Name: jinyizhixia reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Apr 05, 2018 08:30 pm

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Name: Ella Not Lotte reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Sep 06, 2009 07:06 am

This essay made me laugh out loud. My sister can attest to that, and she can also attest to how annoying I am sitting in front of the computer and reading out large chunks of the paragraphs and going "Yes! YES! This person UNDERSTANDS!" like a total nutcase.

Of course, before you misinterpret my laughter, I laugh when I strongly agree with something. It's the "Oh, I'm so glad that this person makes sense" laugh.

Either way, I thought that this was brilliant. Maybe it's not the most pivotal essay on mechanics in fanfiction that will ever be written, but it makes sense and goes over the general rules of mechanics. Yay!

Name: Sophinna reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Feb 14, 2006 09:15 pm

Very, very good...

Name: Shattered_Dreams (but I'm not logged in) reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Oct 23, 2005 07:51 pm

I totally agree and would like to add, people please use a dictionary. Please do not try to sound more intelligent than you are without first consulting with Webster. For example, "Ginny was uxorious when it came to her mum" makes no sense! Yes, I did jack that word from the author who wrote these guidelines that I am reviewing for and I have used it in vain so now I'm going to make up for it; the following could be a proper usage: "Lucius is anything but uxorious." The dictionary is your friend. That is all.

Name: bellasol67 reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Oct 11, 2005 08:30 am

Let me start by saying I am not a writer, just a grateful reader. I agree with most of what you wrote, the icing on the cake being author notes in the middle of a story...that drives me bazooka (even more than slang, Americanisms, Netspeak, etc) and when I come upon that I just stop reading. Anyway, nice essay.

Name: Maelyn reviewed Part One: Mechanics on Oct 11, 2005 04:28 am

Thalia- thanks for this. Could you lend suggestions on finding a beta? I have asked a few people but no one has been able to help. It would be a great help to some of us who don't know many people here but don't know how to go about finding a beta as well.

Author's Response: I know of many sources on livejournal, if you are at all involved in that. Included is the community http://www.livejournal.com/~hp_beta. Another place to look is the Writer's Corner section of Fictionalley Park on Fictionalley.org. A good source for canon information is the indispensable HP Lexicon.