Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Goodnight on May 02, 2008 02:41 pm
I am not sure about this story, not enough character development and I still believe it is moving too quickly, there is no background or solid basis. There seems to be way too much angry from everyone, and for me, imo, the story moves around too much with it being "told" in a rather odd way. Like, it isn't flowing from the characters itself but rather "another person from the outside" and it just seems odd to me. I am sticking with the story though, because I think that you have a nice PLOT idea, you just need it developed a bit more. I am rooting for this story!
Name: anonymous reviewed
Goodnight on Nov 10, 2005 01:05 pm
please continue =)
Author's Response: For sure :)
Name: me reviewed
Goodnight on Nov 07, 2005 02:20 am
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: dracosnaughtyprefect reviewed
Goodnight on Nov 06, 2005 06:01 pm
very cool story, I am enjoying it so far
Author's Response: Thanks loads, that means a lot since I see you're a pretty accomplished writer on here :)
I absolutely love 'One Last Wish'!
Name: daisymama reviewed
Goodnight on Nov 06, 2005 05:30 pm
I like your story....some of my favorite stories are the ones that start after the events of HBP! Can't wait to see what's going to happen in yours!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah mine too! I don't particularly like it when people pretend certain events don't happen, just to suit their ships' needs. A proper ship can endure any event J.K. throws at it!