D/G cliche possible that I can't continue.
Name: imelda reviewed
Draco Malfoy on Jul 03, 2005 02:38 pm
Oh, no, how awful. This story is great, though. I'm glad you asked for a beta reader; I'm sure you've gotten one by now. But there is so much in your story that is really beautiful...like Ginny's being helplessly drawn to Draco in the club. I confess to having a predilection for tough, super!Ginnys or even coldhearted!Ginnys, but it is a real treat to read your different version of her. Like Glass_Mermaid's Ginny, this one isn't afraid of wearing her heart on her sleeve. Of course it backfired, but I'm still proud of her.
Name: Eden reviewed
Draco Malfoy on Jun 26, 2005 06:41 pm
A nice chapter... and I really like your story. I was laughing out loud at Draco's conscience! "Growth redardation?" haha
Draco was a bit mean at the end...but he will realize he was wrong. Right? He better... He conscience better have been right!!
He knew that lot's of people asked to marry Ginny but does this mean he doesn't know that his father asked if he (Draco) could marry her??
Hmm... I must keep reading! Keep up the good work!!
Name: fallenwitch reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 24, 2005 01:25 am
Ouch! What a disturbing chapter- on so many different levels. I feel nothing but pity for the old Malfoy. He has stooped too low, even for me, this time. I think his ego functioning must be quite poor to allow him to act this way. His id is running wild. He allows himself to be overrun by revenge and pettiness, all the while being too defended to see his true feelings - the very mark of an insecure man. No wonder his superego finally came out with some fighting words for the old Slytherin, honestly! I love your portrayal of Ginny. While she definitely gets the short end of the stick (so to speak) in this chapter, she is the one who had true ego strength - as witnessed by her ability to not only love the git and admit this to heself but also to show him her true feelings in a painfully open way. Naive? Perhaps but what a strong, warm, generous, and witty woman you have portrayed. She not only matches DM in this fic, she bests him in every way possible. I think you've also done an excellent job of foreshadowing, just a little thought here, half a comment there- just a hint, but enough to let us readers know you are aware of the important issues and keeping tabs on them. I have a strong premonition that most of the remainder of this fic is going to be extremely painful for one Slytherin in major denial. The type of emotional growth he will need to go through to end up with the Ginny you've created may just have to be spectacular. Anything that spectacular, in terms of psychological change, has got to be excruciating. This OUCH! is one in advance for the Slytherin. Any fic which uses the word 'superego' deserves at least one psychological review. Thanks for the opportunity to express myself. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!
Author's Response: Wow, i can't believe how completely you've read my mind. i'm afraid of making a mistake now in case i disappoint readers like you out there who expect something truly 'spectacular' when the time comes for them to get together. i'll try to do my best to live up to your expectations though, and i'm thoroughly flattered by the comment.
Name: Obsessed_DM/GW reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 19, 2005 11:36 am
I Adore this story. I have to stay that I loved what you did with DM and GW's heartbreak is soo evident. I can practically feel her pain and DM 's struggles are also quite evident. I can't wait to see where this story goes!! Please give us a happy ending with lotsa angst before it finishes.
More Please!!!! Excellent Writting!
Name: BlueJeanJunkie reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 17, 2005 09:16 pm
The story is, to say the least, beyond exquisite. I don't know how this could possibly be your first fanfic. The plotline is a new twist to the greatness that is D/G and I like how you demonstrated modeling as something more of an art than the usual I'm-dead-sexy-so-take-a-picture-of-me concept in a lot of stories. Well, I'd really like to be your beta, if you're still looking for one. If not, I'll continue on as a more than satisfied reader. Good on ya. Keep up the fantastic job. :)
Name: Natasha reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 16, 2005 10:47 am
I love this story! Please keep up the great work. I think Ginny should show her face now in the pictures...or make Ron say something about her body, (of course, without him realizing its his sisters bosy). That would be so funny. Well better go. Keep up the amazing work!
Name: Kay reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 16, 2005 10:09 am
Love your work and I'd be happy to be a beta if you need one hun.
Name: hallee87 reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 16, 2005 12:58 am
aww, poor thing. He'll live to regret those words. most men do. great chapter by the way. I'd be happy to beta read for you. I've beta read for other people at portkey.org before. email me if you're serious about it. eeh_2006@yahoo.com
Name: dawn03 reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 15, 2005 02:12 pm
All I have to say is WOW!! I love your story and the characters. I can't wait to see what Ginny and Draco do now. At least it seems Ginny's professional life will simply boom now and how will Draco react to that??
Name: jchaser reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 15, 2005 07:29 am
Ohhh..poor Ginny. I know you warned at the beginning but Draco is truly horrific. Another wonderfully written chapter though.
Name: SlytherinsWench reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 15, 2005 04:24 am
Next chapter.....I'm holding my breath......no, not really...but I could. Keep em comin
Name: malfoy'stwin reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 05:01 pm
WHAT IS A BETA! If it's someone who proof-reads (reads a chap checking for errors etc) then yeah! Get at me! My email is babygurl2G19@yahoo.com!
More on D's superego, please. That partcular aspect was hilarious. Sometimes your mind supplies knowledge you just don't use, eh!
Name: Pam reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 04:39 pm
OMG poor Ginny! As much as I love Draco, I totally volunteer to give him a good kick in the arse for our favorite redhead! I can't believe he did that to her! But I trust you, so if you say we'll appreciate it in the future, then I shall anxiously await this future lol. Nice writing. I don't know what you were worrying about, your kink writing skills are A-OK. Awesome work :)
Name: Lili Montegue reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 04:18 pm
I am so hooked on this story! Your level of and attention to detail is fantastic! I love the idea that Ginny has carried a torch for Draco for so long. And although I am sure that it was not great to write Draco being so mean, it's true to who he is. He'll come around, I hope?! If you still need a beta, I'd be happy to help.
Author's Response: Yes, he'll come around, but not after some lengthy browbeating on a lot of epople's part and that's all i'm going to say about it. I appreciate your offer to beta for me. If you could give me your email addy, i'll try to send you the next chapters as soon as i can.
Name: hufflpuff_luvr reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 04:09 pm
This chapter (and the story as a whole, for that matter) is amazing. I am completely blown away by the fact that this is your first fanfic. Update soon -- I'm hooked ;)
Name: ME reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 01:21 pm
OMG He is such a bastard !!! How are you ever gonna put them back together ?? Can't wait till next chapter !!!! UPDATE SOOOON !!!
Name: meeaz reviewed
Draco Malfoy on May 14, 2005 12:45 pm
fregin' awesome! ahh i love this story! I think the best part of this story is that ginny is already in love with draco and he too, on some level, has feelings for her. great job! update soon and if you still need a beta, i'd be happy to do it. i promise my grammar and use of the english language is better when beta-ing than when leaving reviews. great story, again! xoxo, meeaz.