K, so I reviewed before seeing the AN at the bottom. The only thing sites like that are good for is finding out single word translations and the gender of words (french words are either masculine or feminine). All freetranslation.com does is translate the sentence word for word. wich means "fly air canada" could be translated to "mouche air canada" mouche means the buzzy insect, not the verb, please please please e-mail me any french stuff. i would be more than happy to help.
vancouver_rain@hotmail.com
Would you mind terribly if I correct any french you want to put in? I'm bilingual in french and english and i'm sorry but some of the translations make my brain hurt.
vancouver_rain@hotmail.com
Draco and Bill -- both abusive men. And I have a feeling that they're both going to "get the girl" in the end, which is a cycle of abuse being perpetrated as they say, "I won't let you leave me!" That's the attitude of an abusive man. They both are right bastards and deserve to have their bits cinched off.
I could actually translate the passages in French for you, if you want. As it is, it sounds like it's coming straight out of a translator. A computerized one.
Wow I'll save a long review for the end of the story.
Great Story so far!!! Want more!!!
Author's Response: I have decided to post chapter 19, not sure yet when it will be up and running, but it will eventually. Thanks for reading.
PLEASE UPDATE!!! pretty please with sugar on top!!! I NEED to know what happens!! AAUUGGHH! Is Dianne going to go into coniptions cuz she's losing her society husband? lol. and is Draco going to be able to win Ginny back? O and whats going to happen to Phillipe and Bill? Is Fleur going to take him back? Is phillipe going to forgive him? I hope so... The wait is killing me. You know that right? *drums fingers on desk* yep....any day now... mmhmm.... uuppdaaaattiiinnnnnggg now. okkaayy...now. please update! please please please please please!!!
so where should i check for updates on this story? email the response to anothamiracle@yahoo.com
you MUST write more or else i might have to AK you lol. It's bloody brilliant!! PLEASE UPDATE!! PUH-LEEZZ!
I don't know if you read these reviews or not, Its been awhile since you last updated. I really hope you finish this story, I know life gets in the way and sometimes there are no choices. However, this is really a good story, it takes some turns no one else has taken, and I really hope you don't abandon it. Please update, and finish your fic.
Author's Response: I do read this part of the site, it's just that I sometimes run out of things to say, or more correctly, the right things to say. I love reading your responses to my story, and I'm only sorry that it's taking me forever to finish this story. But after April, everything should go back to normal: me writing more, therefore, me posting faster that I've been doing so far. Thanks for reading my story.
ya! i like this story i love the Draco jr thing! So funny! Draco is such a ass in this sometimes, most of the time, i hope he gets on track soon! I love Balise in this! He is so funny, and witty! great story cannot wait until you update!
Okay, I'm sure that life has just caught up with you and you might have even developed a case of writer's block, but I was just wondering how the next chapter is coming along and if its possible for you to give me a rough update day/time?
BTW, I absolutley adore your story. I NEVER liked Bill/Fluer until I read yours. Also, since Fluer is a veela, is Bill her mate? Curiousty and anticipation is getting the best of me... ;)
Oh my God! I love your story! Draco's a little brat, but isn't that the thing we all love about him anyway? ^^ Can't wait for an update!
Oh, wow. This is like the 389,581,2658,2548,215,2105,001 time I've read this story. Yet, I still find I love it. I've never liked the names that people choose for Draco and Ginny's kids, but yours...I love. And normally I don't like Bill/Fluer or Lucius/Narcissa, because people write them so...wrong. You know? Okay, now I'm babbling and not making any sense. Woo! I'm crazy! Sorry. :)
when are you going to update? i can't take much more waiting.
awesome fic so far. Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to read more.
I fell in love with your story when i first read it and know reading it a second time, I have just fallen in love again. this is one of the best stories i have ever read for G&D and I read lots of them. But what I was wondering was why you have not updated the story since Dec. ? I really want to know what happens next.
wen are u going to update the story????
i've always loved your story and can't wait for the next chapter.
WOW! I love your story. It just gets better and better. Keep up the great work. UPDATE SOON!!!! :D
This is one of the greatest D/G fics I've ever read. My only feedback is the french is pretty off, and as a french speaker I can't exactly understand the phrases. If I were you I'd just keep the french out. But this is awsome!
xxoo
Liz
This is just terrific! I laughed so hard when Draco whined 'she smirked at me!' That was just classic! It should definitely go in the 'top ten greatest d/g moments in a fan fic' I mean, if they had it! Bravo! Hurry with the next chapter! I'm extremely excited about what Draco intends to do and Ginny's reaction. There's gotta be a way to get these faster...~Aya
Author's Response:I'm trying, believe me. I tell myself to sit down and write already, then when I do, eventually, I get sidetracked by other story ideas. I also don't want to just write down anything for the sake of having written something, that wouldn't be fair to you and the rest who have enjoyed this story all this time (the major reason why this is the only story I've posted thus far). It's crazy how far I've taken this story already; half the time I don't even know where I'm going with all this, but it's readers like you who have made me want to go on and make Draco's life just a bit more hellish. lol. Thanks for reading, and I promise to try writing faster. c",)
Wow... This is a really good story.. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thank you, and I will.
Author's Response: New to the story? Hope you've enjoyed the 17 other chapters as well.
great chapter. well this shall make for some more interesting chpaters. can't wait to see how the break up goes and all.
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you won't be disappointed with the break up scene I've come up with. It's all part and parcel to the story.