Name: flame_kitty reviewed Questions on Nov 25, 2005 05:13 pm

I agree, a great chapter. Update soon! and add more meat to the storyline! Add more descriptive-ness!

Author's Response: I have written chapters four and five and chapter four should be up soon if it gets accepted (fingers crossed). When writing chapter six so on i will try and put more description in, thanks for the advice i do find it really helpful! :)