Name: flame_kitty reviewed Taking Chances on Nov 26, 2005 12:52 pm

Yay!! You updated twice in a couple of days!! I still like this story but I'm still sitting here wishing it was even more descriptive, like when you wrote about Malfoy falling you could have said that a startled look crossed his otherwise expressionledd face as his feet went out from underneath him and he fell to the ice, taking Ginny with him. Sorry if that's forward, i just want to help out a bit.

Author's Response: No I really like it when people give me comments like that, it does help a lot! I am not so sure the next chapter is very descriptive, but there is nothing I can do about that as it has been submitted. I am now writing the 5th chapter and i will definitely try and put a lot more desciption in!