Name: flame_kitty reviewed The Great Hall on Mar 23, 2006 01:47 pm

A very short chapter. It was wanting in more than length. This isn't really a full chapter it seems, it has no real sustanace. Perhaps important Plot points, but a bit longer of chapters would be preferable.

I think it's worth while to wait a little longer for a chapter in order to have it be a bit longer :-)

Author's Response: Yeah, short chapters are a bad habit of mine. I take so long to write that I want to post as soon as I reach a decent stopping point.