Reviews For Sleepless
Name: evidentlylyra reviewed The Trouble With Insomnia on Feb 26, 2008 09:56 am
I LOVE INKHEART ITS MY FAVORITE BOOK EVER!!!!!!! lolz :)

Author's Response: :) it's a pretty amazing book.rnthanks for reviewing!
Name: Hopeless reviewed Pain on Jun 21, 2007 06:44 pm
well this is definitely a different way to write draco and ginny. friends? thats such a cute idea! great story
Name: braidedsilver reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 26, 2006 11:09 am
The last chapters were amazing, the first chapters were good. I have no idea what happened to the middle chapters but they definately weren't of this calibur. All in all a fairly good story.

Author's Response: thank you very much :D
Name: braidedsilver reviewed I Regret... on Nov 26, 2006 09:04 am
"How convenient that he doesn’t wear a shirt to bed…" My thoughts here nearly exactly, except there was a "thank god" in there somewhere...

Author's Response: and now you lost me...
Name: braidedsilver reviewed We All Bleed Sometimes on Nov 26, 2006 09:01 am
And right about here you are loosing me. Characterization started off well, but aside from Ron and Hermione it's not as great as it was. The way I veiw it Draco Malfoy is not one to cry, at least not without a damn good reason. Ginny Weasley doesn't have a knowledge of strong hexes or the ability to transform people into ferrets, as well done as that was. Still I can see how this is meant to be a comical romance and so I accept it. You walk a fine line though.
Name: braidedsilver reviewed We All Bleed Sometimes on Nov 26, 2006 08:59 am
And right about here you are loosing me. Characterization started off well, but aside from Ron and Hermione it's not as great as it was. The way I veiw it Draco Malfoy is not one to cry, at least not without a damn good reason. Ginny Weasley doesn't have a knowledge of strong hexes or the ability to transform people into ferrets, as well done as that was. Still I can see how this is meant to be a comical romance and so I accept it. You walk a fine line though.

Author's Response: thanks...ill fix this part soon... still, clarinetist. heheheh.
Name: ashley reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Jun 03, 2006 03:25 pm
the last two chapter ALWAYS get me..this is like my 6 billionth time readin the last two chapters over agian..lol..its soooo sad... :(

Author's Response: thanks. but if you keep rereading them, doesn't that mean it's a good kind of sad? :)
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Jan 23, 2006 05:50 pm
it has a nice plot to it, but i hope you can deal with a little constructive critisism. It moved too fast. About the third chapter, you completely lost me. I just skimmed through the rest of it to see how it ended. You should try and rewrite it, let the plot grow a bit. Add some more detail and conversations. Explain more about why Ginny feels so alone... her feelings a bit mixed through the whole story. And they were a little out of character. I know you said you did your homework on the latin and stuff, but honestly, I don't check that. I care more about the characterization and the plot more than anything. Not many people are really going to check up on the other stuff.

Author's Response: of course I can handle constructive criticism. I appreciate it when people help me make my stories better. I have actually been thinking of rewriting this, and thank you for the review (and the help) =) hope it'll be better after some changes...
Name: UndercoverQt reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Jan 07, 2006 11:13 pm
That is such a sweet and touching story! i immensely enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: thank you! =) I'm glad you liked it.
Name: doppleganger reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 22, 2005 05:22 pm
i liked it until the end

Author's Response: oh, thanks. alright, I take it back. some people just like all the cheese at the end.
Name: saucy reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 22, 2005 07:26 am
My eyes were so blurred with tears I could hardly read the last three paragraphs. This was really great, I hope to read more fics by you in the near future.

Author's Response: thanks. This feedback is making me so happy. You really DO like this story. It proves that you don't need a happy ending to make a good story.
Name: ~!~Ashley~!~ reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 21, 2005 01:23 pm
That was such a cute story. The last 2 chapters where so sad :( but not everything has a happy ending. I really liked it.

Author's Response: The whole "not everything has a happy ending" was the whole plot of the story. I love writing things where people expect it to get all better in the end, and it just ends sadly, but with a good ending, and not a cheesy hollywood one. =)
Name: Noellecz reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 21, 2005 07:02 am
I am cryin......That was amazing....I mean wow....Great story.......

Author's Response: thank you so much. =) I love it when people review.
Name: Kendra reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 20, 2005 01:16 pm
Not trying to be sarcastic at all. Though I feel if I'm not I'll surely die. Ginny ending up with Harry...Why am I not surprised (why not Seamus dammit he's a perfecly respectible irishman. Not like Colin Farrell at all). However I like the overall plot though.

Author's Response: lol sarcasm is completely understandable. *shrugs* from all the stories I've read, and I've read quite a few, he's the biggest pervert in the entire school. And honestly, I'm not too much into him. Sorry - But think of it this way. Did you notice how Lily and James are like, red and black hair and then Ginny and Harry are the same? Maybe that's some kind of clue o.O
Name: slytherwitch reviewed I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 19, 2005 03:37 pm
This is an amazing story :)

Author's Response: thanks! =)
Name: ~!~AShley~!~ reviewed Hurts, Doesn't It? on Nov 19, 2005 07:07 am
That was sooo sad. With all those people dead. I was playing the song (instead of humming it) that made it even more sad! I was almost crying.... but that was good. Another chapter.... can't wait.

Author's Response: Thanks. I love when my stories turn out to have the effect on people that I was aiming for; it makes me feel very good. =)
Name: secretkeeper reviewed Hurts, Doesn't It? on Oct 09, 2005 08:27 pm
Wow, your evil. That was brilliant but really sad, your a fantastic writer and that chapter was so heart breaking. Wonderful 10 stars out of 5!

Author's Response: thank you so much! i really appreciate the support! I'm trying to make chapter 9 really sad too. =) thanks for reviewing!
Name: saucy reviewed Hurts, Doesn't It? on Oct 06, 2005 01:34 pm
Is this the end? I hope not, it just can't be. Update soon!!!!! I'm so sad, Draco's dead... -Tear-

Author's Response: yeah ='( but its not the end. i have ONE chapter to go! =( i feel bad about leaving this story behind...
Name: Dracosgirl reviewed Catch Me While I'm Sleeping on Sep 11, 2005 06:20 am
Update soon....I am a little confused so I need an update! lol

Author's Response: I'm going to update in October...right now, I'm completely swamped with schoolwork, so I'll update ASAP. ~ Thanks for the review
Name: MrsRupertGrint reviewed The Trouble With Insomnia on Aug 31, 2005 01:34 pm
i love it already just because you have a character named Amanda! Well, that's not the only reason, but that's still really cool! ~MrsRupertGrint

Author's Response: lol thanks! haha. even if it's only because of amanda... =D
Name: Katarina Stiles reviewed Pain on Aug 23, 2005 08:06 pm
Hm, interesting ending. Everyone always assumes that if you take too many painkillers then you're trying to kill yourself... Hm, I can't wait to see how people react.

Author's Response: yeah, usually, though, painkillers are something used to do just that...kill the pain.
Name: ronlover reviewed We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 16, 2005 08:31 am
I like this story. Cant wait till the 22nd or 23rd.

Author's Response: Lol. Thank you. Taking a break from writing. It's actually doing me good...but now I need to worry about writing a lot so my readers won't hate me for not posting...hmm...
Name: saucy reviewed We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 12, 2005 02:25 pm
I want to know more specifically why he was crying. I got a little bit out of what he said, but I need specifics here! Great chapter, have fun on vacation. XOXO, Karisma

Author's Response: chapter 4, hon...it's allllll there!
Name: betty reviewed We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 11, 2005 09:22 am
i like the story but you really really need to update soon!!......Great fic.

Author's Response: 2 weeks, sorry. I'm leaving in a few hours.
Name: popsnapcrackle reviewed When a Ferret Likes a Weasel on Aug 09, 2005 11:13 am
oo-er don't stop!!! i want 2 kno wat happens next!!! *sniffles*

Author's Response: =D I'm glad! I won't stop...but I need one more review to post chapter 3, so...it all depends on that one last review...
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