Wow. What an incredible chapter. Kudos to you! It left me feeling..disturbed, of course. The history of Narcissa and Lucius is tragic beyond words, but perhaps it explains some of Draco's weaknesses and faults, growing up in such a tortured environment. Is it just me or does this fic seem to revolve around Lucius more than Draco? I wish Draco's character would wake up, grow a backbone, and think for himself instead of being lead around like an unquestioning dog on a leash by his father. Draco seems so weak and unappealing. He uses women like his father did, as inappropriate outlets for various emotional problems. Your portrayal of both Ginny and Narcissa is insightful and empathic, and their parallel relationships to the Malfoy men is an interesting and unexpected plot twist. Your writing is beautiful, and my level of infuriating disgust at Draco's actions tells me you're doing an awesome job! I am hopeful your next update will find Draco with some new insights about Ginny.

That chapter was absolutly amazing! Really! Just amazing! I feel like you have explained a ligit reason why the Malfoy's are the way they are! WOW! U just can'y get over how well the plot is thickening! I love the turn of the story!!!

I love you writing! Please update soon, we'll be waiting on our seats.

i'm addicted to this fic!!! every time i see an update i do the happy dance XD more power!!!

I swear to god your story in incredible. You have got checking back here everyday just to see if things are updated. It is by far the best story I have read in a long while. I must say I am entirely surprised that this is your first story. You're just to damn good. Please keep up the work it is the highlight of my day when I see that my favorite story has been updated.

I can't believe this is the long fic you've written. Where have you been hiding all our lives!? I literally flew through all 10 chapters of this fic, I'm completely obsessed with it! It's a really great story, you go in depth so beautifully and your writing is wonderful!

I am constantly amazed at the calibur of writing I find on this site. Your story is Very well written. You and put to page such imagery that we are drawn so effecttively into thier world. Your story line though similar to many others in the Draco not knowing about the baby theme you have presented it in a new and tantilizing way. I was also quite pleased with your concept of the history of Narcissa and Lucius. It really explains a lot about why Draco behaves as he does. I don't think that I really have to voice my displeasure in the fact that another chapter won't be readily forthcoming the betareader in me will try to understand the fact that you are waiting for yours to return but doesn't mean I have to like it. = )

I loved it. I loved how you brought Lucius and Narcissa's relationship and past into the story. It was really well writen. I can't wait for more. Lucius and Molly? Interesting...lol. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more. Luke Weasley, the heir of Malfoy. hehe. Can't wait to see what happens. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

that was amazing. great details. the history you've made for Lucius and Narcissa is harshly realistic . i love it.

This is an interesting chapter. The history of Lucius and Narcissa's relationship is a little disturbing, but it does a lot to shed light on why Lucius has been interfering in the way he has. The chapter also made me wonder more about the Malfoy family. I am interested to see where you go with that. One question I have had for a chapter or two, but that you probably won't answer, is whether Bill is Lucius's son. I guess I will just have to wait and see.

Oh My! That was FABULOUS!....please oh please submit the next chapter soon!! I am not above begging....this chapter was just wonderful but it leaves me dying to see Draco's reaction to finding out that Ginny HAS given birth to his children. How he will react to his father when he finds out that he was denied the opportunity to be a part of the pregnancy and birth. And what is it with "Draco Jr.?" am wondering if it really IS his sub-consious talking to him or perhaps some Occulmency on his Father's part???.....hmmmmm....more soon please?

oooooh nice twist keep up and please bring them back together please please !!!!!

wow.. so Draco is going to find out the truth soon? hope so. you're doing great, don't really know what to say in reviews, but you deserve it, so here it is. great job, can't wait for the next, please hurryyyY!!!! =)