Name: Night_Merr reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Aug 14, 2007 10:16 pm
Whoaa! I love it, and I really wanna know what happens next... Please update!!
Name: Dorthey Star reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 09, 2006 09:21 am
Silly Draco..doesn't he see that the girl is Ginny? That's what the chamber of secrets dream is all about :)
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 08, 2006 06:13 pm
This is very sad. Very, very, very sad. I hope they end up together or else I'm going to cry and god knows I've been doing enough of that lately...
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 10:38 am
I adore this story... Really I do. Do you have plans on making it like 30 chapters... or are we going to see some resolution anytime soon... AND you MUST be joking about Patil? PLEASE say it's just a bad guess for Draco... ICK! Can't wait for more! ;)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 06:43 am
This story sucks! and not because it's not written well, but because Draco and Ginny love each other and are meant to be together but they can't ::cries::
I was really hoping that the snakes/parsel tongue thing pointed to Ginny because she was possessed by Tom Riddle.
Oh how you torment me!
If Draco and Ginny don't get back together then you absolutely have to tell me because I will stop reading this fic now! I can't watch them date other people! It's painful!
my e-mail is kaitlynsanzo@yahoo.com
I await your next update with a hopeful heart. :-)
Name: cassie reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 02:23 am
awwww poor draco!!! he's suffering so much! at least ginny can freely choose a man she likes (coz she only loves draco) but draco doesn't, even if he does come to like his intended. or parvati. whatever. sigh. though i can totally understand what ginny is going through but seriously, it's easier for ginny. she has a lot of distractions, a lot of options, brought up having a good and happy family. while draco, there's nothing much in his life really but his friends, his mother, all death eater-ish activity growing up, and ginny. :( i cry a river for draco. :'(
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
The Death Wish of Colin Creevey on Mar 07, 2006 12:30 am
Hmm, I think the dream probably had more to do with having siblings that looked alike rather than identical twins simply because I'm quite positive that Draco and Ginny will end up together in the end...because, if they don'tl...well, let's just say that fanfic readers are very vindictive...lol.
Anyhow, it's time for constructive criticism. Most, if not all, of the places where an apostrophe should appear there is instead an equals sign...something that probably should have been cleared up when you previewed the fic or had it betaed. There are several silly spelling errors, but those happen to the best of us even when the story is betaed. Also, from what I understand, disclaimers should be posted at the top of every chapter. I've been informed by several writers that they find this unnecessary and tedious, but it isn't really a question of literary merit, but a nod to the Gods, if you will. It is simply saying, "Yes, I know I don't own this, but another brilliant woman does." I'm sure that if you were in her place, your billions of dollars would soften the blow but you would probably still be slightly irked that people weren't giving you credit where credit was due.
It was a brilliant chapter, and I hope my piece of constructive criticism hasn't made you feel otherwise. I will continue reading the story because I feel it is well written and original.
Author's Response: ok, something must've happened when I uploaded the chapter because I had a disclaimer and i went through the entire chapter changing the punctuation. Oh crap, this means i have to do this again.