Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Jul 22, 2006 03:56 pm
~I am so glad the war is about over. I do hope that JK just skips it. I never really did like angst~
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Feb 27, 2006 05:20 pm
SO SO SO good! What a cliffie, I must say! I read the entire thing tonight, and adored every moment... sorry I didn't review after each cahper... I was too eager to move on. Can't wait for more! ;)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Feb 26, 2006 12:43 pm
Uh-oh! Draco is going to get caught in the thick of it! And why the sudden change in Harry? He hadn't snapped at Draco in this chapter until the end there. Is he just nervous because of the battle?
Name: PenelopeWeasley reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Feb 26, 2006 08:54 am
Wonderful story! I can't wait to read what happens next! Keep it coming.
Name: Akire3 reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Feb 26, 2006 08:24 am
Every fic. that i've been reading has another EVIL cliff hanger, im going to die b/c im overdosing on cliff hangers.OHH, update soon and wonderful job, the storry is absolutely wonderful! :) :) :) :P
Name: inner_moppet reviewed
The Last Horcrux on Feb 25, 2006 10:36 pm
I love this. I've sat and devoured the whole thing in the last few hours and I'm crazy to read more!
I'm wildly jealous as well. I have been working on my first fic for a while and could never figure out how to get D/G together after the events of HBP. Your plot here is inventive and well written. Its really great.
The only crit I may have, is sometimes the language you use strays outside of english slang. I'd have to go back and re-read to give you exact examples, but phrases like "hang out" and "oh crap" seem very american to me. I could be wrong. You are very close to cannon in your tone and I think you are doing a wonderful job, so its a minor flaw anyway.
Keep writing!
Author's Response: About the Amercian lingo, yeah, I know. I am looking for a beta to help me with that. I had one, but she hasn't gotten back with me in like 2 months and I didn't want to keep waiting.
To make matters worse, I am a Southerner! :D So it is extra tough! hehehehe
I am glad you like it though and when I do find someone to finish betaing the last few chapters, hopefully they can help me with the Brit-speak.