Do you do the alliterations on purpose or is that just they way your thoughts flow? I'm so enjoying your writing style and sense of humor! Had to mention it again... :o)
o no! hahahahaha, i love the pick up lines...
oh my, this is starting to get interesting!! lovin this story
After reading this chapter I thought I should mantion that my math intructor has a picture of a pumpkin with a pi symbol on it taped to her white board. She is a very strange instructor. We get two essays a semester and we have state [almost] all answers in complete setances. And I think I just spelled that world wrong.
Anyways, your story made me laugh, which is why I'm commenting. I like it.
here i go again... love, love, love, love, love!!!! sooo funny! although Rob is a little bit... odd... anyway, i suppose i'll find more out about that. ha.... ~MrsRupertGrint
Joyous!! This fic is just so much fun. First of all, it's a totally frivolous jaunt in a make-believe world within a make-believe world; it's like we're escaping along with the characters. The pickup lines are so amusing (I'll be checking out that website shortly) and the kiss was just fantastic; Ginny's reaction cracked me up, and Draco's cheesy-nerdy pick up line (which I assume was actually made up by you, and did not come from the website?) was perfect, and not-too-cheesy. Love it!
pls. write more :) the coolest ever!!! and funny :D
bwahahahaha. I love this story. So unexpected and dorky. :)
Yay for dorky jokes! I'm not a math nerd per se, but I'm a band and science nerd so I definetely got those jokes. Surprisingly, I got most of the lingo too. Hmm...anywho, your story is very good and quite humorous. I love where_is_truth as well and your rendition of Pansy is interesting, but a good one overall. I love Rob. I really do. I find it so funny that he'll greet Ginny almost everyday with a cheesy pick-up line. I can't wait to see how Ron reacts to everything. Mwahaha! xoxox
I'm a gerd (nerd/geek cross) so I'm just totally loving this story. It's a departure from what I'm used to reading. It's refreshing, amusing and delightful. I have a friend who is totally Rob (asian computer geek). He's darling, definately my favorite OC in this story! Do keep up the good work! Cheers! Pud
Author's Response: Awww!! I also just saw your comment via cabal email/approval of submission. Thanks for liking my mindspun-nerds! :oD (Do reviewers get a message when authors respond to their fics?)
this story is good. when did you last update? i can't wait till you upadte it again! woo hoo
Another funny chapter, with action too! I particularly like the line, "She was yelling now. And she was talking in italics." Hee hee.As for the pie/pi duality, I was once on a math team with the unofficial motto "Come for the food, stay for the pi." Sad, huh?
Author's Response: YES! That's perfect. And thus, it was incorporated. :oD
love the update, damn ron always finds a way to spoil the moment. as i am typing this review i am looking at the artwork of draco and ginny, which is also on the home page, with 'fire+ice archive" written on it. i just noticed in the picture, draco has one eye that is green while the other is blue. hmmmmm. anyways, update soon please, love your story.
ahahahaha. sooo funny. i love that you are writing about what you know, but the readers know what the hell is going on. YAY! UPDATE! CAPS LOCK!
AHAHAHHAA. I have NEVER read a story with this many technical terms, and understood all of it. *Biology major* But you are uncomfortably reminding me of PCR. *shudder* I'm trying not to think of the oncoming classes as much as possible. Sigh. It's so odd imagining Draco Malfoy as a .. professor. I definitely wish I had someone like him as a professor. All I've got are.. old, palsied, barmy coots that are nearly to keel over with thick glasses and a disconcerting scent of, (of all the things), hay. But I suppose you can dream.
This is really good, I enjoyed reading this. It's original, and that is always good. It also made me laugh. I loved the whole Pi digits thing! Brilliant! Great job, and I look forward to your next chapters
This story is highly entertaining. The nerdy pick-up lines add to the humour of the story- giving it a different dimension to it. Pansy is quite entertaining as comic relief as well. Can't wait to see what happens next. -overall a very entertaining story... Caps
Ah ha ha hah! I love this story. It's so smart and witty. One would think that it would be odd and the characterization a bit off, but it works. And who could forget he pick-up lines?
I loved the "heinie" bit. I had so many people ask me what the heck that was that I started typing it as "hiney." It's not as fun, not as cute, but almost as good. I love the story. You could also do a "Charts and Graphs" section if you chose...one or the other could make a pro/con list or something and show it to the other. It would be smashing. Good show and I can't wait to see more!
“How can I know so many digits of pi and not the digits of your phone number?” hahahahhahahahahahahahha classic again yea i noticed your rendition of pansy was like the story "sick", and i like that particular characterization.