Name: braidedsilver reviewed
We All Bleed Sometimes on Nov 26, 2006 09:01 am
And right about here you are loosing me. Characterization started off well, but aside from Ron and Hermione it's not as great as it was. The way I veiw it Draco Malfoy is not one to cry, at least not without a damn good reason. Ginny Weasley doesn't have a knowledge of strong hexes or the ability to transform people into ferrets, as well done as that was. Still I can see how this is meant to be a comical romance and so I accept it. You walk a fine line though.
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
We All Bleed Sometimes on Nov 26, 2006 08:59 am
And right about here you are loosing me. Characterization started off well, but aside from Ron and Hermione it's not as great as it was. The way I veiw it Draco Malfoy is not one to cry, at least not without a damn good reason. Ginny Weasley doesn't have a knowledge of strong hexes or the ability to transform people into ferrets, as well done as that was. Still I can see how this is meant to be a comical romance and so I accept it. You walk a fine line though.
Author's Response: thanks...ill fix this part soon... still, clarinetist. heheheh.
Name: ronlover reviewed
We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 16, 2005 08:31 am
I like this story. Cant wait till the 22nd or 23rd.
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you. Taking a break from writing. It's actually doing me good...but now I need to worry about writing a lot so my readers won't hate me for not posting...hmm...
Name: saucy reviewed
We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 12, 2005 02:25 pm
I want to know more specifically why he was crying. I got a little bit out of what he said, but I need specifics here! Great chapter, have fun on vacation. XOXO, Karisma
Author's Response: chapter 4, hon...it's allllll there!
Name: betty reviewed
We All Bleed Sometimes on Aug 11, 2005 09:22 am
i like the story but you really really need to update soon!!......Great fic.
Author's Response: 2 weeks, sorry. I'm leaving in a few hours.