Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
One Day.. on Aug 24, 2008 01:47 pm
So.. What is so important that Draco can't stay?
Name: cindy reviewed
One Day.. on Jan 11, 2008 03:00 am
so sad..a sequel?
Name: blubberguts reviewed
One Day.. on Dec 09, 2006 08:18 pm
fuck that was awesum thankz 4 that got me real horney even had a poke
Name: shinobi1212 reviewed
One Day.. on Nov 17, 2006 07:30 am
i think it was good though i think the role of draco was a little to caring for his character
Name: yourbeautifulnightmare reviewed
One Day.. on Jul 02, 2006 02:18 am
hey, this is really good for a first fic! I love the whole concept of how it was sweet but bitter. how each wanted each other, were with each other but not at the same time. the way it was real, not gratingly real but real. good stuff :D
Name: dragonprincess reviewed
One Day.. on Apr 29, 2006 09:36 am
so good! i loved it!....follow up chapters maybe?
Name: ccc reviewed
One Day.. on Apr 16, 2006 04:44 pm
I liked it. Very angsty and sexy at the same time.
Name: samantha reviewed
One Day.. on Apr 05, 2006 08:57 am
wow...
totally in love with this story.
it was amazing.
samantha
Name: Lela reviewed
One Day.. on Mar 18, 2006 09:05 pm
This was ... just barley skimming the PWP model. Then the last words "One day...I will stay...changed it all. The smut wasn't the best, but I felt something withit that I rarley see. You never went to deep into either lives. One thing I wish you would have done, is show emotion more. If she hadn't seen him in months, would she not have been more suprised he was there?
Name: Lela reviewed
One Day.. on Mar 18, 2006 09:05 pm
This was ... just barley skimming the PWP model. Then the last words "One day...I will stay...changed it all. The smut wasn't the best, but I felt something withit that I rarley see. You never went to deep into either lives. One thing I wish you would have done, is show emotion more. If she hadn't seen him in months, would she not have been more suprised he was there?
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
One Day.. on Mar 14, 2006 10:07 am
That was good! You should totally continue it. Seriously. It is a really good one-shot now, but you could make it into a really incredible longer fic. Just a thought.
Name: fairgirl reviewed
One Day.. on Mar 12, 2006 01:38 pm
Excellent story! But so sad....you oculd have written an other chapter ...or maybe this is good this way...I don't know but this was really good
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed
One Day.. on Jan 30, 2006 04:58 pm
Wow, that was one of the more beautiful Draco/Ginny love scenes I've ever read. Your talent is exhibited here so delicately. This had a bittersweetness I'm so fond of with D/G. Excellent job and can't wait to read more from you.
Name: Vicki reviewed
One Day.. on Dec 20, 2005 11:45 am
Oh that was really good, especially for your first fic, but ever so sad. Do write a sequel, I'd love to read one. Very well written and lovely storyline.
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed
One Day.. on Nov 06, 2005 06:38 pm
i thought the story was sweet and wonderful :) I hope he does stay one day... .and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes, although, I'm not one to look for them ;) Amazing job.
Name: ellie reviewed
One Day.. on Oct 02, 2005 09:33 pm
Yeah really great story!! Great storyline which made it better than just smut by itself! Really liked it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Sam reviewed
One Day.. on Sep 22, 2005 08:51 am
Love the fic Beth very good, nice balance of emotion and smut, you never know you may make me a g/d fan one day lo, cya on sat ;)
Author's Response: Ta very much chick.
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Name: Tatykruger reviewed
One Day.. on Sep 21, 2005 01:11 am
Very nice. Very well written. You put emotions. I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: MrsRupertGrint reviewed
One Day.. on Sep 19, 2005 03:27 pm
awww... fluffy but sad-ish. loved it
Author's Response: ♥
thank you!
Name: megan reviewed
One Day.. on Sep 19, 2005 02:05 pm
It was a beautiful little smutlet. Just what I like to read, love between them, unfortunately they're kept apart by who knows what, and it's nice not knowing, and letting my imagination take a little trip.
Author's Response: thank you! not bad for my first attempt, eh? hehe.
Name: Wyvern159 reviewed
One Day.. on Sep 18, 2005 04:25 pm
that was really good! i didn't find anything too wrong with it - no errors took away from the story. it was delightfully written and you should definitely consider writing a short sequel or something along those lines. great job.
Author's Response: thank youu!