Reviews For The Broken Road
Name: Rylin reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Nov 12, 2015 06:46 pm
I don't know what else to say other then that this has to be one of my most favorite Ginny and Draco's. If anything for me, this is what would have really happened.
Name: alexandriamalfoy reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Dec 14, 2011 12:20 pm
Loved it. D/G characterisations were amazing. Plus liked how you left Hermione/Ron out of it mostly. Really enjoyed the inclusion of Pansy and Neville.
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Jun 14, 2010 01:42 pm
great story!
Name: Cissi418 reviewed 9 :: Dolor on Jan 04, 2010 09:01 am
Thanks for the vocabulary lessons, lol. I am truly enjoying your series, thanks.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Nov 13, 2009 01:53 am
oh harry is kicking himself now and hermione is miserable cuz the dude shes inlove with isnt even inlove with her...so sad but freaking hilarious. i
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Aug 22, 2009 10:20 pm
This was so good. I really loved it. I think I might've originally read the summary, and skipped over it, thinking that I didn't want to read anything where Ginny had already been married to Harry. But then, I saw that you were the author and remembered how much I enjoyed your other fic, "Learning to Breathe" (which was another one of my favorites; I'm not sure if I reviewed for that one, though). Anyways, so I decided to read it today, after misjudging a fic yesterday. And it was really amazing. THis fic completely blew me away. I really loved how all your characters were really likeable, and I liked your Pansy, and Molly, and everyone. I felt like you really stayed true to character. Molly didn't side with Harry over Ginny, which I thought was realistic. And Draco was captured perfectly. But, it was your Ginny that I really liked. She was completely a great female in this one. The fact that she didn't go running to Draco after their first time of sex and demand that there was something between them dammit was really nice to me. I've read a lot of books where the girl runs to guy, thinking that there's something between them, and the guy completely humiliates and blows her off. I'm glad for this change, how he was the one to come to her, and not the other way around.

So, between this fic and "Learning to Breathe", I think you're one of my favorite authors. I'm off to read the sequel now, and any other fics that you've written. :)

All I can say is good job CliodnaHPFan.
Name: Adriana reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Jan 02, 2009 10:54 pm
Oh, Cliodna! You are a great writer! it's an amaizing fic, one of the best I've ever read!
Name: Odry reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2008 08:37 am
Oh, Cliodna! u are a gifted writer! It's an amaizing story!!!
Name: bob reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Aug 13, 2008 06:59 pm
Great Story!!!
Name: bob reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Aug 13, 2008 06:42 pm
Great Story!!!
Name: Draco23 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 24, 2008 02:30 pm
i'm soo glad i found your story. i read it all the way through it was amazing!!!
Name: b_michael reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on May 14, 2008 03:23 pm
I've always been taught that a cuckold is a term for a man who has been cheated on by his wife...not the other way around.
Name: hippoclit reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on May 05, 2008 06:47 pm
lovely fic. thank you!
Name: hippoclit reviewed 6 :: Paroxysm on May 04, 2008 04:21 am
mmm...that was so hot.

nice fic so far! i'm enjoying it immensely.
Name: gidge_8 reviewed 16 :: Revivifying, Part II on Apr 30, 2008 02:30 pm
I totally love the relationships in this story. Neville and Pansy, and Neville's friendship with Ginny show a wonderful, descriptive depth. I love the scene with the parents. Great, nice long read. I love curling up with a good long story, and this is perfect!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 25, 2008 09:14 pm
brilliant!
Name: ElspethBates reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 25, 2008 08:15 am
I found your story and couldn't stop reading till I finish! This is really a wonderful story, the pace is great, your characters are very well rounded, and the entertainment value of your story is unbelieveable... I'm off to see how many other stories I get to indulge myself in!
Name: myporcelainskin reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Apr 24, 2008 07:20 pm
I just read this fic start to finish and I LOVE it!!
Name: Almicene reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 09, 2008 06:52 pm
Oh thank you thank you thank you! For updating the link to the The Broken Road 2! I have been eagerly waiting to read the continuation of this awesome story.

I love how you write - when reading it, you feel completely immersed in an entirely different world, see things from the character's perspective. When I read poorly written material I pay all my attention to the atrocious grammar or terrible spelling or just plain out bad writing, rather than the story the author is trying to convey.

You do a wonderful job allowing the reader to picture and imagine the story that you are telling.

Good luck with your kids :P. I imagine they're a handful, but please don't forget about your dedicated fans!

I can't wait to read more of this exciting sequel! It's awesome so far - I love your characterizations, including Pansy. You keep her in character but manage to present a more mature, more real Pansy than in JK's world, so that I actually *like* her in your stories. Of course, my favorite characters are still Draco and Ginny in your story.

Kudos!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Feb 23, 2008 01:11 pm
I must say, I wish there was another chapter, or a follow up story...this ending leaves me wanting more.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed 15 :: Revivifying, Part I on Feb 23, 2008 11:55 am
I am really beginning to enjoy this story..You are one of my favorite authors, you have a knack for creating a beatiful fun story that develops the relationships and draws your readers in...Great job.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings on Feb 18, 2008 05:13 am
I love this story! I already read it but here I went and read it again.
Name: Alluring_Twilight reviewed 5 :: Prelude to a Kiss on Jan 19, 2008 07:17 pm
Mrs. Weasley's wise words.. Brilliant woman.

I found this chapter rather amusing, especially when Neville said they started dancing with other people, presumably to make the other jealous.

Although, I found their (D/G) relationship going a little bit fast, I guess it's suitable that she would kiss him after three invitations.
Name: Alluring_Twilight reviewed 4 :: Playing the field on Jan 19, 2008 07:07 pm
“Not here yet. Having a shag at home before they come, if I’m not mistaken.”

Ginny choked on the mouthful of alcohol, and he grinned.

Oh, I wish I was there to see that. It gives off a bad mental image though. Hehe.

Another thing I liked about this chapter, was that Blaise Zabini was introduced. ;)
Name: Alluring_Twilight reviewed 3 :: Back Into the Fold on Jan 19, 2008 07:02 pm
“Shut up and get your arse over here now, Potter,” a voice drawled.

Oh, that's a classic Malfoy command. I laughed a fair bit at that. This chapter was hilarious at every single turn.

Another, very well written chapter.
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