Kill Draco! Kill Dianne! ARGH!

ok I was just rereading the story and I think you should do a side story AFTER this one, about the Twins (G&F) trying to shake off their security with the help of a few things (hint, hint, hint). I think it would be such a good side story and funny!

Sweet MERLIN!!! i MEAN wowowowowowowowowow. No words to describe the ultimate highs i get from this story, and your ending at chapter 16 was positively sinful. i won't be able to concentrate for a full hour at least, thinking about what will happen SO i cannot wait for you update, will be waiting with baited breath Martie xx

great chapter

Awesome! I love this!

i love this fic! :D

I have been reading the story since you started it. And everytime I finish a chapter I get upset that there isn't more. I love this story and everything about it. I love how you threw in the Fleur Bill thing! That was great. I can not wait for the next chapter! Please update soon!

This story is absolutely amazing--even though I'm not a big fan of cheating. I found myself unable to tear my eyes away from it. I liked the fact that you also included background information on other characters and didn't just base the whole story surrounding D/G. It gave your story dimensions and layers that I highly enjoyed picking through, guessing at what would happen next. Your more intimate scenes made me fall in love all over again with each character and then go back to hating them because of their choices. You described each scene so well that I could practically feel your emotions when you’d been writing it. It’s good to see so much emotion in a story like this. Your writing style is nearly flawless (don’t shake your head no). Though I wouldn’t have noticed any grammar/spelling/punctuation mistakes anyhow. I’m not good at pointing them out and frankly I don’t care-I really dislike people who base stories on GSP. If the plot is good enough, like yours is, it should be fine by itself. All the same I didn’t see anything. You really, really did an amazing job. You’ve got me hating Draco, Bill, and Lucius, then you have me hating Ginny, Narcissa, and Fleur (not nearly as much as the guys though), then you have me loving them and admiring them for their strength. I think the only thing that could have been tampered with was the fact that Ginny and Narcissa were so submissive to Draco and Lucius—but you’d corrected that as good enough for me to accept it. Since you weren’t recommended at www.portkey.org I took the liberty of doing it. I’ll be watching for the next chapter! ~Aya(gypsybaby21)

Queen of Cliffies, update soon! Your story makes my heart ache. Literally! Towards the last 4 or 5 chapters there was this queer feeling in my chest, and dread in my stomach. I reread the entire thing, and I couldn't move from the computer. Truly wonderful, and I want more!

0mG! u can't leave us in the gutter lyk dat! maaaad story btw and PLEASE UPDATE!! looking forward to the nxt chappie! =]]]

Its a great story!really fabulous depictions and real looking plot. Cant wait for the next update!!I hope it comes soon!!

Ahh! cliffhanger! Please take pity on us poor readers and put us out of our misery. So many twists so many near misses, I'm not sure my heart can take much more. Let the shit hit the fan so to speak so they can finally get together in the end. We already know Draco wants it so badly, even if he won't admit it. I'm waiting with baited breath for the next installment!

AH!!!!!!! Post again SOON! I'm losing it!