Name: braidedsilver reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 26, 2006 11:09 am
The last chapters were amazing, the first chapters were good. I have no idea what happened to the middle chapters but they definately weren't of this calibur. All in all a fairly good story.
Author's Response: thank you very much :D
Name: ashley reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Jun 03, 2006 03:25 pm
the last two chapter ALWAYS get me..this is like my 6 billionth time readin the last two chapters over agian..lol..its soooo sad... :(
Author's Response: thanks. but if you keep rereading them, doesn't that mean it's a good kind of sad? :)
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Jan 23, 2006 05:50 pm
it has a nice plot to it, but i hope you can deal with a little constructive critisism. It moved too fast. About the third chapter, you completely lost me. I just skimmed through the rest of it to see how it ended. You should try and rewrite it, let the plot grow a bit. Add some more detail and conversations. Explain more about why Ginny feels so alone... her feelings a bit mixed through the whole story. And they were a little out of character. I know you said you did your homework on the latin and stuff, but honestly, I don't check that. I care more about the characterization and the plot more than anything. Not many people are really going to check up on the other stuff.
Author's Response: of course I can handle constructive criticism. I appreciate it when people help me make my stories better. I have actually been thinking of rewriting this, and thank you for the review (and the help) =) hope it'll be better after some changes...
Name: UndercoverQt reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Jan 07, 2006 11:13 pm
That is such a sweet and touching story! i immensely enjoyed reading it.
Author's Response: thank you! =) I'm glad you liked it.
Name: doppleganger reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 22, 2005 05:22 pm
i liked it until the end
Author's Response: oh, thanks. alright, I take it back. some people just like all the cheese at the end.
Name: saucy reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 22, 2005 07:26 am
My eyes were so blurred with tears I could hardly read the last three paragraphs. This was really great, I hope to read more fics by you in the near future.
Author's Response: thanks. This feedback is making me so happy. You really DO like this story. It proves that you don't need a happy ending to make a good story.
Name: ~!~Ashley~!~ reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 21, 2005 01:23 pm
That was such a cute story. The last 2 chapters where so sad :( but not everything has a happy ending. I really liked it.
Author's Response: The whole "not everything has a happy ending" was the whole plot of the story. I love writing things where people expect it to get all better in the end, and it just ends sadly, but with a good ending, and not a cheesy hollywood one. =)
Name: Noellecz reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 21, 2005 07:02 am
I am cryin......That was amazing....I mean wow....Great story.......
Author's Response: thank you so much. =) I love it when people review.
Name: Kendra reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 20, 2005 01:16 pm
Not trying to be sarcastic at all. Though I feel if I'm not I'll surely die. Ginny ending up with Harry...Why am I not surprised (why not Seamus dammit he's a perfecly respectible irishman. Not like Colin Farrell at all). However I like the overall plot though.
Author's Response: lol sarcasm is completely understandable. *shrugs* from all the stories I've read, and I've read quite a few, he's the biggest pervert in the entire school. And honestly, I'm not too much into him. Sorry - But think of it this way. Did you notice how Lily and James are like, red and black hair and then Ginny and Harry are the same? Maybe that's some kind of clue o.O
Name: slytherwitch reviewed
I'm Still Here, Baby on Nov 19, 2005 03:37 pm
This is an amazing story :)
Author's Response: thanks! =)